4,501

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny,

back with a bang my friend, this has some fine imagery seems very melancholy though, can't wait to hear it....any chance?

phill

4,502

(46 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

uhhuh, i would like to draw your attention to the "sticky" at the top of the site page [GUIDLINES FOR ENJOYING THE FORUM]...please read it

phill

4,503

(46 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

boy am i glad i never did drugs or alcohol in my younger days!  i remember the 60's...does that mean i wasn't there?

uh huh, the avatar looks like a blow fish to me sucking on some "blow" which explains a lot

going back to the original subject...we can all swear and curse, but do we in polite company? i don't and i get offended when i hear others do it. it may have something to do with the way i was brought up...to respect the female, and i always think of that when posting also the fact that there may be youngsters looking in to this site who think "if these adults can use that kind of language, then it must be OK" standards are falling, and how much further can they fall before we arrive back in the stone age? uggh that's all for now

phill

4,504

(15 replies, posted in Recording)

at a guess, some of you out there have professional equipment, which can add FX in the mix. there are one or two of us less fortunate ones out here that can't afford such gear. all the recordings i produce are for demo purposes, not professional, as russ says "it gets done professionally, by professionals in the studio...that's why they get the big bucks...maan" [not exactly what he said, but that's the inference i got]

i also like to have some reverb on my mike during recording...but not on my bass guitar!


phill

hi simmo,

nice bitter/sweet bit of verse, you mean you've actually been a member for a whole year and now is your first submission? come on, get your act together, lets have more

phill

4,506

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

so deep and heartfelt,

  hi alan

i pity obama, as it seems the eyes of the world are upon him. the first black president, why make the distinction? lets hope in a years time we [and i mean...the world] can say "the first world leader of the 21st century to mean what he said and to do what he said he would"
remember thatcher [spits] we all said "the first woman prime minister" also the last...i wonder why?  [cause she was crap!!!]
lets hope he can fulfill his promise, he can't right the wrongs of the last presidency, and it may take years to get the world back on track, and of-course it all depends on his supporters and helpers, no one person however powerful can do it all them-self.

oh...[climes down from the soap box] nice work mate, encapsulates the hopes, dreams and wishes of the world


phill

4,507

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

you can sleep with thoughts like these? lol

if it was so old it was written in latin, it would still be welcome, especially form you helena.

my wife was once given a dream catcher to stave away the night terrors, but all it seems to catch is dust!

i like this and the reference to "pandora" slipped in under the mat. you have always been profound then, it's not just a recent thing? my writings are so shallow, i can't hide anything behind a veil of flowery words [that was an attempt...failed i think?]

nice work, young lady, makes me yearn for more


phill

4,508

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

it's funny people seem to be looking but not commenting. it's nice to get a bit of feedback and even get a conversation going.

choo choo fer noo

phill

4,509

(5 replies, posted in Recording)

i've owned and used several shure mikes over the years, i hate uni's as i tend to about a bit when i'm singing.
i once had a yamaha mike, which you could use in front of the speakers with out feed back, it was excellent, but it's now broke, so i bought a beyer TGX 60, which is very good, it's also a omni, which i also use for recording.
i do find that an excess of reverb [that word again] will cause a lot of feedback, so if you use it, keep the mike behind the speakers.

phill

4,510

(15 replies, posted in Recording)

funnily enough, when i saw the programme, i assumed that paul had shared credits with the band as it was plainly stated in the prog that he had no concept or pre-written material before the sessions in south africa, and that he listened, cut and messed about with the tracks before writing words and melodies. it was a retrospective and there seemed to be no animosity between them.
i think it was a bit off of mr simon not to give credit to the guys as a jam session includes everyone, as everyone contributes to it, maybe he has compensated them since?

back to the original subject...

the use of FX during a session can be counter-productive, as once they're on they're on...
but surely FX like sustain or fuzz helps with the feel of the song during recording? i can't imagine "smoke on the water" recorded "dry" or the solo at the end of "romeo and juliet" [dire straits] with-out the echo.
as for bass...definitely in the mix

i like this discussion...i'm learning so much

phill

4,511

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

casey jones eat your heart out

phill

4,512

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

In case you didn't get it, this is about a busker, actually it's about me singing in pubs and clubs, it's all masked and double meaninged...[no such word?]

phill

4,513

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I jotted this down quickly last night before leaving for my gig, then finished it today and put it on my-space

