Ctech real good lyrics and backing track has an interesting updated ye olde english sound to me, but I am not sure how it would fit into your lyrics but it is still good.
Happy New Year to you and your family and good to see you back here on Chordie.
1,076 2021-01-05 20:20:09
Re: Breakthrough (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1,077 2021-01-05 20:11:54
Re: The scheming chattel version 3 (4 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Ctech you got the medieval sound on that real good.
1,078 2021-01-04 21:42:16
Topic: Always Hope (4 replies, posted in My local band and me)
This a video of me trying to develop a bluegrass sort of sound just using the ukulele. I am fishing for comments on here please.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pHzrMBQ9d1Q
1,079 2021-01-04 20:43:32
Re: SHELTER FROM THE RAIN (Aka my $10,000 song) (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Wow Ken that is song writing at its best. Your guitar picking and vocals excellent. That is a perfect tribute to an exceptional lady. I love the way you brought two of your loves together in a song nature and your wife. Congratulations on your 47th anniversary.
1,080 2021-01-01 23:30:53
Re: Phill Williams Song Searchin' (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Phill and Jim thank you for your kind comments a great way to start the year. After reading Phills lyrics to Searchin' on chordie the video idea popped into my head. I sent Phill some of my video ideas when he reluctantly agreed to forward to me his demo . When he emailed me him doing a demo of it which he wasn’t completely happy with I eagerly started the process of putting a video together. The synergy with the interaction of his song and my video felt good. Our two inputs combined produced a total effect that was greater than the sum of the individual elements. The song needed the video and the video needed the song. When I emailed him with the finished result I felt a bit apprehensive thinking maybe he wouldn’t like it. Thankfully he did like the outcome. I was very pleased and thankful to Phill for allowing me to make this video. Special thanks to Cuba Mall Dancers Wellington for being in this video.
1,081 2021-01-01 23:24:58
Re: Wretched Lives Blues Version (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jim this song can be done real good in many ways because your lyrics are so strong word arrows going straight into the bullseye.
1,082 2021-01-01 23:20:51
Re: Wretched Lives - Dark Folk Version (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Ken and Jim that is an excellent collaboration Poems can become songs and songs can become poems.
1,083 2020-12-31 20:01:12
Topic: Phill Williams Song Searchin' (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Happy New Year everyone I hope 2021 is a whole lot kinder to the world. Here is a song of Phills which I like. I hope this video does it justice.
1,084 2020-12-29 20:58:28
Re: Understanding Andy And Flo (9 replies, posted in Poems)
Phill, Jack and Vera were great characters. Back in the late 60's -70s when there was only one TV channel here people use to talk about Coro as though it was real life. I knew two old ladies who fell out because one loved Ena Sharples and the other hated her. Peter Adamson who played Leonard Fairclough was brought out here by a company I worked for to do a months residency at a flash restaurant cabaret called the Beefeater Arms. He was trying to be a singer entertainer but even though he could act his singing wasn't up to much. The first week his show was full house but word got around how bad it was hardly anyone one went. They got him a spot on a daytime TV show here he insisted on not being interviewed unless they let him sing a song which he did real bad not a smart move on his part. He had some other gigs on the books but they were canned. Another one who was out here was the lady who played Else Tanner her stage shows went down good and were all sold out with good reviews. The woman that played Stan and Hilda Ogden's daughter Irma ( Sandra Gough ) lived in Wellington for a while and was married to a local man very briefly. They split and she left town.
1,085 2020-12-29 20:46:35
Re: Understanding Andy And Flo (9 replies, posted in Poems)
cant be late for Christmas diner ive got the roast
lol love andy
Good one Mojo.
1,086 2020-12-29 20:44:39
Re: Poem: Wretched Lives - maybe a song somehow ? (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Jim you are a craftsman with words I love those lyrics. The chorus also is perfect. That is worth an A+
such is the fate of those with wretched lives
hopelessly waiting for their ships to arrive
too scared to be bold, and face the cruel facts
and haunted by visions of what their lives lack
1,087 2020-12-29 00:33:44
Re: Understanding Andy And Flo (9 replies, posted in Poems)
Cheers Brian I wish I could make it rhyme.
