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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Jim I like the way you come up with songs that work.     

Jim once again you have written a song that works real good.     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Welcome Zippy that is a great poem I like the way you write.     

Happy New Year Jan to you and your clan.     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Piri, our two stories are similar about our marriage and how we got together with our wife's.
Yours set in Wales mine in New Zealand.
I have just been reading about  connections between the Welsh dragon and King Arthur’s famous sword Excalibur. The  version I like  says Excalibur’s blade was forged in dragon’s breath, imbuing it with magical power.  As a result I wrote this below on reading your reply above.
My mind wonders in all sorts of weird directions when comparing your life in Wales and mine in New Zealand. As my younger brother says my head goes of in naf tangents.

O sing, O muse, Maree's roasting words bring on Pedr’s sun-kissed grin.
 Amidst the ferns where Kiwi dreams of places where Dragons and scales do their mythical musical thing!
Pedr's, Maree’s laugh—keeps him rock and rolling with her tease— .
Up in the hills away from the sea the summer salted breeze hits their valley, Just as the man on the radio plays a song called ""Long Tall Sally".

While across in Wales where winter waves do purr, Bold Piri winks at Ann (a cheeky sir). 
In a town by the sea, their love’s at its frothy best, Where family’s have fun and laugh in jest.
O laughter’s sparks, that fuel their heart’s delight— Inspiration swims and love shines its light! 
As a Beatles song comes on the radio in full flight filling the air with delight.
No matter where its heard in the northern or southern hemisphere "Long Tall Sally" sounds alright.
Lovers with different names laugh with delight.
Around midnight da man from Jamaica sings "turn on de light."     

That is good Jim great song and the visuals work good.     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

At the top of Ngauranga Gorge is Johnsonville 
Here, in my suburb where Mount Kaukau stands proudly over the west side loud whispers and chuckles with a friendly hello echo around this valley Johnsonville’s folk mostly gather, not in gowns or solemn suits, but in relaxed armour and laughter-shields. They celebrate the art of nodding greetings mid-walk, the sacred ritual of a wave with a friendly wink, and the curious talent of knowing nearly everyone’s nick name— where half the cats probably own three neighbours each. Beneath these skies, jokes bounce like mountain goats wild and free— “Keep off my lawn,” means “Come down to the pub, club or cafe for a drink" and everyone knows it. The wind carries stories more reliable than any weather forecast: tales of tripped-over footpaths and heroic rubbish bin chases. A toast to a residents that has died might read: “Cheers to a friend who never missed a party". On a fine day while walking around I see people sitting on benches chatting pulling down invisible walls telling stories with plenty of smiles.”  Johnsonville’s shopping mall once the center of the village is now where dissatisfaction lingers as it retail heart dies. Despite the mall there is a celebration stitched in the fabric of cheeky yells and heartfelt hellos. So here’s to this top-of-the-gorge village a place live with humour, where community isn’t just a word—it’s an ongoing punchline. 
We have the odd bad egg here in Jville but most people are good.
Here is a poem about leaving here as a young man and then returning years later.  I was going to write a song but nothing came to me.
                   Back to here
I left this valley as a youth with restless, roaming heart
Through lands unknown and skies withdrawn 
Anonymity my art 
The cities’ throng would wash me out,
A face among the countless many 
Yet in that vast and wandering route 
My spirit’s longing grew
For places that to me were to be found
I left the hearth at break of dawn
A youth with restless, roaming heart
Through lands unknown and skies withdrawn,
Anonymity my art.
The cities’ throng would wash me out
A face among the countless few,
Yet in that vast and wandering route,
My spirit’s longing grew.
For years I danced ‘neath foreign stars,
With whispers strange and stories spun,
But found no peace within those bars— No place to call my “one.”
Then came a light as clear as spring,
An epiphany so bright and true:
The soil where roots can gently cling— That space was here anew.
With Maree’s hand held firm in mine,
Our laughter blends with winds that stir,
Together weaving love's design— Here’s where my soul will purr.
The road had led me far and wide,
Yet joy sang loud when near my shore— In home’s embrace I now abide;
Adventures?
Need no more! New
In another place I need no more!

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(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

HNY from Wellington New Zealand the first Capital city in the world to see the new year in due to the prime meridian strip  and how the internation date line works. All to do with our geographical position to Greenwich.  Have a safe peaceful 2026.

