Good one Phill as the old saying goes “We can’t always choose the music life plays for us, but we can choose how we dance to it.”. I like that line of yours, " low flying high brows think they know it all". My Maree is a classical girl that likes ballet. Often she tells me the annoying thing about some people who go to watch ballet and classical music is they think their superior to lesser beings like me who love good old rock and roll. and folk music.
1,127 2020-11-21 04:13:45
Re: Keep Dancing (5 replies, posted in Poems)
Thanks for your feedback Brian it was all about a few minute encounter with a street lady.
Cheers Phill I was just writing this about this encounter in a observational sort of way as it all happened over a few minutes but it didn't drag me down just got me thinking. She was dancing around me and talking at the same time. She knows my face from my last job and I know her. My last job before I retired put me in contact with many street people so they tend to engage with me when they see me in town. The druggies and those sleeping rough don't try and ask me for money because they know all they will get of me at best is some food. The money most of them get goes on drugs. Lying and cheating is all part of what druggies and alkies do for them it is all about getting the next fix or high. Many years back when Maree and I use to be involved with the Salvation Army drug rehab center many would eventually after going through rehab would end up back on drugs and alcohol. I am thankful that I can enjoy a beer or whatever but for some people it is a slippery down hill slope. I have friends who work with street people and most of the long term street people here are quiet happy living on the streets. When we were in lockdown and there was no one around town they all accepted accommodation. Once the lockdown ended most of them decided they wanted to be back on the street again. We are always going to have people on the margins it is just the way life is. The few that do break out of that lifestyle quiet often go on to do wonderful things. Here in New Zealand a big percentage our prison inmates have drug and alcohol abuse problems. One of Easybeats and my Sunday pub seshin buddies is an ex prison warden he tells us lots stories of prisoners trying to get drugs smuggled in. .I will attach a rough Idea of what I was trying to achieve it needs more work and any feedback welcome. Just recorded on my laptop as usual and the quality not the best but hopefully it will have some entertainment value.
1,128 2020-11-21 03:39:18
Re: folk song (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
EB good lyrics about the treachery of the sea at times..
1,129 2020-11-19 19:53:59
Re: Song on Soundcloud - If I were The Wind (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Excellent Ed very moving song about the hardship of life when mother nature hits. A sad story told well in song.
1,130 2020-11-19 19:49:08
Re: Hi everyone (20 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Welcome to Chordie Aradii I wish I had learnt classical when I was younger. It gives you skills to play all sorts of music.
1,131 2020-11-19 19:44:35
Re: complicated (12 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Pete, something tells me there's a story you're not telling us?
Cheers Phill
Some of my back story is like the title of your song complicated. Maree who has known me since I was 17 has seen the roller coaster ride of my life I had to break a few chains along the road to get to where I am now.. Maree surprisingly accepted me despite some of my past..
1,132 2020-11-19 02:52:14
Topic: Keep Dancing (5 replies, posted in Poems)
I wrote this a while back it felt like the right time now to put it on chordie. I would like to rewrite it but I cant figure out how to do it. Anyone want to have a go at rearranging it changing words or whatever feel free to do that. I tried to make it into a song but I couldn’t get it together. Usually I think it is sad that people who are living rough on the street who have mental health issues choose that lifestyle .It is in most cases a choice in New Zealand for addicted people.. If their weird behavior at times makes some of them happy at times it cant always be that bad??? I met this lady in a subway with her plastic glue bag as I was walking through and this I wrote on the bus soon afterwards about her talking to me. She was doing little jigs while dancing in circles around me as I walked through. At first she made me feel very uncomfortable but after a few seconds her behavior didn’t worry me. As I got to the escalator to take me up to the bus stop she asked me of my name?. I told her it is Pete she gave me her name. As I went up on the escalator I felt like someone out of the bible when she yelled up at me , “ Apotoro Pete I no longer feel mamae.” The first time in my life I have been called Apostle Pete and it felt good that she wasn’t feeling sad. It felt right that I could understand something of her by burying it in a box any judgements of her I had in my head. In a few short minutes I had put my judgemental thoughts in some imaginary deep hole not to be dug up again. Later that day as I was sitting on a bus I looked out the window there were these people sniffing glue out of plastic bags. I felt like yelling out to them throw away your glue and plastic bags and start dancing.
Keep Dancing
I was walking through the subway.
There was a crazy little lady trying to dance a jig by herself.
She looked at me, she said, “I got a few problems with mental health.”
I looked at her and I said,” lady as long as you dance you can’t be crazy”.
Keep on dancing little lady its not crazy.
If that makes you happy.
Keep on dancing little lady.
If that makes you happy.
You got to move that’s fine with me.
She said,” people in the city don’t see me when I’m dancing on the street.”
