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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Mojo
I am back for round 2


every time I liste to this I love it more and more !
Seriously - this is a hit, man !!

Jim     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Brian,
your poem was read to the kindergarten class at my school. They thought it was hilarious
I added their teacher's name to the lady that had socks stolen.

So - get it frigging published !

Jim     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Brian
you are killing it Dude ! 

So impressed.  you are so witty and clever!

Jim     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I agree with Jan and Peatle as well - Nicely done !!     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

That is brilliant !  Love it !!     
You should make it into a kids song!

Richard
i quite agree with Peatle on this  - very impressive.

Be cool to attend

Jim     

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff

Neat little song. 
Thought the music was well played.  Song fits your voice nicely.
I think you tended to rush a couple of lines just a little bit though - but
you sing and play so much better than I can so what do I know smile ?

Nice job!
Keep'em coming

Jim     

Wow -That is amazing and clever !  Well Done and welcome to chordie     

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff
cute rendition of an episode

Reminds me a bit of Steve Earle and Rodney Crowell  in this video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sUML2yWVn8c

except I'm sure you weren't as lit up as they were smile

Jim     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Holy Cow Mojo !!!

That is an incredible song.
Get it on the radio or something - If Luke Byran wrote it and sang it it would be on the charts immediately !

The Lyrics, the melody, the performance, and your unique voice made this a pleasure to listen too.

Thanks for sharing.

Can you post the lyrics and Chords ?

Jim     

Mojo
That's great - gives you time to lean these songs:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yhN8SdulOFc

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRLML36HnzU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmjrTcYMqBM

LOL smile

If you did- I might go to that party ! smile

Jim     

Great version Neo

The CAT !!    I thought it was a fake one at first:)

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

hysterical  - EB  you are amazingly witty !

  Enjoyed the video Peatle !!   



Jim     

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(3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

Peatle

I liked that a lot - thought he was excellent.

I have been away a week on vacation  with my family - one of the best weeks of my life.
So much fun having all my kids and grandkids together in one place with my wife and I.
Topsail Island, NC  - it is a paradise for sure


Thanks for posting this Peatle !
Here is a link to Guy Clark - keeping with the " roll" theme ! smile

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVpqrnDonto


Jim     

Graham- I wish I could sing and play like you or Phill - I  would play every venue I could.

It looks like so much fun - even though I have seen a lot of idiots giving live music a bunch uncalled for crap.

Enjoy the ride man, I'm just a wannabee spectator!

Jim     

That's very interesting Peatle - never heard that before about the proposal and refusal - can't say I truly believe it.

Good stuff though - nice singer.

Thanks for posting

Cheers

Jim     

Graham
YES !!

That song was actually in my head as I was writing it.

It will be cool to hear your version.

Thanks!!     

Nice one Brian, guitar is excellent.   I like the flow of the rhythm - your voice is perfect for this song.
  Well Done.

Jim     

Thank you  Neo and Peatle

Kind of a budddy Holly song in my head     

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Brian and Peatle
Both are too funny.
My wife spends so much time on her phone - it is annoying.     

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

I agree with Brian !     

A little rock n' roll here  - I used all the words from the SOTM Challenge.
I'm not totally sold on the chords - any suggestions would be appreciated.
Maybe one of the accomplished musicians on here will give it a whirl

also, for some reason it won't let me use just a B - so I made it B7 and it let that work. Beats heck out of me why.

That Girl, She Makes Me Crazy by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[D]I have just about everything [A] I need or want


And[D] what I’m lacking, is just a [A]someday away


I’ve [D]got a picture perfect moment [A] in my mind


[B7] Sunset at Malibu, drinking [E7] high priced wine


.


Verse 2


.




[D]I’ve followed my heart trying to [A] reach the sky


yeah,[D] I’ve punched my ticket to a [A] thousand places


no [D]matter how I’ve wandered or [A]where I’ve roamed


[B7] I’ve found out those roads just[E7] lead me back home




.




chorus


.


Well [D]it’s those memories I have of that girl


[A] ain’t no way to get her off of my mind


ya know [D]she can turn a spark to a ragin’ fire


oh, [B7]she makes me crazy, flood my [E7]heart with desire




.


Verse 3


.



[D]I wish I could walk on water, to[A] impress that girl


I need [D] to show her I’m as cool as[A] winter wind


I’ve[D] gone to my knees and asked the [A]heavens above


What [B7] else can I do to win that [E7]woman’s love


.




chorus


.




Well [D]it’s those memories I have of that girl


[A]There ain’t no way to get her off of my mind


ya know [D]she can turn a spark to a ragin’ fire


oh, [B7]she makes me crazy, flood my [E]heart with desire




.




[D]I wish I could walk on water, to[A] impress that girl


I need [D] to show her I’m as cool as[A] winter wind


I’ve[D] gone to my knees and asked the [A]heavens above


What [B7] else can I do to win that [E7]woman’s love


.




slower


I’ve[D] gone to my knees and asked the [A]heavens above


What [B7] else can I do to [D]win that woman’s [A] love ?





I got one coming - working on it !

trying to use all the words again     

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Baha Jeff
That's perfect !     
You nailed it.

Peatle   
Was this for Maree ?     
You just accomplished the title !!!!


Jim