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Brian and Jim thank you for your comments. I will give you some info  about the two buskers life's who I based the character of Joe on.                
Micheal Wahrlich (1955–2023), better known as Mike The Juggler was the busker who juggled tennis balls always with a big smile on his face in the streets of Wellington for about three decades. He was killed in a fire, which occurred in a hostel where he lived . A man was subsequently charged with arson and murder. When Micheal first moved to Wellington, he became a lawnmower for the Wellington City Council in the 1980s, and was later made redundant. In the late 90s, he met a man playing the guitar on the streets , and after seeing him succeed, Micheal decided that he would also entertain the public, by juggling tennis balls on the street. 
The other busker was John D'Estaing Adams aka Kenny died June 8, 2011, aged 64 from a brain tumour.  Many Wellingtonians  have memories of Kenny the Busker, he was a significant part of our city night life at the time, adding to its diversity and vibrancy .  
Born in the USA Texas in 1946, he was an actor, singer and musician, moved to Wellington New Zealand in 1992 to fulfil his commitment to missionary work, and combined his vocation with his love of music by performing in the city most evenings.  He told me that he came to New Zealand thinking he could save people here but soon realized this country was saving him from his personal demons. He looked a little bit like Kenny Rogers that's where he got his name from.
In his repertoire of songs was "The Gambler' by Kenny Rogers many times when passing him on the street there would be a crowd singing "The Gambler" along with him.
Kenny was a divisive character in the city but most Wellingtonians over the age of 40 will have some sort of a memory of him.
I knew Kenny and talked with him frequently on the street.
Many questioned his musical prowess, but one thing was clear, Kenny had charm and charisma and became an icon in his adopted city of Wellington.
He was an entertainer and is sadly missed by many when he left us too early.

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

When your heroes become human,
D5                      (slide to F @ 9th fret)
1 Do you face what’s left, and try to defend?
2  Look within,
3  Close your eyes, don't be discouraged
4  Stand your ground
5  Step aside, never give up you have no choice but to defend     

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

This is short piece is about a person who I will call Joe it is loosely based on two real life characters who have passed on.  One was known as Kenny who had many a run in with the city council here.  The other was a juggler who when out busking always had a smile on his face and died in tragic circumstances.                   
              Joes Story
There once was a man named Joe who sang and played guitar on City Streets
 He’d entertained through the rain, the cold, and the blues. 
“Believe!” he would sing, with a guitar in his hand
 “Keep going,” he urged, all who came across him in Wellington.” 
 One day in a shopping mall, he faced a firm “No you cant play here.” 
Joe just took this as a “Yes you can play here” — don’t you know? He chatted and joked with folks passing by.
Police arrived to a crowd having a good time telling the Mall manager this aint a crime
He aint costing you a penny and people are having a good time

 Played my songs to all types of cats Joe would say often—oh my, so much music to supply! I'm that type of guy.
Count your blessings,” he said with a grin quite wide, Despite a runny noses and sore throats.
 “Just do it!” was Joe’s loud comedic creed:
 With faith and some laughter and music, he’d always succeed.
To every soul faced with trials
Keep marching with a steady smile
Through storms and dark gloom, your every step will open doors to different rooms— One foot, then the next, all the while when appropriate wear a smile.
   Happy New Year

Merry Christmas I thank you, Jim, for your songs, that bridge the oceans, covering the distances, leading us homeward through sounds that resonate from the South Pacific to the wide expanse of the USA, and across the rest of the sprawling globe, reminding us of the warmth we share on this wondrous journey of life. You write good songs all the best to you and your family.   
With all great music and lyrics about joy and love they are not just about a place or time, 
but also the beat of the hearts that find each other, 
wrapped in the glow of love, 
shining brighter than any star, 
echoing long past that day or special moment, 
long past the changing tides, 
in those magic events friends and family share, 
the essence of special times 
forever cherished in memory are of those who matter to us the most
Peace and goodwill to all

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(1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Thank you, Jim, that was real good great music and also super cool. Magic seeing where it all started also.     

Good to see your recovering well from your injuries Jan.  look forward to hearing more of your music. Also great to see all of this month's contributors' songs on here keep up the good work everyone and Merry Christmas to you and your families.     

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(5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Bill all the best for 2026 and Merry Christmas.
Season greetings peace and good will to all Chordians.

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

TIGLJK wrote:

Peatle - great point thanks thinking of that !! 
I have added a bridge at the end - hope it addresses it enough
without making the song depressing.

Cheers !!
Jim

That addition is excellent Jim.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Clever lyrics Jim but I also suspect for some unfortunate children and their parents it is also a tough time of year,     

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(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Sometime pop ups appear when I have looked at chordie recently but not every time.     

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(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

neophytte wrote:

Nice little tune you got there, very meaningful in today's world!!

Cheers

Richard

Thank you Richard     

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(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Efharisto ( Thank you)  Grah     

Its good to see and hear the three of you who put up a song in this month chordie section making music.. I left you all a comment on your recordings.

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(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Mojo that song has a good message and works real good vocal lyrics and guitar playing. It is really special.     

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(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you Piri I don't think the world is ready for my terrible voice and guitar playing.  My songs are received a bit like Father McKenzie sermons in the church where Elenor Rigby goes. I use to think the cat when I was singing or playing my guitar or piano was meowing along with me until it occurred to me he was frantically signaling me as he wanted me to open the door and let him out. My goal here this time is  hopefully to encourage people to come out of the woodwork and give songwriting a shot. So what I'm saying  to anyone reading this is it wouldn't take much for someone to put up a better song than mine. This planet is covered with millions of people there has got to be plenty of those hiding their talents away who want to give music a shot.  All it takes is hitting the record  button on your phone no need for fancy tech and then putting it on youtube or some other place and of course as well  providing a link to it on chordie.     

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(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

I decided to have a shot at this song  i wrote a while back. Hopefully its lyrics make sense I tried to keep it in a folky style.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JyMcxhaXpCo 

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(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Always good to read your posts Bill.