3,676

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

As promiced I arrived home and recorded your song. It is a 'one take' so you can hear the melody I put to the chords and of course it is on FoC:

http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie

Roger

3,677

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Riannon,

I had a further thought last night.

If you want a more conventional song lay out the first and second verses can be combined to verse one, then the chorus. What is now the third verse could have something like "Her hand trembled as she placed it on his, But it felt so very right, Just then the moon broke through a cloud, And bathed them in it's warm light." (I am no too happy about the moon thing as it has not been mentioned before). Then the chorus again and it will need four lines of what she said before that is at present the fourth verse. This will make it three verses with a chorus between each and the chorus and verse wil be the same length.

Over to you now, it is your song, so if you want the extra adding think about what you you would like there.

Roger

3,678

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Rhiannon,

I have had a chance to do some more work on this song and come to an Internet Café to show you the results. If you do like it I will record it when I get back to my own PC. I have altered the chords and added 2 verses and two choruses. Each chord is one bar long so you will see that the chorus's are twice as long as the verses, a little unusual but I think that it works.

Roger



His Valentine Rose Rhiannon Gilson and Roger Guppy


4/4, slow with feeling




Intro:


[Am] [Em] [F] [G]


.


.


Verse 1:


[Am]She gazed into his [Em]emerald eyes,


[F]Not knowing what to [C]see,


His [F]expression remained [C]oblivious,


To the [F]lovely romantic [G]scene.


.


.


Verse 2:




But [Am]suddenly and unex[Em]pectedly,


With a [F]flourish, he gave her a [C]rose,


And [F]smiled as her [C]face lit up,


For it's a [F]red one that he'd [G]chose. [G]


.


.


Chorus:



[F]Wild thoughts were [G]rushing through her [C] mind, [Am]


[F]Does he know what's [G]meant with a rose of [C]red, [G]


[F]Today is [G]February the [C]fourteenth, [Am]


[F]Her heart was [G]racing as she [C]said. [G]



.


.


Verse 3:




[Am] I thank you for this [Em]beautiful rose,


[F]It was such a sur[c]prise,


[F]I will always re[C]member this day,


Un[F]til the day that I [G]die.[G]


.


.


Chorus:



[F]Wild thoughts were [G]rushing through her [C] mind, [Am]


[F]Does he know what's [G]meant with a rose of [C]red, [G]


[F]Today is [G]February the [C]fourteenth, [Am]


[F]Her heart was [G]racing as she [C]said. [G]


.


.


Verse 4:




[Am]Thank you for the [Em]rose again


[F]I don't want it to [C]die


[F]Will we see each [C]other again?


[F]'Cause I want [G]you to be my [C]guy.



3,679

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Rhiannon,

I think 'emerald eyes' sounds more romantic than 'green eyes' but if you disagree change it back. These are the chords I have put to it and the last line is slowed down to finish.

I will take this with me to work on while I am away and look in again on when I am back with what I have done.



Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

3,680

(2 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hi Fujicrow,

The wire wound strings will be affected by the grease and sweat from your fingers and also corrosion. It collects in the grooves and eventually you can hear that they need changing. Plain wire strings are similarly affected.

Plain nylon strings however are not affected in the same way and so do not need changing as often. When I had a classical guitar I would change the plain nylon ones every second or third time I replaced the wire wound ones.

Roger

3,681

(5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Welcome back Rebel,

I was beginging to wonder where you were and I am pleased it was nothing more than a PC repair keeping you away.

Roger

3,682

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill,

Done MySpace? I have four of them to look after!!.

I think what you have done is what I did and many others have and signed up for an ordinary account instead of signing up as an Artist. I had to cancel mine, wait a couple of days and then re-sign as an Artist but I am sure I remember seeing somewhere that there is a was to convert now. Try looking in the MySpace FAQ. If you have problems please come back to me.

Roger

3,683

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Rhiannon,

How did you know I had green eyes? lol

Of course I will help with you on this song. The lyics you have so far are fine, I just threw some chords at it and it flows very well, the metre is spot-on. I think that your second verse should finish up as the last one.

Two questions for you. How much and what imput do you want from me? Do you want to continue the development of this song here on the forum or by private e-mail?

I shall be away from my PC from Monday morning until Wednesday evening, there is 10 hours time differnce so that will be Monday evening till Thursday morning at your end.

Roger x

3,684

(8 replies, posted in Acoustic)

I had a twelve string back in the 60's when there was only one gauge of string available and it had to be tuned to D to reduce the neck tension. I was very fond of that guitar, I love the fullness of the sound and long to own another.

My friend has music store and on his shelf is a 12 string which gets a airing each time I visit and as it is not too expensive I may do a deal with him at some time to stop me getting all broody when I hear folks talking about one.

