801

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

One Bad Night

One bad night in a bad hotel called Apathy.

In a room with all sorts of people you didn’t want to see.

There were all these  flash looking  people hanging around.

Friends of evil under a spell.

Devils water from a bottomless well.

A big marketplace where apprentices abound.

Show any weakness they will crush you into the ground.

Under the brightest of lights their shadiness shone.

Laughing at the people trampled on.

The only ones praying were those preying on the vulnerable and the poor.

Watch out for the people on the door.

They will steal your wallet before your feet hit the floor.

In the middle of summer.

The city’s cold heart attracting more.

Preachers shouting from pulpits.

How can we  make money if we don’t exploit the poor.

In a city called Hell.

One bad night in a bad hotel called Apathy.

A mercenary army looks the other way.

As a rich mans money paves their way.

A lust for gold.

A poor child’s soul just been sold.

In a city called Hell.

One bad night in a bad hotel called Apathy.

In the light of day.

In a tomorrow that can’t come too soon.

I will be far away from here.

Looking for people who are kind and sincere.

No longer under attack.

Or with knives in my back.

An absolute place of honesty.

An obscure place.

Full of sunshine.

Full of shining lights for the human race.

Like the light from the sun.

May goodness cover everyone.

802

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cheers Phill

Now I know where you get Jumping The Broomstick from very interesting. Using the interweb I looked up that song Lets Jump The Broomstick and this is what I found out.

"Let's Jump the Broomstick" is a song written by Charles Robins and performed first by a black Nashville group, Alvin Gaines & The Themes, in 1959, then covered that year by Brenda Lee. Her version reached No.12 in the United Kingdom in 1961. Song attached first time I remember hearing it is today but maybe others have memories of it on here.   
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLFmHpa0m4A


I also found this on interweb about the history of jumping the broomstick.


Like many traditions, the history of jumping the broom at a wedding ceremony is complicated and difficult to trace back to one single source. Some believe the practice originated in the early 1700s in Wales, when broomstick weddings served as a Welsh marriage rite for Roma communities who were not permitted to marry in churches. In this execution, the broom was placed at the threshold of a door, and the groom jumped first, followed by his bride. The practice grew in popularity over the decades, and by the turn of the century, was quite common. It may even serve as the original inspiration for the “carrying the bride over the threshold” tradition we see practiced by modern couples of all cultures today.

Another theory is that jumping the broom originated in West Africa, in the region now known as Ghana. It’s believed that in this practice, the broom cleansed the marriage ceremony of evil spirits and represented the couple’s commitment to caring for and maintaining their newly shared home (and, metaphorically, their marriage). In some cases, the couple would both jump the broom, and whoever was observed as jumping the highest would be given the role of decision maker for the home.  The practice is thought to have eventually made its way to the American South as a result of the transatlantic slave trade. Another theory for how this practice became implemented by African Americans is through cultural exchange with poor white American southerners, many of whom were direct descendants of British islanders who practiced broom-jumping as a legal wedding alternative, as described above.

803

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cheers Jim
I remember reading a novel a few years back written by Alex Haley called Roots in that book the early slaves got married in ceremony of jumping the broom. Reading Phill’s wonderful lyrics at that point of the song made me think of that book. Though I am not sure if Phill’s  use of the metaphor for getting married  in the lines  my folks jumped the broomstick.at the end of a gun came out of that historical context. I was born only a few months after my parents got married and it was only after I became a young adult that I realized what my relations meant when they said to me , my mum and dad jumped the broomstick when they got married. I agree with you Jim that’s the beauty of the poetry of lyrics its words can often be  interpreted or conjure up all sorts of different images for the reader or the listener.     

804

(1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

A chap I know he plays piano has been taking singing lessons recently he now has this whole new good way of using his voice. Good one Beamer.     

805

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cheers Phill . Brian when he sent me the line ` ive been dealt this hand and that's alright by me``, my thoughts immediately conjured up these lyrics  Some people need two blankets. I just need one.  Then when you added  the lyrics below, to the song that is when we had a good platform that started us on a journey to find a good story to go with it



Some live in the moonlight.

I live in the sun.

my folks jumped the broomstick.

at the end of a gun.

They tied the knot.

and then he ran.



The songs story grew naturally from there with us three throwing lyrics around. Then with your talented facilitation doing the tidying up of all of our lyrics plus composing the music backing it all came together real good. I am real pleased with way the song came out .

Thank you Phill and Brian for making me part of this project. It would be good to see and hear Brian doing some song projects with other people on chordie.



