Peatle, good message in your poem "always shine your light". Some other good lyrics in there too such as "you can not edit an empty page".
Phill, that's another good piece of writing by you.
402 2023-12-21 03:40:33
Re: Cover of Song - He Was Born (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jim, a nice one that bounced along, great lyrics. I hope I get time to have a go at this one.
403 2023-12-21 03:32:43
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
TIGLJK, another great song by you. It definitely will suit being performed like "This Train".
easybeat, nicely performed and clever bit of writing with "Delivery Man" lol
neophytte, I look forward to hearing this one when its finished.
404 2023-12-12 01:19:37
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
neophytte, that really suited your voice, I enjoyed it.
Grah1, that made me laugh, good impresson of the drunk singing 
405 2023-12-12 01:08:17
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
TIGLJK, I really like this song you wrote, very appropriate for the season.
406 2023-12-12 01:04:12
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Phill Williams wrote:
good question Brian, I've heard it said many times in films. Maybe it's the only holiday they get in the USA? I know they get lots less than us lucky Brits.
Jan mentioned I should include Hey Santa on FSOTM as it's a christmas song, I thought it was a boozers ode like Fairy Tale Of New York?
https://soundcloud.com/iphillfine/hey-s … al_sharing
Hey Phill, when I clicked on the link, the song isn't there.
407 2023-12-12 01:02:32
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Peatle Jville wrote:
It is great to see all the good songs on here this month. Here is my attempt at a Christmas song. Sorry about my terrible voice as usual but I hope it entertains a little bit.
Merry Christmas everyone and Love and Peace to you all.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5duPgwuk18
A lovely message in your song Peatle, a message I agree with. Nicely done, nicely performed.
408 2023-12-12 00:56:38
Re: wow (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Amazing guitarists to watch.
409 2023-12-07 08:28:24
Re: Hey Santa (4 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Nicely done Phill, easy listening and fun. Loved the ending where you spoke 
As neophytte said, how about entering it FSOTM as well.
410 2023-12-07 08:19:09
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Great to see you entering a song again Brian for FSOTM. I liked the message in it, "family together having a good time".
411 2023-12-05 00:58:28
Re: New CD - XS in an XXL world (13 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Well done, you are putting yourself out there and following up on your talents. Good for you
412 2023-12-05 00:55:44
Re: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Aww nicely done together Richard. Great to see you both performing together and enjoyed the laughter at the beginning. Eunice has a lovely voice
413 2023-12-05 00:50:02
Re: Bushfire (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Wow, glad your safe neophytte from the fires.
414 2023-12-03 08:39:35
Re: Worth The Wait (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
That was good Brian, a happy song that bounced along. Nicely done.
415 2023-12-03 08:33:00
Re: Self Depreciation (8 replies, posted in My local band and me)
I enjoyed this one Peatle, I must have missed it the first time you showed it on You Tube. Good message and yes, I can relate to the still young inside too. I liked the sound effects you put on it too.
416 2023-12-03 08:12:43
Topic: SUGGESTIONS JANUARY 2024 - ANY WORDS (3 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
JANUARY 2024 SUGGESTIONS, can you believe it, JANUARY ALREADY! 2024 ALREADY!
So, this month, pick ANYand as MANY WORDS as you want.
Post them in the comments below
417 2023-12-03 07:44:20
Topic: DECEMBER 2023 FSOTM - RANDOM WORDS FROM A SITE- CHRISTMAS SONGS (46 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Well, here we are in *~* Tis the Season to be Jolly *~*
It`s time to get your favorite CHRISTMAS SONGS out and COVER for us or write your own ORIGINAL CHRISTMAS SONG.
As well this month, we have more RANDOM WORDS from a site that you can choose from. You know the play by now, you can COVER a SONG/SONGS from any of the RANDOM WORDS listed below or you can write your own ORIGINAL SONG from any or all of the words.
Here are the RANDOM WORDS:
STEM SAD
OUTLET TOWN
SMOKE DARKNESS
PLASTIC TOUCH
SHY BREATH / BREATHLESS
NEGOTIATION SECRET
CAR BELIEVE
VENTURE NAUGHTY / NICE
RIDE STOCKINGS
KISS SNOW
Looking forward to hearing what you all come up with.
*~* MERRY CHRISTMAS*~*
418 2023-12-03 06:54:45
Re: Suggestions - FSOTM December 2023 (10 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Awesome everyone
419 2023-11-24 07:57:10
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Jim, once again great lyric`s by you and I agree with Peatle, that line popped out for me too, "keep a song in your heart". I wish I had your talent for writing songs
420 2023-11-24 07:52:38
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
TIGLJK wrote:
Jan
I liked it - quite a bit of truth to that conversation !
That poem could go on for days I believe
Well done
Jim
Thanks Jim, I am sure it could go on for days lol
421 2023-11-19 01:03:51
Re: Tone deaf test (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I got 14 out of 15. I could kick myself because the one I got wrong, I changed my mind at the last minute and got it wrong lol
422 2023-11-19 00:45:25
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Peatle, thanks for the feedback. It was fun trying to think of words to rhyme. Yes, me to hope this cough goes away soon, slightly better today
easybeat, thanks for your comments too. It kind of just developed into a conversation more by accident than on purpose
neophytte, thanks
423 2023-11-16 02:50:55
Re: Suggestions - FSOTM December 2023 (10 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Ride
Kiss
Sad
town
424 2023-11-16 02:46:31
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
I am still coughing so haven't entered anything last month or this month. So tried to write a quick poem of sorts using the word ADORNING in it. My writing skills are not the best when it comes to poetry or songs for that matter lol but at least it's an attempt and something to enter. Hopefully my cough will go soon enough for me to be able to perform something soon.
ADORNING
"Hello there, good morning,
how did you sleep?" he asked as I was yawning.
"Not so good" I replied. "You kept me awake with your snoring".
"Oh, so sorry, I`m overtired" he said.
"For better or worse in marriage,
says that ring, ADORNING your finger".
We both chuckled as I grabbed the milk and continued pouring.
"What's on your schedule today I asked?"
"I need to go down to the mooring,
the boat needs some new parts which I will be ordering".
"By the looks of the weather warning, it will soon be pouring" he said.
"Oh, thought I would pop out for a bit,
go look at a new rug for the flooring.
This adoring purring cat of ours,
well, he ruined the last one with all his clawing".
425 2023-11-16 02:30:53
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
neophytte wrote:
Jandle wrote:neophytte, I remember this song that you and Jai did, just as enjoyable to listen and watch this time too. I loved the concentration on Jai`s face. Though your son will be older now, I hope you both still get to jam together sometimes. I know you did one with Jai playing piano when he was older, hope this keeps up with you two
Thanks Jandle, I missed this yesterday (I went down the YouTube rabbit hole after watching Peatle - hahah) - yer, we still do the occasional jam, although he is working hard on his own music, mostly for his game, but he did lay down a solo for one of the songs I'll be releasing on CD. He played the songs in a solo piano performance he did as part of the schools musical show.
Cheers
Richard
Jai is very talented by the looks of it neophytte with his music and creating games, very clever indeed.