another great song jeff...love the chords...keeep doing your thing...
your fan
saba 
26 2007-06-06 13:48:52
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
27 2007-06-06 13:43:55
Re: Come Home Melisa (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
another great song by the great ROOSTER!
keep rocking
saba
28 2007-06-05 14:43:23
Re: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i still cant believe your a 13 yrs old there are no words for that song....its out of the world
keep writing...
saba
29 2007-06-05 14:40:36
Re: Walking (13 replies, posted in Songwriting)
everybody has said what they have to say and i agree with them...all of the above...
keep doing your thing
u rock!
saba
30 2007-06-05 14:36:52
Re: WRITING A SONG (14 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hey couburn i recomment doing both at the same time! i do that and i think most people do it too...if i write a song first and then find a tune to go with it, it just doesnt work for me...pick up your guitar...make a tune and sing nonsense words along and who knows...most of the time you get a song just like that...it happens with me..
good luck
saba
31 2007-06-05 14:33:34
Re: On your way to Hell (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i agree with rooster...this is a very different song from the ones ive read...brilliant
keep writing and composing..:)
saba
32 2007-06-04 14:30:25
Re: My candle burns from both ends (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ill try to post the chords coz im really dumb with the "purdy like " format of chordie...so i as soon as roger sends me the mail ill post the chords...
thanks for your appreaciation
saba
33 2007-06-04 14:27:34
Re: those who die young (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hey jason....everybody learns from their mistakes so keep writing songs...they might sound a little crappy first but you'll improve
saba
34 2007-06-04 14:25:04
Re: those who die young (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thank you so much roger....those compliments went straight to my heart!..i didnt get your mails...so if it wont be any trouble for you to post them again i would really appreciate it ..my email is obhf@hotmail.com....thanks...and i had my exams to i couldnt reply to them if i got them...
thanks again
saba
35 2007-06-04 14:18:02
Re: I Wish I Could Be With You (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i really like you song music guy...its excellent for a first song...i like it...
keep writing and keep composing!
saba
36 2007-05-30 06:37:02
Re: My candle burns from both ends (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
you right kori....i used to find it really hard to right even a single line which would rhyme...until it came to me automatically....i was experimenting with this song as i wanted it to have a mystery to it yet make some sense to people...i guess i have done my job! i have to get the chords up on this song though..
saba
37 2007-05-30 06:26:48
Re: Mournful Cry (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
such a nice song jeff...i really like it...and its true what you say....no matter what happens mothers are there at your side....keep writing and composing
your fan
saba
38 2007-05-29 18:15:32
Topic: My candle burns from both ends (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
a song which dosent make any sense...im open to suggestions...tell me what you guys think
Black eyes empty windows
Candle light, candle burning
Sacrificing for a reason
For a little bit of pain
For a little bit of pain
Just right there……
My candle burns from both ends
It burns till the end
Would you please go lower
Bend till I bend
Bend till iii….bend
Helpless hands, blinded eyes
Paying her own desired price
Too many fantasies
Might be too good to be
Enjoying this never ending spree…
My candle burns from both ends
It burns till the end
Would you please go lower
Bend till I bend
Bend till iii…bend…
39 2007-05-29 17:30:02
Re: band formation (6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
that was a very intersting story there gin...is that your name?...and thanks for the advice and no i didnt get bored..im a people person...love to hear what they have to say....and what you say roger is totally true...music dosent have the same impact as the music in the past used to have...in my opinion people are recycling old music..just adding a few things hear a new beat there and you have a new song which will go old in just a few days...the oldies are the best..
thank you again
saba
40 2007-05-29 17:08:05
Re: Go Back to Sleep (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
yeah great song...this should have been named running the rat race:)...sure does reflect what busy lives people have that they dont have time for their family...i feel sorry for the father in this song...poor guy 
saba
41 2007-05-29 16:53:23
Re: those who die young (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thank you all for your compilments....this is the best thing about chordie that people appreciate your music and help in improving you even more...trust me james i have pateince when it comes to things like PASTING THE CHORDS WITH THE SONG...i tried over and over again but i think ill get roger's help...and thankyou rooster...everybody over here is talented...
cheers
saba
42 2007-05-27 18:10:20
Re: those who die young (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thank you so much for the compliment this is the first song ive pasted on this forum.....i have chords for this song but i cant seem to paste them on the song writing forum...
43 2007-05-27 17:46:58
Topic: those who die young (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
this a little song....to all of the people who have lost there loved ones and to those who have died young....God bless you
sunlight streaming through my bedroom window
i lay with my head on the pillow
chocolates, candies and flowers for me
given to me by my family
they say its gonna be alright
but i know im not a kid
and that i have only a few
days to live
whispering things that i cannot hear
smiling to me through their fear
dreading when and how ill leave them
oh! i think the angel's hear
so its farewell
ill meet you someother time
in another world
oh please dont cry
let me fly, let me fly, let me fly
hold on to the cherished moments
that we spent together under the sun
and when you miss me
just look up at the sky and
wink at the star that is shining so bright
and i will come down from the sky
and sit by your side
till you dry all the tears
that you cry, that cry, that you cry
44 2007-05-27 17:29:21
Re: band formation (6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
thank you so much for ur help mherbert and a very intersting story there...actually i am doing my A levels and i am the deputy of the music society in my skool....it has been a dream to form a band but nobody from my skool seems to be interested...i am 18...is that too young? ive got my father to provide me with all the equipment i want and he can help me with the funds....he has recording experience and had his own band when he was my age....and it is through him i learned to play the guitar....oh well...eventually everything will turn out to be good
thanks again i really appreciate you writing a big paragraph for me
saba
45 2007-05-26 17:29:25
Re: When Her Brown Hair Falls (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ur welcome...and yes i was taken aback by ur "i dont care"....oh well...yes i promise i wont do that coz im not that type of person...people really have been doing that...they sound really intalented and desperate to me to try to copy some one elses lyrics...ode to the cruel heart is the name of my song but as i mentioned earlier i cannot seem to get it up on the song writing forum....seem to get confused when i read the intructions....dumb me..
saba
46 2007-05-26 17:25:10
Re: The Lost Highway (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ur most welcome and thanks for pasting the chords.....ive got my own song too and ive tried to past it on the song writing forum but cant... i read the instructions....need help
thanks
saba
47 2007-05-25 11:35:27
Re: just new to this malarkey so here goes my first attempt.its moody. (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hey weedjie its a cute song...how old are you?...nice attempt....my first song was something like that too but you'll get better on the way..
goodluck
saba
49 2007-05-25 09:15:06
Re: When Her Brown Hair Falls (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hey rooster can i keep the line "you gave away a part of you to help someone make a change" as my nick? i really like that line...
saba
50 2007-05-25 09:05:00
Re: The Lost Highway (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
it is the best rooster.....i specially like the chorus and that line "lord knows that it hurts so bad sometimes when i need you as more than a friend...please post the chords soon...
rock on
saba