1 (edited by Peatle Jville 2026-01-05 09:00:07)

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At the top of Ngauranga Gorge is Johnsonville 
Here, in my suburb where Mount Kaukau stands proudly over the west side loud whispers and chuckles with a friendly hello echo around this valley Johnsonville’s folk mostly gather, not in gowns or solemn suits, but in relaxed armour and laughter-shields. They celebrate the art of nodding greetings mid-walk, the sacred ritual of a wave with a friendly wink, and the curious talent of knowing nearly everyone’s nick name— where half the cats probably own three neighbours each. Beneath these skies, jokes bounce like mountain goats wild and free— “Keep off my lawn,” means “Come down to the pub, club or cafe for a drink" and everyone knows it. The wind carries stories more reliable than any weather forecast: tales of tripped-over footpaths and heroic rubbish bin chases. A toast to a residents that has died might read: “Cheers to a friend who never missed a party". On a fine day while walking around I see people sitting on benches chatting pulling down invisible walls telling stories with plenty of smiles.”  Johnsonville’s shopping mall once the center of the village is now where dissatisfaction lingers as it retail heart dies. Despite the mall there is a celebration stitched in the fabric of cheeky yells and heartfelt hellos. So here’s to this top-of-the-gorge village a place live with humour, where community isn’t just a word—it’s an ongoing punchline. 
We have the odd bad egg here in Jville but most people are good.
Here is a poem about leaving here as a young man and then returning years later.  I was going to write a song but nothing came to me.
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I left this valley as a youth with restless, roaming heart
Through lands unknown and skies withdrawn 
Anonymity my art 
The cities’ throng would wash me out,
A face among the countless many 
Yet in that vast and wandering route 
My spirit’s longing grew
For places that to me were to be found
I left the hearth at break of dawn
A youth with restless, roaming heart
Through lands unknown and skies withdrawn,
Anonymity my art.
The cities’ throng would wash me out
A face among the countless few,
Yet in that vast and wandering route,
My spirit’s longing grew.
For years I danced ‘neath foreign stars,
With whispers strange and stories spun,
But found no peace within those bars— No place to call my “one.”
Then came a light as clear as spring,
An epiphany so bright and true:
The soil where roots can gently cling— That space was here anew.
With Maree’s hand held firm in mine,
Our laughter blends with winds that stir,
Together weaving love's design— Here’s where my soul will purr.
The road had led me far and wide,
Yet joy sang loud when near my shore— In home’s embrace I now abide;
Adventures?
Need no more! New
In another place I need no more!

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Pedr, were you telling my story? I can relate to every word. After my divorce I left town to form a group with a friend and spent a lost weekend of booze and women until I came to my senses and returned home to meet Ann and settle down and that was 46 years ago and I'm still here with no intention to leave.
Pedr you are a brilliant pensman, you have my respect and admiration for the way you put words together, and this poem proves it without a doubt. I also enjoyed the short story preface. What a talent you have.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Cheers Piri, our two stories are similar about our marriage and how we got together with our wife's.
Yours set in Wales mine in New Zealand.
I have just been reading about  connections between the Welsh dragon and King Arthur’s famous sword Excalibur. The  version I like  says Excalibur’s blade was forged in dragon’s breath, imbuing it with magical power.  As a result I wrote this below on reading your reply above.
My mind wonders in all sorts of weird directions when comparing your life in Wales and mine in New Zealand. As my younger brother says my head goes of in naf tangents.

O sing, O muse, Maree's roasting words bring on Pedr’s sun-kissed grin.
 Amidst the ferns where Kiwi dreams of places where Dragons and scales do their mythical musical thing!
Pedr's, Maree’s laugh—keeps him rock and rolling with her tease— .
Up in the hills away from the sea the summer salted breeze hits their valley, Just as the man on the radio plays a song called ""Long Tall Sally".

While across in Wales where winter waves do purr, Bold Piri winks at Ann (a cheeky sir). 
In a town by the sea, their love’s at its frothy best, Where family’s have fun and laugh in jest.
O laughter’s sparks, that fuel their heart’s delight— Inspiration swims and love shines its light! 
As a Beatles song comes on the radio in full flight filling the air with delight.
No matter where its heard in the northern or southern hemisphere "Long Tall Sally" sounds alright.
Lovers with different names laugh with delight.
Around midnight da man from Jamaica sings "turn on de light."     

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Peatle, ALL you have written, the introduction, the poem and your reply to Phill, excellent writing skills.  You have a real talent in this area, thoroughly enjoyed reading it all.  On a side note, yeah the Johnsonville Mall is looking very tired.  Great to see you back on here smile     

Laugh Lots ... Forgive Much ...  Love one another     smile
Covers and some Originals found over there    ------- >    https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan

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Pedr, to echo your last line; DELIGHTFUL.

I first learned of Arthur in primary school around age 5-6. It was in Welsh so I don't think I understood it much. As time went by I began reading all I could about his legend, the fiction and the "apparently" true story. The legend goes that he was born in Carmarthen during the time of the Roman occupation. Carmarthen being just 21 miles from here. That town is well known for flooding, well at least the land on the flat where the river Towi passes through. The main town is on the hill where the castle stands. The oak tree as legend states will prevent the town from flooding was enchanted by Merlin (or Myrddyn in Welsh) to the enchantment "Carmarthen will not flood while this tree stands" the tree is now homed in the local museum. Merlin took Arthur under his wing and guided him to be king of all Britain. The story I referred to earlier mentions that Arthur and his army lay asleep in a cave and are ready to rise and defend Wales from invasion. They must have slept through the Norman invasion and Hitlers bombs.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Peatle
incredibly fantastic writing ! You are special !

Jim     

The price of anything, is the amount of life you exchange for it.   - H.D. Thoreau
Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.
"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

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Thank you Jan , Jim and Piri, Chordie is truly a place where strings cross international skies.

 Strings Across The Skies
All our mahi woven in strings of songs
Jans beautiful voice and  ukulele strums from New Zealand shores
Gratitude in her lyrics as she sings
From the U.S. plains Jims pen brings to life
Stories that glide through the bright tapestry of life
Each verse a step towards wisdom seas
Where hope and laughter both reside
Even through human sadness
To light the night Piri's voice from Wales and clever instrumentals ascends
In music glow they find our light
Together they teach how life blends
Strings across the skies     

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Pedr, you could wax lyrical about waking in the middle of the night to splash your boots, or toes!
Sometimes the muse hits me.
Sometimes the blues fill me.
Sometimes my heart fills with warmth and joy.
When I read your words, my God they're such joy.
I wish I could write like that.
But then 2 clever dicks my be a stretch too far for one site.
So I bow to your superior wit
Your talent at how you make words fit.
I'm so happy to call you friend
Our hands across the world extend
While you enjoy the warmth and tuis
The cold and rain chill me to the bone.
The snow has come and washed away.
The weatherman says "some more today"
Spring just 2 months away
It's still flipping cold today!     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Diolch Piri your a man with a true talent.