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Great to see you entering a song again Brian for FSOTM.  I liked the message in it, "family together having a good time".     

Aww nicely done together Richard.  Great to see you both performing together and enjoyed the laughter at the beginning.   Eunice has a lovely voice      

That was good Brian, a happy song that bounced along.  Nicely done.     

Awesome everyone      

Thanks Jim, I am sure it could go on for days lol      

Peatle, thanks for the feedback.  It was fun trying to think of words to rhyme.  Yes, me to hope this cough goes away soon, slightly better today

easybeat, thanks for your comments too.  It kind of just developed into a conversation more by accident than on purpose

neophytte, thanks      

I am still coughing so haven't entered anything last month or this month.  So tried to write a quick poem of sorts using the word ADORNING in it.  My writing skills are not the best when it comes to poetry or songs for that matter lol but at least it's an attempt and something to enter.  Hopefully my cough will go soon enough for me to be able to perform something soon.

ADORNING

"Hello there, good morning,
how did you sleep?"  he asked as I was yawning.
"Not so good" I replied.  "You kept me awake with your snoring".
"Oh, so sorry, I`m overtired" he said.
"For better or worse in marriage,
says that ring, ADORNING your finger".
We both chuckled as I grabbed the milk and continued pouring.
"What's on your schedule today I asked?"
"I need to go down to the mooring,
the boat needs some new parts which I will be ordering".
"By the looks of the weather warning, it will soon be pouring" he said.
"Oh, thought I would pop out for a bit,
go look at a new rug for the flooring.
This adoring purring cat of ours,
well, he ruined the last one with all his clawing".

easybeat, lol glad that kid wasn't my brother lol.  Clever bit of writing once again, you're a natural at these kid's poems.  Keep them coming.  I hope your saving them and reading them to your grandchildren

Phill, great response from the toothless brother, haha      

Peatle great to see you entering another song of yours.  The lyrics, "Seems like the world is broken", are thoughts many people around the world have been thinking these last few years. Good to see how you put this song together.  Always enjoy the videos you put together with your songs      

Enjoyed this one Jeff, it bounced along and was a good foot tapper.     

NIce one Peatle, you seen to be playing your guitar with better movement, you were playing up and down the fret board and looked pain free?  Good topic, I think we all have those times and I for one, love to walk by the sea, go to the beach or go off walking in the woods.  Good soul food.