Thanks guys, I"ll take all your suggestion and try to work some thing up
802 2007-12-05 19:36:39
Topic: My birthday (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
A Little explaination: My birthday is coming up on Saturday. Ill Be 26. Ive been thinking alot about my twin brother who died when we were 17. I just needed to write something to remember him . Its very personal but i feel like here on chordie the ones who really care about songwriting will over look that and take it for what its worth.
Two little boys running through them woods
Fighting over nothing, allways up to no good
And they tell me time goes by
One of those boys wouldnt grow to be a man
I still dont know what put that gun in his hand
and they tell me times goes by
Chorus
Its been 8 long years since i learned to cry
and it dont get easier as time goes by
Its your face when I look in the mirror
everytime I cry and everytime i shiver
they tell me time goes by!
Well give me something I wont miss
Long neck bottle, honey, and smells like fish
and I just wish he was here
And I cant promise you tomorrow
or give you yesterday
I cant beg , steal or borrow
JUst let me take away your pain mmmmm
let me take away your pain
I think the last line was for my mom, and the one before that is about how i just drank so i wouldnt feel anything. I do A little finger picking riff with a capo on the 6th fret
starting on an open G form
804 2007-12-05 16:13:40
Re: pain and reward or just pure gifted (17 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
i guess it depends on what instrument. I usally can pick stuff up pretty quick unless it a brass or woodwind
805 2007-12-05 02:40:16
Re: Song. Pretty Tag. Words Melody/ Helena Donovan. (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great song expression, Doll. Very heartfelt
806 2007-12-05 00:59:06
Topic: never cared to much for hippies by selso for southpaw (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Here ya go:
G C G
Well, I never tought I'd ever love a hippie
G D G
I never really thought about it to long
G C G
See, I never thought I'd ever love a hippie
G D G
But a hippie girl's what made me write this song
Chorus:
C D G
Sure some time she smells like pouchli
C D G
Yeah and maybe her arm pit hairs too long
C D G F# Em
See, I never really cared too much for hippies
C D G
But a hippie girls what made me write this song
Verus
Well I used to get mad when she played the Greatful Dead
But now I've learned to hum a tune or two
And now she got me singing all sorts of country songs
when I used to play punk rock all day long
chorus
sure some times she smells like pouchli
and maybe her armpit hairs to long
I never thought I'd ever love a hippie
but a hippie girls what made me write this song
C D G F# Em
If she had her way she'd be bare foot every day
C D G
And a hippie girl made me write this song
807 2007-12-04 22:30:46
Re: Im back (7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Thanks guys. I missed all of you alot
808 2007-12-04 02:47:10
Re: another untitled set of lyrycs.... (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I played it in a 145 riff in E. kinda like Dwight yoakums honky tonk man. just a thought
809 2007-12-04 02:43:31
Re: There is not yet a list with the best recognisable intro's (19 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
dont fear rhe reaper blue oyster cult
810 2007-12-04 02:37:25
Re: another untitled set of lyrycs.... (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey last rebel. i like the second to the last verus as a chorus. seems a little more catchier. what type of chords where you thinking of putting with this?
811 2007-12-04 02:30:53
Topic: Im back (7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hello people in chordie land. Its been a while and Ive missed this site and my guitar for along time. Seems I didnt have the whole jail thing out of my system so after a few months here I am back with a vengance to do the right thing. I didnt have my guitar but wrote alot of lyrics that I hope to put to music. Got alot of ideas, with your love and support hopefully theses ideas will be come masterpieces
love and respect
Selso
812 2007-12-04 02:23:26
Re: Parent tips (20 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
one thing that suprised me: for the longest time my son would not use the bathroom. we tried and tried but he just would not use the toilet.so one day i gave him a book with pictures and in five mins he was done. problem solved
813 2007-12-04 02:18:37
Re: Best DRUMMER? (27 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
all of primus's drummers: Herb and brain. if you havent heard them then check them out
814 2007-12-04 02:15:26
Re: I'm Seeking You Now (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
great song jet! bravo!
815 2007-12-02 17:41:29
Topic: with out you (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
capo on the 3rd fret
D G
Gonna be a long cold night with out you
A D
I never felt so sad or blue
D G
I couldnt promise you tomorrow
A D
Cuz yesterday's already through
chourus
G
Looking out the window
D
I know which way the wind blows
G A
Taking my baby away
Verus 2
Waking up this morning to an empty bed
Wondering what I could do to leave my head
Cuz I dont wanna think about you any more
This feeling of pain is making me bored
Chourus
Verus 3
When the the rain falls down on me
And It gets so heavey that i cant see
Sometimes I hear just what your saying
nobody knows you but me
Chourus
Havent posted anything in awhile, so here ya go. another 3 chord wonder from Selso
816 2007-10-21 18:31:29
Re: greatest american artists?? (25 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
huddie ledbetter, guy davis, townes van zandt, willie dixon, marty robbins, robert johnson, los lobos,
817 2007-10-19 02:37:42
Re: "Like Totally" (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ouch, james!! surely your best song yet.
818 2007-10-19 02:34:12
Re: My Love (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
beutiful song, arklady. like bonedaddy said: i wish i could have written this
819 2007-10-19 02:29:36
Re: My first ever song... answers on a postcard! (18 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i believe in god but im not offened by your song. i think its a great piece and should be taken for what its for
820 2007-10-19 02:24:41
Re: Old Doll (12 replies, posted in About Chordie)
i agree, maybe when a spot comes up, she can be the next in line?
selso
821 2007-10-18 00:15:04
Re: New Administrator - Guitardocphil (44 replies, posted in About Chordie)
i go away for a couple of days and everyones moving up in the world!!! Congrats doc, your questions are always intresting and help always useful. couldnt think of a more deserving person on this site
822 2007-10-18 00:07:09
Re: Which album is on your player this week? (45 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
dwight yoakum: live at austin city limits
823 2007-10-18 00:03:09
Re: Has anyone else noticed... (16 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
river in the rain: rodger miller
purple rain: prince
no rain: blind melon
raining blood: slayer
824 2007-10-08 20:19:50
Re: WHO PLAYS GUITAR WITH THE INTENTION TO BECOME FAMOUS (20 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
its pretty much just a hobby for me, but id love to be famous
825 2007-10-07 23:39:14
Re: chordie gear (19 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
why are things so much more expensive in europe? i dont understsnd that . i dont think anyones explained it so i can understand . seems like it should be cheaper but even when i lived there it was cheaper to get things at the milatary base my dad was staioned at then it was oof base.