Got talking with Brian (easybeat) about songwriting..... got me thinking about older songs I had written but never followed through with
Song I dragged this out of the closet and reworked it - kinda sad.
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Got talking with Brian (easybeat) about songwriting..... got me thinking about older songs I had written but never followed through with
Song I dragged this out of the closet and reworked it - kinda sad.
OOOOOOH !!! Thats a really good one Joe !
Scott
I would say ;
Do you just close your eyes, and look within ?
This is a song I wrote for all the people facing mental issues ( especially teens).
As a teacher and coach, I have seen this way too often in young peoples lives.
Recently i was also exposed to the plight of a couple of soldiers who I also taught years ago, and we discussed the mental issues they had to deal with.
It's a song about just wanting to be happy and be oneself - relieved of these issues. and that there is help out there- so don't be afraid to get it.
500 miles by the Proclaimers
"Ohio" by Crosby, Stills, Nash & Young
Richard
This is a wonderful song - I think it may best vocal of all your songs. Video component is terrific - loves the fade outs /fade ins. Bird sounds are an awesome addition as well - such a beautiful place!
Thanks for sharing, Jim
a little more rant... This year, consumers are expected to spend a record $29.1 billion on Valentine's Day
Consumers are expected to spend $2.1 billion on Valentine's Day gifts for their pets as well
also --- American elementary schools go all in and have the kids make or buy cards for all their classmates. (sometimes causes crisis bc some children can't afford to buy new red clothes, gifts for their mates, or something lovely for teacher.)
Key social downsides for children include:
Emotional Distress and Exclusion: Children who receive fewer cards, or none at all, may experience feelings of rejection, sadness, and anxiety.
Reinforcement of Social Cliques: Activities can unintentionally emphasize "popular" students, worsening peer exclusion and bullying.
Premature Sexualization: Focusing on romantic love can force children to grow up too fast and view peers through a lens of desire rather than friendship.
Socioeconomic Pressure: The expectation to bring gifts or cards can cause stress for families with fewer resources, highlighting gaps in social standing.
Insecurity and Comparison: For older children and teens today , social media amplifies comparisons, pressures, and extremes of elation and depression.
a little history....
Valentine's Day
originated from a blend of ancient Roman, pagan, and Christian traditions, likely replacing the fertility festival of Lupercalia with a saint's feast day in the 5th century. It honors Saint Valentine, a 3rd-century martyr, and became associated with romantic love in the 14th century, evolving into modern traditions of exchanging tokens of affection.
Key Historical Aspects:
Roman Roots (Lupercalia): Mid-February was celebrated with the, at times, violent festival of Lupercalia to promote fertility and springtime.
Saint Valentine: Pope Gelasius I established St. Valentine’s Day in 496 A.D. to replace Lupercalia, honoring a priest likely executed for marrying Christian couples against Emperor Claudius II's orders.
Romantic Association: The association with romance is often credited to medieval poet Geoffrey Chaucer in the 14th century, rather than the original saint's story.
Evolution: The day was solidified as a popular, romantic holiday in 17th-century England, later becoming heavily commercialized in the 19th and 20th centuries
Then the Americans had to outdo every one....thank you Hallmark, Walmart, and every restaurant that jacks up the dinner prices to celebrate this beautiful day !
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https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … -once-in-a
Since VD Day has swayed lanes and moved from what was supposed to be a day to share love to the ultimate commercial ploy preying on people's emotions to make them feel guilty, I thought this year, instead of buying flowers,dinner, and jewelry my wife doesn't need and will probably return, (all of which are ridiculously overpriced bc they know (especially the guys) will pay whatever they can afford) I would give her this song.
Jim
(Sorry about the rant!
)
Pete
That's me most of the time bc I sing so wickedly that nary a soul wants to be near ! ![]()
While I do get friends to play and sing for me or I pay for someone to do some of my songs, about 75% are exactly as you describe
with words and sounds that never leave the room. But that's ok with me bc of the reasons you eloquently put in your poem.
Fantastic poem - great insight Pete
Thank you for sharing.
Jim
Roger
Good to hear from you even if it's for this. Thanks for getting it working again !
How ya been ? Still making music ?
Jim
This morning when I arose at 6:45 am it was -16 at my house.
I poured my self a large cup of coffee and went o my computer
Started to do a crossword puzzle - got bored so I started reading poetry and came a cross two poems that caught my attention the first was
Go and catch a falling star
By John Donne
the second was
Cups of crimson wine
Mah Laqa Bai
Indian
1768 – 1824
Well then my wife came downstairs and as I looked her - I thought her lips were really beautiful and red
so it got me thinking about it and her and the poems all kinda mixed together in my head
so I spent the next 4 hours writing and re writing this song
This is a song I wrote a while ago - just fooling around using song titles in the lyrics. Well, I re-wrote it and it morphed into this. When I listened to this - it reminded of Jan, bc she is so kind and it is something she would sing. P.S. it's not country !
Hope you like it !
PEACE !!
Jim
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … rning-dove
Graham, It was great 10 years ago - still is !!!!
Song I wrote - some of it true stuff from my wife and I, some is a little embellishment ![]()
Hopefully all you married guys out there feel the same.
I will piggyback here. Veterans of every war and every nation come home with so many problems.
This is a I wrote song about a man who faces problems,could be a veteran - or anyone else that feels abandoned.
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … f-you-dare
I am also going to post this in songwriting eventually.
Jim
I wrote this song back in 2024
re wrote it a couple times - never really had the right fit for country. I Recently made some lyrical changes and had ir recorded as a rock song. Hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … al_sharing
Jim
Here a recording of a song I wrote a while ago Called Ghost Town ( Used to be Ghost Town Heart)
thank you for the kind words everyone
Thank you Pete !!
Well, it took a long time... but I finally got it recorded. I just put it on soundcloud
It's a tad long - but I think it came out pretty good.
The Beach - great place to work out relationship issues - just something about it.
Song: So Hott
Artist: Kid Rock
Where it’s from: Rock n Roll Jesus (2007 album)
A little over a year ago I think Brian brought up the topic of writer's block. So I wrote a song called Empty page . Well, the other day I re-wrote a bit of it, and had it recorded.
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … empty-page
here it is on soundcloud.
Seems that being retired has left me with lots of time on my hands ! : )
I agree - nice poem great description
I thought at first that in order to make it to song - may have to transpose first lines to second to create a rhyme scheme.... but hey -
maybe we don't need a rhyme to make a great song = after all - he is a stallion !!!
Well Done Zippy !
( where do you hail from ? )
Jim
Peatle
incredibly fantastic writing ! You are special !
Jim
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