Roger

3,685

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Ark,

Oooops and major apologies to everyone. I transposed the chords from A to C for the verses but forgot to transpose them for the chorus and as I played it in both keys I did not notice until now. Senior moment I'm afraid but error now corrected

Much embarrassed Roger

3,686

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill,

"Don't believe in faeries"!!!, of course there are faeries, when I was a kid everytime I lost a tooth the Tooth Faerie would leave a shilling for it whilst I was asleep.

I did enjoy what I was able to play of your song. Unfortunately, when playing a completely unknown song I cannot remember ther chord sequence so I can only play as much as has the chords listed but what I played was good.

Roger

3,687

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi IBE,

Welcome to Chordie and I am afraid I can only second that Arkady has already said.

You have got your start. To complete your song you now need to expand the chord sequence with possibly a variation for a chorus and to work out some lyrics for it.

Good luck and do ask if you need help.

Roger

3,688

(4 replies, posted in Electric)

Hi que522,

I would suggest you took it back to the guy that did the work on your guitar. It sounds to me as if you may have a sightly raised 21st fret or the action has been set too low, unless you have changed the strings since it was set up. Putting on a lighter guage set of strings can give this effect too.

However someone more qualified than I may be able to suggest something different.

Hope you soon get it sorted,

Roger

3,689

(10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Tone Freak,


I too would like to welcome you to Chordie. It is like one big happy family here, with everyone willing to help one another. Members skills range from novice to professional musicians, ages range from teens to 60's and and are from all around the globe.

Take care,

Roger

3,690

(23 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Mine was not as posh as all yours.

It was Christmas 1958, I was 11 and both my brother Colin and I received a 4 string, plastic guitar with Elvis Presley badges on it. It came with an 'autochord', a plasic box that strapped on the fingerboard with buttons to press to play the chords so no sore fingers. We were soon playing "Home On The Range" (the only one that remember that came with it's songbook) until the 'autochord' broke, then it was sore finger time. Unfortunately the plastic frets did not last too long neither and so those guitars have long since been destroyed but I do wish I had kept mine.

Roger

3,691

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jerry,

Why not post the lyrics and chords on this forum? It will then give us a chance to play them ourselves and comment.

Roger

3,692

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song Jeff,

More brownie points from 'she who must be obeyed' no doubt wink

Roger

3,693

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Midnight,

Nice use of chords, giving a haunting timbre which suit the lyrics very well.

Roger

3,694

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well done Alvee,

Good song, hopefully the first of many. I only need now to persuade you to record it so we can hear how you intended it.

Roger

3,695

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Helena,

Your song only needs a one word reply - "Just Beautiful"

Roger

Hi Lieven,

I think you are trying to go down the wrong road looking for 'software to correct tracks'. It is far, far easier and quicker to re-record a guitar or vocal track that is not right.

Russell is absolutely correct, apart from a microphone, you appear to have everything you need. I know you are impatent, but you really must set aside time to read the Boss 600 manual and experiment with it, the more you use it the easier it becomes and the more you find out what it can do.

Take care,

Roger

3,697

(25 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hi Clansman,

When I am practicing I always spend some time just playing chords at random, keeping a regular rhythm of course. Write a sequence, but keep changing the sequence or use songs to follow if it helps.

Now for me I am looking for a sequence of chords changes I can use in song writing but for you if you find you stumble on a particular change you can repeat it to get it smooth. Very obvious, but important, is to keep the tempo going, even if you muff a chord (muff a chord and keep going and very few will notice, muff a chord and stop and the world will know).

Roger

3,698

(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Oldnewbie,

The problem with .wav files is the size, mp3 are compressed to approximately 1/10th the size with little loss of quality. It normally takes me about 5 minutes to upload and mp3 song so you can see the time it would take to upload a .wav file, also the website would have to allocate 10 times the amount of disc space for each user.

Arkady's suggestion is probably the best but if there are only a few songs you want to upload I can put them on Friends of Chordie for you. The problem there is that with space for only 6 songs the oldest one has to be removed each time a new one is put there, so the length of time it is available depends on how often nwe ones are sent to me. Please write to me privately if you do want to go down this route.

Roger

3,699

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Daddycool,

I really liked this one, so much so that I have recorded it this evening for my collection of Chordie songs. (There's a copy winging it's way through cyberspace to you as I write)

I was rather strange, this song is about nature and halfway through recording it my cat came in with a live mouse and proceeded to play with it at my feet. As soon as I had finished I put the poor thing out of its misery.

Thank you,

Roger

3,700

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Oldnewbie,

I am glad you liked my humble effort. Yes sorry about the chords, when writing the music I was concentrating on the emotion I want to portray, it was not until I posted it that I noticed the chords I used. I will try and make the next one easier to play.

Roger