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(23 replies, posted in Poems)

easybeat wrote:

My goodness Pete you captured that all so well,brilliantly written.
you left out the part about trepidation and knocking knees.
a big pat on the back to those of you  who perform live,i don`t know how you do it.

Brian now you have had your poetry performance baptism it will come as just another thing you do. You have always been a natural showman in public. I can see you and Nigel becoming renowned  performance poets.     

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(23 replies, posted in Poems)

Dirty Ed wrote:

Poetry about a poet - how poetic!

I like the way you describe  the "fishing net made of words drawing his audience into his boat".

Cheers Ken  I am not that poetic with words but I hope at least the words I use paint an entertaining  picture of what is happening in that place and time.     

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(6 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Love that live performance Ken.  The soundcloud very clever adlib talking by John a enjoyable fun listen..     HAPPY BIRTHDAY KEN.

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(23 replies, posted in Poems)

I received a video of the last poem Easybeat  did at a live poem reading sent to me by one of the audience. He had to read poems of his published in a book. Here is a poem  I just wrote about that.
                             First Time Up

Many forget how significant they are.

No matter what path life deals.

Or how it feels.

Every story told has a lesson.

Good bad sad.

It takes a book with two of his poems.

Spoken in a bar.

First time ever.

In front of a crowd.

He picks up his lines.

Spoken in short time.

Lines about a significant part of his lifetime.

His words can make their choice of liquid just another spectator.

Not an important player in the game they thought they came to play.

Liquid wetting their whistles and opening their ears.

Maybe those listening  haven’t been there.

Until now his life experience wasn't theirs.

It wasn’t part of their time.

Now it is.

In a small part of an hour.

You wont hear a pin drop.

His words have power.

A magnet.

A fishing net.

Fishing net made of words.

Drawing his audience into his boat. 

The silence is broken when his voice stops.

Their palms connect beating a rhythmic thanks.

Out of their mouths come cheers of approval.

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim excellent lyrics and the wisdom is what I believe what all the younger generation should hear and think about.     

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beamer I like the new lyric setup.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff that is  a good "home is where the heart is song". My 100 year old mum left her birth home, the little Island of Ovalau over 80 years ago as a young woman and she still gets times of homesickness for that place and its lifestyle.

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(2 replies, posted in Poems)

Good one Beamer this song resonates with me as in the last three  weeks or so, three people I know have died due to their excessive drinking. That first verse could have been a good opening paragraph when writing about their life's. The last verse could also be in their life story as their families all tried to help them stop drinking themselves to death.     

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(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Ken I think it is important that the history of a country is kept alive in ways that people can take in easily. Not only because it is  entertainingly interesting and informative but also so they can realize what  people had to endure or go through in times past .
Your song does this in a perfect way folk music at its best.

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill Williams wrote:

Shwmae Pete?

To be honest I never suffered with night terrors. I used to play in a band where the other guitarist, John, used to be a big fan of horror books, movies and songs as well as the Beatles...good old days! It began as a single line which I thought would be a arty nonsense poem.


I've uploaded the recording to SoundCloud and the link is to be found in MY BAND AND ME. I think?

kei te pēhea koe Phill?  I'm good He pai au
That recording vocals and everything about the music has turned out real good. I could imagine Carlos Santana doing a Latino cover of your song.

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill reading those lyrics I was instantly  transported back to my childhood. We would spend a bit of time out in the wilds and night time for me as a child would send my imagination flying and I would spend many a night in my sleeping bag terrified by the sounds and  tree shadows cast by moonlight in the night. I look forward to hearing you do it as a song.

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Ken kids here in NZ would love that song.     

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill has got this song going good and his exceptional talents are building this into a good piece of music. My Maree is the Queen of running behind or being late as they jokingly say here, "She will be late for her own funeral." Though that might be a Greek thing being late when I was up in Greece nobody seemed to be on time for meetings or  whatever. Siga siga is a common saying in Greek slowly slowly. Wasn't it  the Turtle that won the race against the Hare? All good things take time.

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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Ken you have done Jim's song real good showcasing it like a real pro.. It almost felt like John Denver was doing it.

I will attach  a couple videos of John Wells who lives in the desert of Brewster County South West Texas. First one showing the snow something no one would have thought you would see down there, The second video is him reciting a poem of why he likes living away from the crowds.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACGHfDNEJQ4

Next  poem video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwDoLYrMRIw

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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great poem Jim about letting those thoughts escape their prison to the big wide world of thought.     

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Brian if you run out of ink.
I will turn to drink.
Oh man .
That wasn't my plan.
To write words that stink.     

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(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Dirty Ed wrote:

Those are three good choices for songwriters Peatle. For me it's Willie Nelson, James Taylor and David Mallett. If they were still alive I would have picked Merle Haggard, John Denver and Townes Van Zandt. Do you have any songs that you consider to be a "roadmap" of how a great song should be written? And if you do, why?

That is a hard question for me to answer Ken a stand out song for me  a real classic if you like would be American Pie by Don Mclean. I like that notion of once Buddy Holly  died  the rock and roll  pie went with him. Everything had dried up as in a bad summer drought. The world changed and  America  as a result which I am sure is fantasy but still a great picture in a song. The lyrical images in Dons song are great with a verse that is very sing-able but not in catchy pop jingle way, Folk music at its best  it has a bit of a nostalgic view of history we all know and a a great chorus with a sentiment about a loss of way of life...

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(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf wishing you all the very best for the future now that those tough years have past. Sorry about the pain of your loss and also the rubbish the government system has thrown  at you.

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(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

The three songwriters I would love to sit down with and have a music session with are Paul Simon, Paul McCartney, and Bob Dylan. I can't write like anyone real good so I just do my thing and hope for the best.     

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(24 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Here are my uneducated thoughts on rhymes in songs. I wish I could write more lyrics that rhyme I admire people that can do that. The repetition of similar sounds  creates patterns that are catchy or pleasing to peoples  ears. The alternating stressed and unstressed patterns in lyric lines create a rhythm that propels many well known song into our heads’ if that is good or bad I have no strong opinions on that. My songs and poems are mostly me writing as I talk and as a result means that in most cases they would never be likely to be top of the charts listening material.  What I think does help is when someone with a good voice and musicality like  Phill Williams can take my lyrics put them in a good order then add a chorus which does something that makes a song flow into  peoples ears better.     

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(24 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill Williams wrote:

Rhymes I don't think are necessary in more serious or academic songs. The purpose of a song is to get a story across with, hopefully, a good tune. One without the other doesn't work, to me at least. I've heard my kids rave about a song that is tuneless, in my opinion, and they say listen to the words! No! The most memorable songs have the whole package.
Pete's words were brilliant, I just hope my part in the project did them justice!

Thank you Phill you did a brilliant job on the song it was a good end result.

I always thought with my little knowledge that Texas was a hot climate with lots of desert areas. Then the other night on TV here they showed a big motorway crash in Texas with trucks and cars sliding in the ice.  We are having a cold wintery summer here not sure what's    happened to the climate.

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(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Good one Phill I aspire to the Johnny Cash man in black character. I always try to tell the young ones around here I dye what's left of my hair grey.     

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(24 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Dirty Ed wrote:

I enjoyed listening to the song. I'll have to admit though, that I'm not used to hearing a song where nothing rhymes. Is that becoming a popular genre?

Cheers Ken I don't think lyrics that don't rhyme are a new popular genre. I don't have enough knowledge of modern songs to know for sure. The down side of my poetry and song writing is my words have very little rhyme so it does make it hard for someone to make it flow. I just hope my weird style some how works.