551

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Fun little blues tune with a story many folks can understand and relate to. Enjoyed playing it.

552

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

How about "Stained"

Maybe there is a song in your experience of trying to write that song....there's definitely an interesting story there.

554

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks guys. Got good feedback from my wife too...she says she can surely relate. smile

555

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Uploaded for those who want to hear it: https://soundcloud.com/jets60/some-days

556

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Bill - I'll post the link here as soon as it's uploaded to my profile/page and no, you don't need to join soundcloud to hear it. I use soundcloud just because it is really easy to upload a songs so long as you can keep the file size down...and the whole "it's free" part doesn't hurt either.

557

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Joe - I plan on recording it and putting it up on my soundcloud site tomorrow morning. Nothing fancy - just me & my guitar & tapping toe. smile

558

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks guys. smile

559

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Dino.

560

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

smile Glad you can relate. Just remember that spring is coming and hopefully better days as well.

561

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Brian. Let me know how it plays for you.

562

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is the time of year I have to kick myself in the butt to keep going so I wrote this to remind me. I'll record it sometime...maybe this weekend if I get the time.

Some Days By Jeff Gilpin


Feb 4, 2015




[A]Some days are [E]just like all the [D]rest.


[A]Some days my [E]life seems like a [D]mess.


[Bm]Some days I [E]just can't get it [A]right no matter [D]how hard I try


But I still [A]try. [E] [D]




[A]Some days I [E]want to stay in [D]bed.


[A]Some days [E]waking up I [D]dread.


[Bm]Some days I [E]want to stay in[A]side but I still [D]go outside


And face world out[A]side. [E] [D]


[Bm]I’d rather have those [E]days


Where [Bm]everything falls in [E]place


Where no [A]matter what I [E]do I can’t go [D]wrong,


[B]But making it through the days like that


I could [B7]stand on my head with both eyes shut and


It’d still be a [E]breeze…ah but some [E7]days...



[A]Some days my [E]patience is at an [D]end.


[A]Some days I’m [E]never ready to be[D]gin.


[Bm]Some days the [E]clock just goes so [A]slow and the longer [D]the day goes


The clock goes [A]slower. [E] [D]


[Bm]I’d rather have those [E]days


Where [Bm]everything falls in [E]place


Where no [A]matter what I [E]do I can’t go [D]wrong,


[B]But making it through the days like that


I could [B7]stand on my head with both eyes shut.


It’d still be a [E]breeze…ah but some [E7]days...


[A]Some days are [E]just like all the [D]rest.


[A]Some days my [E]life seems like a [D]mess.


[Bm]Some days I [E]just can get it [A]right no matter how [D]hard I try


But I still [A]try. [E] [D]


563

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I like it Mojo. Going to try it out when I get home. Reminds me of some of JJ Cale's work.

Much better posting. Thanks.

Well stated Amy.

566

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I like and can relate to the lyrics a lot...need to get home and give it a ride.

567

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Hey Layne - I like your lyrics but do you have chords to go with them?

568

(19 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song Lena....missed it some how when you originally posted it, but I will try it out when I get home.

569

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Ark.

I enjoyed your writing & look forward to hearing it tonight.

571

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for the heads up. I'll check him out.

572

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank TIGLJK - Yep - that's Brodie and also the picture that inspired the song. He is a joy and a treasure.

573

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Arlo Guthrie's Alice's Restaurant is about 23 minutes long, Alice - Before Time Began is just over 30 minutes, but he has many songs that are well under a minute. So I guess a good song can be really sort or really long...but if it is long it's got be able to hold the listener's interest and attention, not always easy.

574

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Ken. I used those chords because I felt they helped the progression into the chorus, while still keeping the tune cowboy.

575

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Artie.