hannah they have said it all really!
great lyrics girl!
But, can i say one thing? ok thanks. It is not bad...honest
See in the chorus, you have " and I" then you have in brackets ( hold on) ?
well usually when i see words in brackets I see it as backing singers
so when i was reading your wee song and had this tune in my head, and I got to the chorus and sang into myself " HOLD ON" after I was singing in my head " AND I.
I thought it was going ok until I got to (STRUM A FEW SECONDS)
this made me think, surely these are not lyrics It never took me long until I realised that " HOLD ON" was not the actual lyrics.
Nothing wrong with your writing, you have wrote it and explained very good. It is just me
It is good to know I can laugh at my silliness
ye get some that are cut out for the job and others just get by from pretending