Just a song relating to my visit to see all my family on my wife’s side that has taken actually a little longer than ten years since I last visited them. It is somewhat of a shock to see all that happens in that amount of time and takes quite a bit of catching up. I will try and make sure I keep my visits less infrequent. I hope you like the song.
1,926 2007-10-28 10:14:20
Topic: Ten Years of Changing (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1,927 2007-10-27 07:40:41
Topic: Ayase Lullaby (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
On my vacation we stayed with my wife’s sister, Yumiko in Ayase. Ayase is one of the many cities that make up suburban Tokyo. I had the pleasure of meeting my nieces, Honika and Hisako and my nephew Yoshinori for the first time on this visit. Yoshinori is the youngest and he is like a little energizer bunny that never stops so he’s a chore to put to bed at night so I promised Yumiko to write a song that might help so here it is. If you want to learn more about Ayase here is a link and I’m sure there are more:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayase,_Kanagawa
Ayase Lullaby By Jeff Gilpin
1,928 2007-10-26 18:02:14
Topic: Untitled (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I just returned from vacation in Japan and was intrigued by all the music I heard over there. This song is mostly about the music and the lyrics come from me observing my wife a bit while I was over there. Anyway I hope you all like it and if anyone has a title suggestion I'm open.
Untitled By Jeff Gilpin
1,929 2007-10-12 01:32:54
Re: You'll Come Back Home (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you all for your kind words and comments
James I'll pass it on to him and thanks
Reb - I agree. My son volunteered and knew what he was getting into. I didn't want him to. I didn't want him to place himself in danger but he did what he thought was right and I support him on his decision, though I worry about him a lot. My son Tim is a bridge crew member in the US Army and while it is not in the most dangerous field in the military he is, like many of our sons and daughters, over there in a war zone where sometimes bad things happen and I want him home safe as soon as he is done with what I hope is his last tour there. I cannot imagine how the mothers and father of the soldiers who routinely go out on patrols keep from worrying themselves sick.
Toney - Thanks you for your comments. I could never have started writing if it wasn't for chordie and all my fellow chordie friends. I think I did a good job on this one too and like I said to Jason I plan on recording it when I get some time. I just wish I could sing it and play it exactly how I hear it in my head where I never make a mistake and am always on key.
Gainesville is just west of Manassas and where I live is on the edge of Haymarket just off I-66. It’s almost like the mountains but not quite
Daddy - Thank you I like it too
Helena - Thank you for your words and your prayer for my son.
1,930 2007-10-11 13:03:58
Re: You'll Come Back Home (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Jas - Yep, this is one I want to record as well but I really have a stack of songs I want to record I might have to pick and choose
1,931 2007-10-11 05:15:47
Topic: You'll Come Back Home (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
My son’s on my mind a lot lately with his redeployment only about a month away so here’s another song for him. I hope you like it.
You’ll Come Back Home By Jeff Gilpin
1,932 2007-10-11 03:32:03
Re: "Suddenly See Blues" (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Another great one James - Well Done!
1,933 2007-10-10 03:26:07
Re: Into Harms Way (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I think that's what I'll have to do and it doesn't sound weird at all.
Thanks!
1,934 2007-10-10 00:31:11
Re: Into Harms Way (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey James - this one is in the que as well but it is tough to play the GBE sequence so it'll be a challenge.
1,935 2007-10-10 00:28:59
Re: In My Dreams (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey James - thanks -I'm lucky the wife lets me freelance a little to put her to sleep. It's where I get a lot of my musical ideas. I too like this chord progression and want to hear how it sounds recorded as well. I'm getting a bit of a long que going though so I'll have to pick and choose.
Hey Helena - I was just about to give up when I actually used a trick James had mentioned in the past, by turning the frustration around on itself and writing about it. He's still the king in my mind but thanks.
1,936 2007-10-09 10:16:33
Re: In My Dreams (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Jas - Glad I could connect with you.