Phill here in New Zealand they would have a compiled a selection of Andy Capp cartoons put into comic books which they would sell at newsagents, It ended up been syndicated into our Newspapers also. I just showed the poem to a friend who use to watch Coronation street in the 60's and 70's and he reckons the poem reminds him of two characters in it Stan and Hilda Ogden.
Thank you ken it seems like Andy Capp humor was universal.
1,088 2020-12-29 00:19:37
Re: FAMILY BLOOD - a sad country song (4 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Ken even though you made the storyline up it would be true of many a family situation where the father is a drunk. Brilliant song.
1,089 2020-12-28 08:24:48
Topic: Understanding Andy And Flo (9 replies, posted in Poems)
Even though he is not an ideal roll model there was a comic strip character called Andy Capp. For those who don’t know Andy Capp the nearest thing to him I can think of is Homer Simpson. When I was a kid many of my school friends had dads who were town drunks and Andy Capp type characters which you don’t see here much in NZ today. Woman put up with a lot back then which they wouldn’t do today. I spent a bit of time today going through a friends collection of old Andy Capp comics when these words based loosely on a kiwi version of Andy Capp came into my head.
Understanding Andy and Flo.
This is my romantic story.
It all started.
When my girl said to me.
Where would you rather be .
Sitting with me having a cup of tea.
Or sitting with your mates drinking Speights.
Telling stories ones that I would hate.
Not feeling brave.
Thinking I will have to behave.
Oh dear oh dear I said.
The answer must be clear.
You know me well.
Would I rather be here.
Or away from here having a beer
You can answer that question yourself.
I lovingly said to her.
She looked at me unhappily.
You can go to hell I know you well.
You can take of from here and have a beer with your mates.
In that moment I knew she loved me.
She said I don’t suppose you will want me to put on a cup of tea.
With a sigh I said.
Looking at her lovingly in the eye.
You have a cup of tea.
That would work perfectly.
Maybe in a bikini .
You would look great.
As I put on my coat and headed out till late.
1,090 2020-12-26 23:41:22
Re: and there she was (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jim I wish I could write lyrics as good as that to my Maree. I love that verse below as it sort tells my story a bit with Maree.
It was a summer’s day when I first met her
and I knew she was special from the start
yeah her smile, her eyes, the way she made me laugh
those little things that sometimes will steal your heart
1,091 2020-12-25 21:48:18
Re: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Ann is cooking our Christmas dinner, I peeled the veg and put the plates out so I can chill a bit now.
So, same here where butcher and fishmonger shops are concerned, they've all gone more or less. I can only think of one butcher shop and that's a couple of miles away. The only fish shops are where you put your feet in the tank....
We don't keep pets, we tend to grow too attached and waste products are a problem...lol
I wish I knew how to say merry Christmas in new zealandish...nadolig llawen
Meri Kirihimete the New Zalandish nadolig llawen to you and Ann. Maree and I had a lamb roast on Christmas day with just her and I. My hundred year old Mum and some family members visited earlier on Christmas day.. Today is boxing day this morning we are doing a catchup brunch starting at 10am with extended family. It has been a rainy morning but Christmas day was a beautiful sunny day. This afternoon if the rain clears it stopped raining a few hours back hopefully it will stay that way some of them are going to take their horses for a ride along the coast in a place a few miles from here called the Wairarapa. Me I am just going to take it easy as I am too old for horses. Though I love my extended family I am glad a lot of them live in other countries as the number are to big for us to deal with now. Maree only has a few relatives that live here most of hers live over in Greece, Romania and the USA. My mum had Christmas lunch at her great grand daughter new house as she wanted to show it of. Though we were invited when we saw the numbers who were going from just my sister lot we decided to take the pressure of my grand niece and just have a quiet one at home. When our last pet past away we decided not to have any more as we get very attached to our animals.
