Topic: Come Home Melisa

Hello again...Hope everyone in the southeastern United States is enjoying this extremely hot summer we're having as much as i am...So when i'm not working in the hot sun, I'm writing songs and here's another one from Rooster3. 
    Please let me know what you think......

Come Home MelisaCopywrite: Blake Stitcher


- For verses it is 4 beats per chord


Intro:  C,  Am, F,  G


 


Verse 1:


[C]This morning I got up,


[Am]I walked outside and cried,


[F]I started talking to the [G]rain.


 


[C]Every time that I spoke,


[G]I heard the thunder roll,


[F]But I said what I had to [G]say.


 


Bridge 1:


[F]I said I really miss that [G] girl,


[F]When she left she took my [G]world.


 


Chorus:


Come Home [C] Melisa


I’m sorry for [Am] all I’ve done


[F] I let you run out on me


Even [G] though I knew you were the one


If only [C] you knew how


I cry and [Am] miss you now


[F]I wish I could hold her and tell her I [G]love her



Come Home [C] MelisaAm,F,G


 


Verse2:


[C]I went back inside the house


[Am] I picked up the telephone


And [F] let it ring till’ I nearly fell asleep


Listenin’ [G] to a busy tone


 


Then finally I [C] heard your voice


It was the recording [Am] on your machine


[F] My heart fell out of my chest


And I [G] just waited for the beep


 


Bridge 1


Chorus


 


Bridge 2:  (Barred chords work well here)


Then the [F] phone clicked a while, I heard you [G] voice and then I smiled


Because I [C] knew you’d heard what I had to [Am] say


I said [F] babe I’m beggin’ you, Now [G] girl it’s the truth


Won’t you [C] please just listen to [F]me?[G]


 


Chorus



"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels

Re: Come Home Melisa

Hey Blake - This has a nice sound but I need to hear it cause I already played it 2 different ways and both sounded good to me.

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Football Club fan ...long story...HTT...WFT

Re: Come Home Melisa

This song has so much feeling which is great, i would also like to hear it as i have also played it. Keep going with writing songs, its a natural talent for you

love to you and god bless everyone

Rhiannon xoxoxoxo

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3

4 (edited by Rooster3 2007-06-04 00:11:28)

Re: Come Home Melisa

Hey thanks everyone!  I'll have the mp3 posted on another website soon and when i do get it up, i'll post the link on this page. Thanks again!

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels

Re: Come Home Melisa

Very nice flow to this one. I had a bit of difficulty going into the chorus on the G chord, but playing it a bit slower it worked.

Nice song and a very good lyric. The only thing I noticed about the lyric was that you used the word 'I' a lot of times (only my opinion). Keep up the good work

Tommyboy2

Re: Come Home Melisa

another great song by the great ROOSTER! smile
keep rocking
saba

love is like a violin, the music may stop now and then but the strings remain forever...

Re: Come Home Melisa

Once again everyone, thank you for your compliments and i'm glad ya'll liked it.

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels

Re: Come Home Melisa

Another great song, rooster3.  I hear it with a real howl and twang, like an old country ballad.  James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
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