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(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim I actually think your voice has it own wonderful quality it has a Bob sort Dylanish feel but it is still is unique to you. I just record on a cheap cell phone and don't have any fancy gear. My cover is not that great, what I was hoping to sort of pass on was you could make the song even more yours by subtly getting away from knocking on Heavens Door. I love this song lyrically I have a feeling that you could pull it away a bit more from the  knocking on Heaven Door backing and make it even more yours. Having said that your version is far superior to my attempt. Your a  song writer extraordinaire.  I, like you think that Phills musical talent is freaking awesome.

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(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Wow great lyrics I would do it with just two chords G and C.   I will bang it out that way and pop  it up on soundcloud for a couple of days. Hope you don't mind . I will take it down because it is yours. All I can say is it is a great song. I just want you to hear it done by some one else.

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(27 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Correction I should have written Strummer Boy Bill. I have found your YouTube I like what you have put up.

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(27 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Greetings John as I am hopeless at music theory and work by feel, I was wondering is there some where on the net that I could hear some of your sounds.
Many of my fellow Kiwi music dabblers use soundcloud to release their musical ideas to the world. There is also up on soundcloud a group of us having ago at adapting  Strummer Bill and his wife's LOVE  poem into a song. Phill Williams and Kiki Jan plus others have  put their If Sunshine Were Mine on soundcloud. This chordie is a site full of diverse wonderful people welcome.

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(21 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Go the All Blacks will be heard from one end of New Zealand to the other when they confront our Aussie opposition.
The All Blacks will start with one of two Haka's either Ka mate or Kapa Pango.  Ka mate was written by a famous Maori Chief Te Rauparaha. 
The first Part Ka mate Ka mate Ka ora Ka Ora Tis death Tis death Tis Life Tis Life. Or in other words  I may die. I may Live. So its a commitment by the All Blacks to put their life's on the line for the battle against the Aussies. 
The other possible Haka that could be used is Kapa Pango.  The first part roughly translated into English is.
This is our land that rumbles.
Its our time its our moment.
This defines us as All Blacks.
Its our Time Its our moment.
Our dominance our supremacy will triumph.

I hope you all enjoy the game.

Bill you are a positive force. Where would anyone be in life if it wasn't for honest interaction. If we all thought the same how boring. I have thrown another one of my songs up on YouTube about putting words and music together. Hope you  give it a listen and watch.
Pete

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(68 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hugs and Kisses to you two.

Maree and Pete

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(68 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

We are all thinking of you both down here in New Zealand and our wishes are for better times for you both. While you are dealing with the cards that life is testing you with at the moment other people are spreading yours and Dondra's  Sunshine. Jandle now has added a lovely version of If Sunshine Were Mine under Kiki Jan on soundcloud.
I have also put up a version on YouTube.
Kia Kaha ( Stay strong) the Craig Sunshine is spreading.
Maree and Peatle

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Jandle  You have done a beautiful version and the ukulele works perfectly with your spot on vocals. You Shine.

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(68 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Bill and Dondra though you are a long way from many of us out here living in other parts of  the world. You are close to all our hearts.

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(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Thank you Jandle and TIGLJK for your sunshine. In a world that can be a little dark at times it is good to have people that shine uplifting beacons. Showing that  old fashion family VALUES,  friends, and faith in God can lead us through darkness to light.  Bill and Dondra thank you for making your sunshine public and global. Hope Dondra makes it home soon. Your in Maree and Mine, thoughts and prayers.

Pete ( Peatle Jville)

I have had the pleasure of hearing Jandle and Mac sing together they are magic. Easybeat playing guitar with them is like a hand fitting into a glove a perfect match..  I am glad they are not butchers as the receiver of the cut of their action  would have been in big trouble. Now I know what that song the first cut is the deepest is all about.
Loved Mac first up song on soundcloud. Only problem with the name Mac is there is too many of that name on soundcloud making it hard to find. I was only able to find her by going through easybeat's soundcloud.
Now that I am a Chordian  does that make me a member of a strange sect????
As a Chordian do we have to practise weird rituals?????

