hi selso,
nice one pardner, you never said what you did to get inside, nothing nasty i hope?
phill
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hi selso,
nice one pardner, you never said what you did to get inside, nothing nasty i hope?
phill
when i joined chordie, i joined as a songwriter, but i saw that some offerings were largely poems with a chord symbol or two thrown in to make it look like a song! so i posted some of my poems. then the poem section opened so the poems went there and the closet poets also posted there which is a good thing i think? because it outed them so to speak.
then we come to poems being songs without music, like i said on the poem section elton john and bernie taupin got together by luck, and there's nothing to say that it couldn't happen here, after all there is probably truck loads of composers out there looking for a good verse to get them going.
i don't mind what the section is called but lyrics/poems sounds quite descriptive and gets my vote.
i really dont believe that song writers are abandoning ship because of the poem section, and i'd rather have my two main interests under one roof, i've also written short stories, but they wont get posted here...honest!
when your a writer your a writer, songs poems books...your a writer
phill
Here's another reply to your Ode to Animals...it's called oh de animals
I had a little rabbit
She was such a pretty thing
She had big floppy ears
And her eyes were pretty pink
God was in his heaven
But a miracle he worked
`Cos I never saw the buck come round
But my rabbit she got...mated!
So not-so-long later
The stork came round to call
And left a basket full of bunnies
All white and fluffy they were all
Do I take them to the pet shop
Do I sell them on E-Bay?
Do I take them down to the canal
Weigh the bag down with a brick?
No, I was more enterprising
While I sat down for my meal
Rabbit stew is on the table
Bunny skins are on my feet.
Now wise men will always tell you
There's a meaning for every life
Rabbits go in stew
And stew goes in the wife.
Ahhhh, anyone for seconds?
upyerkilt made a comment about one of my songs that he didnt get it until he heard the recording, and i agree. i cant usually make other peoples songs out just by looking at the words with chord symbols, i can read music but i cant make sense of the dots and squiggles till i hear the song played. the song in question was written by first of all putting together the chord sequence then penning the words to fit. so bearing this in mind i thought; how many other songs could we all think of that were written as poem's then put to music as with elton john putting music to bernie taupins words, or a tune with words added later, eg yesterday was called scrambled eggs until mccartney found his words.
let's have some suggestions...dont just look, write
phill
nice one mark,
have you and russ got a competition going or what?
phill
aw russel you old animal lover you...i'm still smiling, i laughed aloud thanks for that cos i've been very depressed lately...turkey "your stupid but tasty" i dare say there are some veggies out there who have wiped you off their christmas list
brill
phill
hi selso,
cool songs my friend with a big country feel,
phill
thanks to you all,
lena, i like to surprise when i can
ark, glad you liked them
selso, it's nice to have a change occasionally.
i've just heard roger's take on this song, before he's heard mine and it's great, it's got a very country feel and i'm truly surprised how a song can be so different in another persons interpretation. i really hope he'll post it so everyone can hear it.
phill
hi
i've been suffering since christmas with this voice loss thing, but once i start to sing at my gigs it seems to disappear...? strange huh?
my agent who is also an artist, has had this infection since before that, she sounds as if she has a heavy cold [i've only spoken to her over the phone just in case!!!]
i've heard a lot recently about fruit having a natural antibiotic, which might explain why i don't suffer a lot with colds, flu etc. try it...an apple a day and all that, and a banana an orange a kiwi fruit...you get my drift?
phill
hi alan,
what a beautiful song and the images were also fab! notice that they took it when the sun was shining, it always rains when i'm in ireland, but next time i'm gonna visit your temple.
i liked the way you put a little twist in the tale, "the boat touching the sand means i must take away my hand from your hand" priceless. well done and thanks for sharing.
phill
Hi guys,
thanks for the replies
Hi Ken,
yes I've always found that, I can't make much sense of what people write till I've heard it sung then it falls into place.
Hi Alan,
shall I send you some panadol? I find it helps...lol, it's funny how songs dictate how they want to be performed, when I started to write this it was a ballad!
Hello Kenny,
to be able to sing like that...indeed, I haven't been able to talk for the last couple-a-days!
The ancient Egyptians wrote in rock which is why we can still read what they had to say..ROCK ON
Phill
thanks russ, you can find this on myspace now, let me know what you think
this has been uploaded to my space...click the web button on the left.
this is a throw back to my heavy rock days...long, long ago.
phill
Hi Lena,
yes it just came to me as I wrote my reply, but I liked it so much my-self that I'm thinking of writing a song around it, thank you for your appreciation
phill
hi alan,
when i listened to your recordings, this is the one i liked best, maybe because of the song or because the subject interested me?
i like story songs and this is so descriptive and somehow manages to take you there...i like that too!
a very tenderly written lament
phill
oooh lena,
what a very sensual little poem. it describes how i feel perfectly for my wife. so thank you for allowing me to read it.
all this and summer too, it's been a gorgeous day, what a lovely way for it to end.
no bullets just a kiss
no pain but the ache in my heart
no loneliness but to be alone with you
no fear, but that this day would end
phill
alan, beauty is skin deep my friend, what i see is the poet within, and the concern for your family and your friends is what makes the beauty and the words you utter and write.
keep the peace
phill
hi doc,
your english may not be to her majesty's standard, but you get your point across very well, your life story in a 2 minute poem? sounds like a good thread to me, i'll get my thinking cap on tomorrow as i have a gig to get to tonight.
nice one doc
phill
hi alan,
nice songs nicely recorded, i had a quick listen to all of your songs while i was there, they would sound great played by a group of some kind. try the recording section, there have been many collaborations and i'm sure they'd be happy to help.
phill
Hi Russ,
A little word of warning here; Scotch is a drink, the people are Scottish! Don't want the hit squads roaming the streets of Buffalo[?] looking for you ![]()
Yes Alan, we were all Celts together, before the Romans brought Christianity here, then came the Norse, then the Saxons then the Normans...talk about mongrels?
I'm Welsh, but the Welsh trait is short and dark haired. I'm tall and blond [ish] [Norse] with green eyes,[?] Roman nose and a lovely temperement. my only Welsh trait is my accent [accident?] ![]()
and the fact that I love singing!
Phill
thank you all for your thanks and support, i've only just become a moderator and i didnt want to say anything until it was confirmed, so yes i am so delighted!
by-the-by gitaardocphil, we're not all from the usa, i live just accross the channel from you and right a bit in wales. where i work i meet many belgian lorry drivers, so say hello for me.
and i also agree that roger is a very supportive and helpful friend to have..thanks again
nos da, a ddiolch
phill
it's so nice to see solidarity from two beautiful irish folk. i dont think anyone [in their right minds] want to return to the "bad old days" i always ask myself; "what pleasure do they get from killing and maiming other humans?", [i dont understand hunting either!] so lets hope this can be quashed before it begins.
alan, nicely written my friend, very heartfelt and emotional, let us know when you've put music to it and it's up on your web.
good work
phill
what a delightful song, well recorded too, and i could feel the emotion in the singing, just lovely, if you dont mind i'd like to go back and listen to the other songs when i have more time.
well done and thank you
phill
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