Jim, thank you  for taking the time to make a comment and have a listen and checking out the video.

806

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is a song written by Easy Beat,  Phill Williams and myself. I hope the video does the song justice.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FSdwJ-cC8JA

807

(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Congratulations Jim.  I am sure you would have impacted many students over the years in good and  positive  ways. Now your teaching and coaching river has run its course an ocean of new possibilities is opening up to you. No doubt in time, some of those  past reflections in the mirror of calm waters ahead will help you create some real good songs.

808

(14 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf that guitar of yours has got a beautiful tone and you sing and play Rexs Blues real good. I liked your spoken intro, introducing the song also.

809

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff that's got a good flow to it  and lyrically bang on.

810

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

TIGLJK wrote:

Paul McCartney or John Entwistle,  of course.

Cheers Jim
I think John Entwistle is busy making music with Doctor John and Stevie Ray Vaughn all who are not answering their phones at the moment so we might have to make do with Paul McCartney. It will be wonderful to see Paul working with Ringo again. Now I am wondering would a  band called Wanted  Dead Or Alive be an appropriate name for Phills new group.????     

811

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Mojo     

812

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Jim for taking the time to comment and have a watch and listen. It would be a real good rockn the blues band with Phill Williams, Stevie Ray Vaughan and maybe Billy Gibbons on guitars. Though it might be hard getting Stevie there due to the helicopter accident, We would also need another tricky person to get in, on piano considering where he is now  that person is Doctor John. To give the sound a different edge maybe Ringo on drums. Maybe Booker T , Jones on Organ. Who do we get to play bass  that  could be tricky.????????????     

813

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Here is Phill Williams rockn the blues on a song we wrote together called Taking My Time. Its an absolute privilege to have Phill share his considerable talents with me on this one. I just hope the video does the song justice. Phill's vocals and guitar on this are superb with the bass and organ plus the drums pushing it along nicely.  Love to hear your comments on this good or bad.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqL7Fgsq6i8 

814

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good lyrics EB.     

815

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Beamer interesting version.     

816

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hippy girls that takes me back  a few decades crazy wild girls living in broken down houses or squats  partying.  I knew many who are settled down old ladies  now living  conventional life's. Never went out with any as a boyfriend but had some wild times I tended more towards the conventional type of gal.     

817

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I enjoyed that Jim.     

818

(28 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Riversdale lets rock on, Here is Phill doing an accordion sound on a song..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6UHHcYdko8A

819

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff I like these words in your song very clever.

Why does it seem

Some strings like to

Stray a little out

Kind of like me     

820

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Phill

There is a lot of music out there. Fighting my way through all  those different genres means I can’t really nowadays call myself a folky a rocker or whatever. One genre I can’t get into when I am at home is disco. There have been times when my brain has been at half mast after a few strong beverages that I have hit the dance floor. Now that is not a pretty sight me dancing even worse is I have been spotted partying and dancing to disco music.

EB

I think people writing songs who are chasing a hit on popular outlets like  radio rely too much on tried and true formulas or get stuck in the trendy commercial thing decided by marketers. That is why I don’t listen to radio much in recent times.     

821

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Recently in conversation about music people have been talking about the length of songs many saying two to three minutes should be the max. To me that's like saying I've got a short attention span and can't take any more. I really think that songs length doesn't matter as long as it fits with what it's trying to say. Recently I listened to Bob Dylan's , Murder Most Fowl which I think is a brilliant epilogue to President Kennedys assassination. Many say it is a silly rant that takes too long but to me it tells it well and the length is appropriate. I suppose with Bob you either hate or love him. What do you think. For me Bobs song Murder Most Fowl  is more than just a song about the killing of President Kennedy,  To me it is also a 17 minute piece about the passing of an era and a time in history that many around my age grew up in. 

822

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff your song got a lot going for it and you play guitar and sing better than I can. There is a lot of love for a special lady and a special home  environment  that's what makes your song  give of the warm fuzzy's of joy and love in the family nest..     

823

(28 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Good photos Jim and Graham I have never been able to figure out how to post photos on chordie modern tech is beyond me.. smile     

824

(17 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I was thinking or is that finking , finger and thumb could be good rhyming slang for strum.
I was finking about grabbing my arf a dozen string machine and having a finger and thumb. That might confuse things the change of language when ordering a finger and thumb ( Rum) at the bar.

825

(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Jai did an awesome job playing piano and the combination of you two worked perfectly on an excellent song.