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Bill and Dondra your love and  warmth for each other is greater than our closest star. Thank you for sharing your sunshine.
Pete

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Dondra and Bill you radiate beautiful warm loving sunshine.
Dondra I can feel her warmth as the words jump of my computer screen and down into my soul.
Yesterday my Maree and I celebrated our 34th wedding anniversary and last night even though it was dark I felt the sunshine of Bill's original words.
Now we have Dondra,s moving words as well.
Special gifts like sunshine are so, so very rare.
Thank you dear friends.

love your Ill Do It on soundcloud. Bill has started something wonderful with his beautiful lyrics. Watch out for Bob Dylans version your voice has a Dylanish quality .
Peatle Jville

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you Bill
I don't really have a genre or set style I try a bit of everything. Please feel free to add me to your blog.
You are an inspiration.
Pete (Peatle)
PS a note to Phill The Welsh can sing and play rugby. The All Blacks can only play rugby and preform Maori Hakas.

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Down here we string our guitars are strung with fencing wire. New Zealanders have a passion for sheep it stops us from over populating our beautiful land with humans. Bad Hobbits have infiltrated us in recent years. Lord Of The Can't Sings is a movie that has let the rest of world know we are here.

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Down here we string our guitars are strung with fencing wire. New Zealanders have a passion for sheep it stops us from over populating our beautiful land with humans. And bad Hobbits have infiltrated us in recent years. Lord Of T

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Down here we string our guitars are strung with fencing wire. New Zealanders have a passion for sheep th

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(37 replies, posted in Poems)

Bill
I love the way people are having a go at your lyrics. I would like to see a International  movement formed called
If Sunshine Were Mine. With all sorts of musicians giving their take on your lyrics to that song  and putting them up on soundcloud. I have put my version up on  soundcloud under Peatle Jville which I think is not that good but the best I could do so at the moment I place myself at third place getter.
So far three countries have submitted I would like to hear more from every where. Mo and Phill love your versions.
I hope more New Zealanders would give it ago as the Northern Hemisphere has got the lead at the moment.
Pete

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great lyrics as usual.no pretence just real and assessable to all us average Joes.

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

My theory for what its worth is I think song writing can be over complicated. Some of the most memorable songs have a sort of simplicity. Janis Joplin didn't bother with chords when she did Mercedes Benz. Give Peace A Chance  three chords simple beat C an F and G. Maybe you  should grab three chords  that you can get to without struggle. Do them in different patterns. C F G plus  a minor chord somewhere might help you to open up your boundaries. Now with the strumming people tend to over strum in my opinion as though their trying to keep up with a treadmill. Maybe try a pattern where you ad a slow two strum twice. Then move it up to a notch to maybe a rolling Four strum then to  slow single down strums with your two and fours in between. I like the idea of subtle under playing rather than over playing. Don't worry to much about it though because at least your lyrics are saying something. When I try to do a song I always, whether its mine or someone else's is not worry about the chords but try and develop a feel that's mine. The other thing is try and fun with it even if its a serious subject. Hope I have offered you something constructive here.
Keep at it and have fun in the process.

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(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you easybeat  and beestie for your support. Songs are great way to describe uplift spirits or hook into emotions. With this inter web technology it has enabled people all over the world to connect even with us people down here at bottom of the globe in New Zealand. Another person I would like to acknowledge  for her support here is jandal known as Kiki Jan on soundcloud.
Imagination opens up the possibilities of the Universe.

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you for your welcome mekidsmom. I  have only started dabbling a bit with music again after taking a 35 years break from it. On soundcloud I am also known as Peatle Jville. I have mainly done my own songs on Soundcloud apart from three cover versions of easybeats songs. It was completely due to easybeat that I decided to have a dabble with music as a way of relaxing and unwinding at home from the pressures of the world. The wonderful Jandal has honoured me by doing a cover of one of my songs on soundcloud  more of a co write as she added some lyrics and made it work. Jandal is Kiki Jan on soundcloud. Beestie is also part of our group of song writers from down here in New Zealand he is an excellent lyricist. I am part Fijian from my mother's side, our culture revolves a lot around singing though I cant really sing myself. Singing I am sure in all cultures is how we uplift ourselves. My early childhood is full of memories of my father and grandperants singing their cockney London songs and my mothers side singing their Fijian songs. I don't know how to do a link. If you are interested in having a listening to my songs go to Peatle Jville on soundcloud. I prefer to think of music as something that stirs the soul. Art to me is another word for creative and I believe everyone in their own way is creative. The difference is some are more entertaining then others,
Love, peace and blessings to you and your family and friends.

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Thought I better mention I have tried to turn Depth And Substance into a song which I have put up on Soundcloud.
Tenement Funster you have a gift for clever words thank you for reading my attempt.