I said lady, “ they do they just don’t know how to handle you.”
“Just do what you do.”
“Your not hurting anyone.”
Keep on dancing little lady its not crazy.
If that makes you happy.
Keep on dancing little lady.
If that makes you happy.
I cant see what the problem is.
You are just doing your thing.
Its aint a sin.
Just keep dancing.
1,133 2020-11-19 02:46:25
Re: Sin city revisited again with electricity (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Grah got me foot taping and I felt like doing a bit old style rocking to that one.
1,134 2020-11-19 02:43:50
Re: complicated (12 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Phill reminds me of some of the hard vicious ladies I have met in times gone by.
1,135 2020-11-14 02:46:36
Re: Home For The Holidays (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
A powerful piece of song writing DE and nothing wrong with your recording sounded good to me.
1,136 2020-11-10 09:50:13
Re: White Noise, Silent Thunder (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Beamer, I guess out there in the world there are many who are feeling deranged with the crazy things going on around them?
1,137 2020-11-10 09:43:57
Re: Better Quit Now (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Good One Jets. When I have had days like that and get that I want to quit thought I hear in my head the voice of my father and grandpa who died many years ago saying you will get through this..
1,138 2020-11-10 09:28:01
Re: Purely Love You And I (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Lechyd da to you and your family Phill and diolch yn fawr iawn from Maree for yours and Ann’s birthday greetings.
Cheers Jim PG Tips put out some good funny adverts with those Chimps.
1,139 2020-11-09 05:00:30
Re: Purely Love You And I (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Phill I wrote the song for Maree’s birthday in a style she likes. For some strange reason my thoughts while writing this reply have segued over to thinking about the PG Tips tea commercial years ago with the chimpanzees carrying a piano down some stairs. It used to give me a chuckle the banter between the son and father.
Son yells to his dad “”Dad do you know the pianos on my foot”? His Dad replies, ”No son but you hum it and ill play it”
I have just said those two last lines out loud as Maree walked past me. She is now looking at me in a way that makes me think she now knows I have gone completely bonkers in my old age.
1,140 2020-11-09 04:54:40
Re: a winters morn (10 replies, posted in Poems)
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you may have noticed that it's only airy-fairy in the first verse which i wrote early morning (about 10 o'clock). second and third verse arrived about twelve hours later, so they aren't so floral or Shakespearean.
as for a voice you can choose between Richard Burton or Peter Sellers, oh no you cant as they're both no longer with us... drat
Phil, I use to love hearing Peter Sellers reciting the lyrics to the Beatles Hard Days Night in a Shakespearian manner.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLjA331K4YI
1,141 2020-11-08 06:43:14
Re: Purely Love You And I (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Jim in the old days playing the keys down here was called tickling the Ivories. Now days I hear the kids talk about bashing the keys when playing the keyboard. The old pianos here were also known as Joanna's. Which came from the Cockney rhyming slang for piano. Old Joanna. or some would say Aunt Joanna. .
1,142 2020-11-08 06:30:05
Re: a winters morn (10 replies, posted in Poems)
How out thou Phill. I love the way you wrote this. Well written in a ye old style. I can hear in it my head been spoken by someone with a Shakespearian type voice.
1,143 2020-11-07 09:48:14
Topic: Purely Love You And I (7 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Here is a song I wrote for Maree in a style she likes not my usual thing. It was good to give the Ivories a bit of a tickle on his one.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQfzGg3EaPg
1,144 2020-11-07 09:33:11
Re: Reckless Mind and Rebel Heart (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great lyrics Jim reminds me of some of the wild woman I knew in my younger days who were travelling around drifting in and out of jobs different countries and towns.
1,145 2020-11-01 05:47:27
Re: A halloween song? (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill those lyrics hit the mark our Kiwi kids down here in NZ would love them in a song. I look forward to hearing you playing it .
1,146 2020-10-31 04:56:38
Re: A.E.D (4 replies, posted in Poems)
Beamer I like the way your lyrics flow without getting to complicated. I guess the lyrics are sort of a metaphor for wanting to stay in a relationship or a situation even though things aren't working out well at that time?
1,147 2020-10-31 04:46:33
Re: the painting (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Mojo love the way you can tell a good story in a song. I can imagine that picture through your cleverly written and performed song.
1,148 2020-10-29 03:57:26
Re: Sling Ya Hook (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Good folky tune there EB. I have heard people from time to time say Sling Ya Hook but up until now I didn't realize what it meant. One of my old work mates use to say it and I never had a clue what he meant.
1,149 2020-10-15 05:29:02
Re: Jennifer (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Ctech Interesting subtle choral backing sound on this one.
1,150 2020-10-15 05:26:07
Re: Lady you've got me going crazy (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Ctech I like the way you sing and play this song.