My Guitar SongUndefined


[G]I prefer to [C]play my [G]guitar in the summer


And [G]inspiration [C]for my [G]songs come from the gutter






And I [Em]know I'm not [D]good


But I [C]try to be [G]kind


And I [Em]know while I [D]sing


I can [Am]hide [D]behind


My [G]guitar


[G]Winter's cold it gets [C]hard to [G]hold down the strings


When the [G]rain comes [C]down and it [G]kills the sound


Can't make it sing




Well I [Em]know I'm not [D]good


But I'm [C]not all that [G]bad


And the [Em]rain comes [D]down


I can [Am]make you [D]glad


With my [G]guitar





chorus




As I [Am]sing in the subway


And [D]pick out my tunes


You can [Am]sing along


And I'll [D]play just for you


With my [G]guitar




I'll [G]play you a song if you [C]pay me the [G]price of a coffee


[G]Words come easy but I'll [C]make you [G]pay for the pleasure


Well I [Em]know I'm not [D]good


But I've [C]got to [G]eat


[Em]Shirt on my [D]back


And [Am]shoes on my [D]feet


And my [G]guitar


repeat chorus



4,514

(15 replies, posted in Recording)

should mai, buttie?

yeah i'm with you here, when they played back the track [obviously it was recorded 20? years ago] the reverb was there, it could have been recorded on but i doubt that as they normally like to add FX later in the mix, and it was on tape. any way if you've got sky have a look at anytime player, it should still be on there...

phill

4,515

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny, glad to hear from you, i was beginning to get worried, hope all your problems evaporate very quickly, thanks also for the review.

talk soon i hope

phill

4,516

(15 replies, posted in Recording)

hi,

just wanted to tell someone about this;

i was watching a tv prog called "classic albums" which was about the making of paul simon's "graceland"

they dissected the tracks and showed how the songs were written and recorded, the shocker for me was a bass part on "call me al" [i think it was] they muted all the other tracks and played the bass part, it had reverb on! now i've always recorded bass flat or maybe a little chorus, but i was knocked out by the use of reverb on a bass track!

so question;  is reverb used by other more experienced chordians?

if so, all the time?

or just for special stand out parts?

or just on certain songs?

any and all suggestions and advice welcome

phill

4,517

(1 replies, posted in Poems)

what a beautiful story well told and even without music it's so lyrical and musical almost classical

well done

hpill  [pronounced phill] lol

4,518

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

hi alan,

i don't know if i was meant to laugh, but i had a little chuckle at this...in a nice way. it combines all the elements; a story, a romantic undercurrent, a scene and does it all with humour and fluidity, pity you had to be a rat at the end and tell her it was all just a memorable one night stand! but that's what it's all about...well done

phill

4,519

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

hi resprod

nice one for a first attempt, can i suggest though, the chorus says;

"what i could do to you for one hour"

sounds a little blokey [chauvinistic]

might i suggest;

"what we could do in one hour"

phill

4,520

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kbrassel [interesting handle]

my only advice is not to have a formula of any kind, granted the chorus must contain the hook [my downfall] but to start a song with a game plan...well!

when i got to the second verse [if your going verse>chorus > verse etc] of "god is it time" was a sort of continuation of the 1st verse which was a flash-back by the soldier out on the battlefield thinking about his wife at home, the chorus is how he pleads with god to let him survive the coming battle and to get home safely. the bridge talks of the battle itself and the fears going through his mind while facing the enemy. the last verse is post battle where he lies in the mud, blood mingling with the enemy's and friends alike, and his final thought before he dies, which are of his wife. then the prayer "god is it time" which i thought was a poignant statement so i used that as the title.

any way i've explained the story behind the song, the story [i think] is the important part of any song and it needn't be earth shattering or relevant to the world at large, but even "doo wha diddy" the manfred man song from the 50's had a story; girl walks down the street, boy chats her up, takes her out and they get married....how simple is that?

moral; don't lose sleep over not repeating the title 10 times in a song, make it sound good and have a catchy hook

phill

4,521

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks russ and thanks to you too ark, it's nice when your work is appreciated, though i have to say this song like all the others i've written was just an accident, it just came out like that! i'd like to know if other writers on this site have noticed the same?

glad you liked the recordings helena, did you check out the song at the bottom of the list called "mothers day?" i thought it might have something for you, i'd like to know your thoughts on it.

thanks again

phill

4,522

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Ken,

thank you glad you like it

Thanks to you too Helena, nice to see you back, I was beginning to think we'd lost you

If you'd like to hear this track, I've now up-loaded it onto my-space...click the web button, and before you start thinking that I've suddenly improved 2000% on my guitar playing, the guitars are played by Russ Harding, so big thanks to him for that plus his encouragement and mixing.

Phill

4,523

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ,
same here my keyboard must also be a uk one even though it's a microsoft !

alan it's not complicating things, we all want to get it right, keep on keeping on

phill

4,524

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

didnt want to say "bitch" on line

4,525

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

just want to add...i've never pee'd in anyone's wardrobe, that was someone else...honest [though i will say, he also pee'd on his baby!....the demon drink

thanks for the nice comments, glad no-one's taking it the wrong way

phill