Mojo - another superb one! You sound so much like Guy Clark on this one. I kept waiting for a little chorus in there somewhere. I bet this stuff happens all the time. I still can't believe that with your style, voice and playing abilities that you aren't signed to a contract by some recording company ! You are special Mojo ! Jim
752 2021-05-28 10:33:25
Re: Sons (9 replies, posted in Poems)
nice one EB !
Many scenarios applicable - imagination food for everyone!
Jim
753 2021-05-26 22:21:25
Re: SHADES OF GRAY - Not from the Monkeeys (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Beamer
" Black and White will make you cry'
Never truer words spoken
in education it sums up why we are :
Every kid gets a trophy
No child can fail
etc...
people are afraid to tell the truth if it hurts
the twisted thinking is that somehow it is helping them, but in my humble opinion - it cripples them.
great line
Jim
754 2021-05-26 01:18:33
Re: Old Lady Cries (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle
I can tell you that as a long time teacher - these kids are coming out of school with that exact mentality.
Always " Me First - where is my trophy - I want the money and damn the character !"
Good stuff Peatle . I can't wait to see what you post on the next inclement weather day !!
Jim
755 2021-05-26 01:13:42
Re: World Predicate (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jeff
I quite agree with all the above
Pete and Phill are showing the love
Brian is liking the scheme thereof
and your message fits just like a glove
the world in ways has become degenerate
but your song seems the best predicate !
Thought it was genius work my friend - made me think a lot !
Well done!
Jim
756 2021-05-22 23:06:51
Re: Song: Another Chance (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Awesome Graham!!!
Hope you find time
I would love to hear how a crowd reacted to it
If you ever do play it out I. Public
Thanks for the kind words
Jim
757 2021-05-21 02:45:30
Re: Song: Another Chance (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I would love to hear it Beamer !
758 2021-05-19 10:43:55
Re: PURPLE (5 replies, posted in Poems)
EB
Classic
I immediately thought of several scenarios there.
That has the making of a really good song !
I was playing around with it - I hope you don't mind.
This my thoughts in terms of song
Purple
[C]In a cafe we sat
having a coffee and a [G]chat
[C]talking `bout music and art
as the background soft music [G]played
[C]i told her to close your eyes
and then i closed [G]mine
[C]I asked her to tell me the colours
she imagined in her [G]mind
she said [D] I see red and [C}blue
while I was seeing [G] purple
Great concept her Brian - well done.
Jim
ps - every song I've ever written had to have rhyme - this one because of the color scheme
- LOL " Purple" !!! at first it felt funny - but I actually like this - it gives such a twist when it doesn't rhyme.
Thanks for opening that door for me !
759 2021-05-19 10:17:20
Re: papa whiskey Tui (5 replies, posted in Recording)
Phill and Peatle
Music was great ! Video was really cool - loved the special effects ! I even got the Papa Whiskey ( Phill Williams) !
Well done chaps ! you are an excellent team
Cheers - Jim
760 2021-05-18 10:34:13
Re: Song: Another Chance (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Graham
I think a lot of people have been in that spot where they mad a choice and then regretted it.
761 2021-05-16 12:51:02
Topic: Song: Another Chance (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I went out of my comfort zone on this - it's kinda punkish
in my head.
probably needs some refinement
Another Chance By Jim Kenyon
762 2021-05-08 21:16:01
Re: why is it? (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Zurf
Good to hear from you!!
Jim
763 2021-05-06 09:54:19
Re: Unfinished Business (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks guys
I wrote it actually as a tribute and a way of wishing that I could have spent more time with my bothers in our older years - I had two pass away in the past two years and my oldest brother has alzheimers to the point where he does not know me anymore. I was looking at old family photos and the idea of this song just kind of
emerged in to my thinking. Time just goes by so fast , we get caught up with daily happenings and things that seem so important at the time - and then suddenly something happens - and you wonder why you didn't spend more time with them. I guess it was just a release verse for me.
Thanks for the kind words. I hope you all take the time to spend with your families- it really is irreplaceable.
Cheers
JIm
764 2021-05-06 09:45:26
Re: Childs Play (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Brian
Same here as what Phill said.
Grandkids are so cool !!! Nice performance and song.
Jim
765 2021-05-05 23:27:18
Re: twisting in the wind (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Mojo
I quite agree with Peatle, it's your unique style man !
I listened a couple more times today - really top notch performance.
Jim
766 2021-05-05 01:48:51
Topic: Unfinished Business (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
to be honest- after just listening to Mojo's new post " Twisting in the wind" this pales - but I will post anyways.
I will let you guess as to what it is about if you wish.
Unfinished Business By Jim Kenyon
767 2021-05-05 01:44:22
Re: twisting in the wind (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Mojo
In my humble opinion - this could be a top 10 country song.
i think your best song.
Fantastic !!
Can you post the lyrics and chords here ?
you've got some talent my friend.
Wow - Just Wow !!
Jim
768 2021-05-01 10:43:04
Re: People Power (14 replies, posted in Poems)
Nice one Peatle.
Giving people to have a voice is crucial. Even by voting and not getting your candidate to win still exercises a fundamental human right.
Like the perspective Peatle !
Jim
769 2021-04-30 10:15:44
Re: the argument (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Phill
That left me speechless.
I cannot imagine the anguish of the moment.
So glad you found Ann - she ,ust be amazing to get you past something lake that.
Jim
770 2021-04-30 10:13:50
Re: Western Movie (4 replies, posted in My local band and me)
I liked it to. I think it has potential for a song
AS i was listening I had a coupe scene's pop in my head and a line or two.
I kept waiting for a change for like a chorus or something.
Sounded really good Scott and SonBream !
Jim
771 2021-04-28 10:18:58
Re: NBD (3 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)
Beamer
Excuse my lack of knowledge
Do basses usually have 4 strings ?
Is playing a five string guitar harder ? What are the advantages of such a guitar?
Cool looking axe .
Jim
772 2021-04-25 19:26:38
Re: why is it? (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Mojo,
You playing alphabet soup chords and gigantic ranges of of vocals, even hammered, is 1000 % better than me playing and singing one chord and a nursery rhyme ![]()
Just saying
Jim
773 2021-04-25 12:14:28
Topic: Covid: The Missing Years (Re-written) (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I changed the lyrics, chords and how it's played.
Covid: The Missing Years by Jim Kenyon
774 2021-04-24 12:24:31
Re: We Were Just Friends. ( Written By Phill and Peatle) (2 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Peatle,
As usual, Phill sounds great. Peatle - what a beautiful story ! Congratulations to you and Maree !
Cheers many times over !
Jim
775 2021-04-24 00:20:51
Re: Covid: The Missing Years (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
For me it would be Dylan