Be well
1,937 2007-10-09 04:42:01
Topic: In My Dreams (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is another little melody I got from playing my wife to sleep, like sleepy time song I wrote awhile back. For the life of me I couldn’t come up with the lyrics tonight until I let my difficulty coming up with the lyrics be the lyrics. Anyway, I hope you all like it. Play it slow and sleepy like you’re trying to drop someone off to sleep and you got it just about right.
In My Dreams By Jeff Gilpin
1,938 2007-10-08 12:42:21
Re: Into Harms Way (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Roger and Helena - Roger, I wil give it a go sometimes this week and I agree it is a little different. Just trying something new. Helena, I'm proud of him but I worry - thanks for the prayer.
1,939 2007-10-08 05:43:10
Topic: Into Harms Way (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was playing around with my guitar just after tuning it and was thinking how nice a tuned guitar sound just strumming the strings. It got me to thinking what a song would sound like based on those individual notes played as chords and I came up with the music below where you strum through the E and A and let the D ring out for the first line in the verse and chorus and then G and B and E the same way for the second line. It sounded pretty good to me so I thought of words and with my son going back over to the desert soon and the sound of the mix of chords I thought I would write this one for him. So Tim, if you read this, this song was written for you. I hope everyone else likes it as well.
Into Harm's Way By Jeff Gilpin
1,940 2007-10-07 02:57:51
Re: There is so much talent here... I'll guess i'll try one ... (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Dave - I wrote a song a while back about a similar experience I had when my cousin passed away. It is tough dealing with all the emotions and thoughts that are going on when you experience something like this and I think you've done your friend proud. I would really love to hear this one if you get the chance to record it.
1,941 2007-10-07 02:52:23
Re: I Can't Catch Up (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I also wrote this because I have a vacation coming up which my life will be hell the frist month after I get back. I will make sure I enjoy my time off. ![]()
1,942 2007-10-06 20:46:00
Topic: I Can't Catch Up (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Was just strumming the guitar and thinking about all I need to get done this weekend. I started thinking about how nice it would be to slow time down and take a break. Anyway I hope you like it. It has a pretty quick tempo but slow it down at the end of the last chorus. Ah, you’ll figure it out I’m sure.
I Can’t Catch Up By Jeff Gilpin
1,943 2007-10-05 12:34:26
Re: How Can a Song? (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks you all - I'll try to get it recorded soon.
1,944 2007-10-05 12:30:19
Re: Lingering (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks selso, Roger and saba - Go for it selso. Roger - she told me she would not take advantage promises never to play when it's snowing or raining hard...or at night. saba - my girl liked it fine. ![]()
1,945 2007-10-04 03:48:03
Topic: Lingering (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
My wife has been feeling guilty about being away lately. She has been playing lots of golf lately and since I am not into golf she’s out with other friends and not with me. She already tried to get me to play but I’d still rather play soccer or guitar, not necessarily in that order. Anyway here is a song for her letting her know she’s always with me. I hope you all like it as well.
Lingering By Jeff Gilpin
1,946 2007-10-02 02:53:25
Re: How Can a Song? (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Daddy and Selso - I was really trying to come up with a lyrical idea to match the chords I was playing around with so I thought, "What should I write about?" That started me thinking how I should write a song that someone might be able to connect with like a few songs that have connected with me and that's pretty much where the idea came from. I also tried hard to suppress the urge I usually have so as not to overwrite the lyrics. Glad you like it and thanks.
1,947 2007-09-30 22:24:40
Re: How Can a Song? (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Roger - I admit that I kind of cheat on the Bm and Gb by not barring them fully across but I'm working it and they still sound good when I cheat. You are right that it is a good barred sequence going from Bm to Gb I think.
1,948 2007-09-30 18:30:00
Topic: How Can a Song? (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Just a question about the power of music and how it helps in so many ways. I hope you like it.
How Can a Song? By Jeff Gilpin
1,949 2007-09-29 05:04:20
Re: The Day Hike (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Zurf - Nice shots. I do have to get back up there sometime but I bet the fall colors are going to bring down everybody and their mother. I might try to head up ther before it gets too crowded.
1,950 2007-09-28 01:53:08
Topic: "I'll Never Get Tired of You" (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Here's my version of the song. It's a different style from Roger's but I think they both express the same sentiment.