1,092 2020-12-25 09:44:15
Re: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Merry Christmas to you Phill and all your family.. In the area where I live Butcher shops sell only meat and Fish shops or fish mongers sell fish. But having said that the supermarkets have killed most butcher shops so there are not many left now. We still have plenty of fish shops around .So you can get both fish and meat at the supermarket plus pet food for cats or dogs. .For other types of pet food the pet shops are where you would go. Most people here feed their cats with cat with food products from the pet food isle in the Supermarket.
We don't have any pets now but our last cat use to be very fussy only eat one brand of tin cat meat and also liked sheep hearts from the butcher, Our family dogs use to eat dog roll that you can buy in supermarkets and Lamb shanks from the butcher or other meat with bones suitable for dogs.
Our Christmas day started here at 11am Christmas eve your time as our time zone is 13 hours ahead of yours.
1,093 2020-12-25 09:21:20
Re: hats off. backing track (1 replies, posted in My local band and me)
That rocks along nicely I look forward to hearing the vocal.
1,094 2020-12-25 09:18:29
Re: merry Christmas (5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
A Merry Christmas from New Zealand to you all. Wishing you all the very best and good health for 2021.
Pete
1,095 2020-12-24 20:41:10
Re: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Nadolig Llawen Phill very true cat licking his fur not my first thought. I was going to add another verse about the cat disappearing out the door giving me a rude tail gesture after been fed and patted then going back to being his unappreciative self. By that time the song had got a bit long. I have just edited the lyrics above as I have just noticed I wrote a couple down wrong.
1,096 2020-12-24 20:23:19
Re: Need to write a song about mortgage lenders (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Zurf Merry Christmas reading your post about mortgage lenders these words came into my head.
Mortgage lenders steal a man's soul.
While putting him in a hole.
So deep you wonder if there is light at the top.
1,097 2020-12-24 07:24:00
Re: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Interesting/unusual Christmas song and picking technique Peatle. Thanks for sharing. I had trouble understanding some of the lyrics, could you post them?
Here are the lyrics DE.
Well the cat is scratching at the door.
He wants to come in and the clock is ticking in the hall.
While the cat is meowing for more.
He wants to get to the fridge.
He needs his stomach filling.
Oh he hopes I have been to the butcher shop.
So he can purr and love me some more.
Oh times moving.
Times moving.
Time Is moving slow.
Its a sunny day in this part of the world.
While the rest is in locked down.
Oh I am glad I am living here.
And there is some Christmas cheer.
Oh the cat wants a little pat.
So he can get fed.
Once he’s had his feed he is out of here.
And I wont see him for a while.
Oh it’s a quiet Christmas.
But everybody is having some fun.
I am glad I am living in this part of the world.
Where everything can be done.
Oh don’t need no mask.
We don’t need to stand apart.
Were together.
In sunny weather.
What could be better than this.
Oh the clock keeps ticking in the hallway.
As time keeps moving along.
Oh the cat’s lying down.
Licking his fur.
He’s just purring a song.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
The clock keeps ticking as I’m singing this song.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
The clock keeps ticking.
Oh the clock keeps ticking in the hallway.
As time keeps moving along.
Oh the cat’s lying down.
Licking his fur.
He’s just purring a song.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
Oh the clock keeps ticking.
The clock keeps ticking as I’m singing this song.
1,098 2020-12-24 07:10:10
Re: repetitive burnout (1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Beamer the time is right everything before that was just orbiting around and has now positioned itself well for your son who is willing and ready to be a drummer in his dads band. Toni has being away far to long from playing music in your band a week can be along time let alone most of the year when your got that music passion.
1,099 2020-12-24 05:51:42
Re: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Jim and DE I have just got to learn how to play and sing it all properly I will post the lyrics soon.
1,100 2020-12-22 20:20:29
Topic: Clock Ticking (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Season Greetings everyone. I wrote this song after being challenged to write something about New Zealand Christmas 2020 that is not exactly a conventional Christmas song. . This is about an imaginary person alone with their cat around Christmas time. I was practicing on this song a percussive picking technique that a local folk singer showed me. As usual just recorded on my laptop.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=697N_f6syXc