thanks Neo ill give it a try or maybe its just a poem as it only came to me with words only.
177 2023-07-28 00:09:22
Topic: Help ! (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ive got this song,but for the life of me i cant seem to put it together.
ive tried a few different progressions/feels/styles but with no good result.
usually when a song comes it comes with all this already there.
if anyone can sort this for me id be thankful.
Drink Driving
drink driving
and in a mess
ive done this
i must confess
when i was a young man
an unthinking fool
the sound of twisted metal
and screams of bloody pain
i can remember
so i wont drink drive again
so now i put
my drinks on a tab
when im drunk
i catch a cab
cause i can remember
so i wont drink drive again
178 2023-07-22 23:18:33
Re: What Are two Of Your Favourite Covers Played live???? (5 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Peatle Jville wrote:
Most of all it was fun and entertaining I enjoyed watching and listening to that vid thank you EB. I hope someone else might have a vid to share.
I dont fancy the chances of anyone posting one Pete,as we have spoken about
know one else joining in,maybe its time we took our banter back to personal e mails.
179 2023-07-22 09:19:48
Re: What Are two Of Your Favourite Covers Played live???? (5 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emgP1ULVSKo
not a fav,but pretty interesting.
180 2023-07-20 00:51:47
Topic: Peatle Fever (3 replies, posted in Poems)
EB.
Dr Dr i need you help please
i cant say or write anything
without making it rhyme.
I`ve got a bad case of Peatle fever.
Dr.
take these pills twice a day
that should make the rhymes go away
if that doesnt work, take 100 pills a day
that way you will be so busy taking pills
that you wont have any time to rhyme.
181 2023-07-18 09:43:16
Re: Horror Museum (11 replies, posted in Poems)
Speaking of Ringo
of which we weren`t
i wish that the drums
i had learn`t
i could bang on the skins all day
it would scare my neighbors away
Phill has trouble with neighbors of his
maybe he should take the idea
and bash his kit night and day
all of the night and all of the day
a song from the sixties
by the kinks i think
although Phills more your dedicated follower of fashion
cause he`s from wales
the biggest fish in the sea
a friend of tom jones probably
who`s a pretty big fish too
182 2023-07-18 01:17:31
Re: Horror Museum (11 replies, posted in Poems)
Pete
im dizzy from all your rhyme
you seem to do it all the time
your brain must be on overdrive
but at least you know you`re still alive
theres people who never wrote a word
i guess they`re worried it would be a turd
emitting a foul smell
like dogs.... stuck on your shoe
but hey it makes a great glue
cause if you try to get it off
you know it dont come easy
you dont have to shout or leap about
you know it dont come easy (thanks ringo)
oh no i think ive caught Peatle fever !
183 2023-07-17 21:36:51
Re: Horror Museum (11 replies, posted in Poems)
good poem Phill i thought maybe its a bit weird,have you been sipping from Peatles cup.
184 2023-07-17 01:12:35
Re: match an artist/song (3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
baby, nursery rhyme
kid, the wiggles
parent. peace and quiet
drunk unc, in heaven there is no beer
mother in law my daughters fallen for a dud
angry neph punk
185 2023-07-16 20:38:39
Topic: match an artist/song (3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
match an artist /song or genre to the following
a baby
a kid
parent
drunk uncle
mother in law (this could be fun)
angry nephew
looking forward to some interesting answers
186 2023-07-16 10:10:09
Topic: shut up ya face (3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFacWGBJ_cs
In a recent Peatle clip it mentioned this song,thought i`d post it as i`m
not sure how well known it is.
187 2023-07-16 00:20:17
Topic: good to see and thanks (1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
It`s been good to see chordie has kept the conversation going that i attempted
start.Reading your posts has also ignited my mind and i pleased to say songs are now flowing forth.
many thx
188 2023-07-13 00:26:04
Re: fav songwriters (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
George John Paul
Tig Phill Grah Jets Peatle Neo mojo
189 2023-07-12 05:11:41
Re: Road Trip Songs (10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
P
when we were kids we used to sing ``are we there yet``
190 2023-07-12 00:26:19
Topic: my favourite song writer (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-tP5GsNIOqQ&t=39s
my last post for a while,hopefully someone will take the baton and run with it.
191 2023-07-12 00:21:27
Topic: blitz/bombardment of posts last day (4 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
192 2023-07-12 00:18:28
Topic: last day blitz running out of ideas (2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YtLXrOJBXIU
the NZ national sport,im on the edge of my seat watching this riveting action
193 2023-07-11 04:41:28
Re: blitz (3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
I was entered but only managed to throw it two feet.
194 2023-07-11 04:40:12
Re: While Watching Some Exciting Personality Do The Good Work (8 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle
another brilliant poem,the stuff in your brain is amazing.
195 2023-07-11 04:37:38
Re: whistling (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Joey 3
oh i forgot about them,,anymore???
196 2023-07-11 01:28:42
Topic: blitz (3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
one day left of blitz from me,so heres a bit of kiwiana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tAWwqKNI7g
197 2023-07-11 01:25:24
Re: Growing Old Disgracefully ,Some vids of our new band (14 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Grah
i like the band name and the songs.good stuff.
198 2023-07-11 01:24:04
Topic: whistling (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
has whistling disappeared from songs nowadays.
i can only think of a couple,do you know any others ?
the stranger / Billy Joel
i`m Mandy / 10cc
199 2023-07-10 00:27:21
Topic: more than one way to skin a cat (2 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_zMyeoTjaY
if you are having trouble playing guitar try this,one string !
theres more ways to play than the usual way.
plus you would save a fortune on buying guitar strings.
200 2023-07-10 00:21:52
Re: Remember these folks ? (2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Tig
thanks for your comments,i have lots of music questions.but its hard to get answers.
i`ve got a couple of days to go on the blitz,after that we will see what happens,seeing my name
on chordie all the time looks like i`m doing it for an ego thing.i never wanted it to be all about me.
hence i haven`t bored anyone with my songs,but a few poems have popped into my head so i
posted them just to get my number of posts up.