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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Peatle, a double tracked rap? i came off line the other night to find my granddaughter, her mother (my daughter) and Ann (my misses) all heads bowed, thumbs going like the clappers on their mobiles!

Your song is too real my friend. But as usual you've captured a moment in time and slapped it in our faces so we all say; " oh yeah". what's next?
I have a friend, his phone rings in the other room and he talks to his watch!!!! And he's in his 60's too, but he still can't work his email account..lol

Great work. Keep 'em coming     

1,202

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I agree with all the above. I'm glad you did an electric version, the drums and solos really add an extra dimension to the song. And the young lady doing the chorus is brilliant, I'll never look at Tesco, other supermarkets available!!! the same way again.     

1,203

(14 replies, posted in Recording)

thanks Jerome, I'll have to download Reaper again as it didn't work very well last time so I dumped it. and I'm always out of tune, but don't tell anyone?     

1,204

(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i was listening to some Roy Orbison songs and he had some terrific songs, (i like the newer ones best) but his old ones are excellent too but there is a line from " in dreams" which goes i think; in dreams, you're mine. all of the time. i cringe each time i hear that. you may disagree or you may know of other songs with cringeworthy lines in otherwise brilliant songs, lets hear your thoughts. 

1,205

(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

the last time the hairs on my body stood up on end like that was the first time i listened to abbey road. truly amazing.     

1,206

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i like it. it's me all over. when i was young free and single many moons ago, the girls had to come to me and i'd be blushing like a fool so they'd walk away cos i couldn't talk to them much as i wanted to.
i think it's gonna be a right rocker, when will you get it on youtube?     

1,207

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

excellent choice of topic, and as you'd expect i have a lot of opinion on the subject, or do i?
to begin; i write songs for myself not other people. if other people enjoy my humble offerings then that's great. i've written hundreds of songs and most of them are complete and utter rubbish. one or two are good, possibly very good.
as for changing people's moods or attitudes...well Lennon did it. he also wrote silly meaningless songs; glass onion, i am the walrus, maybe even lucy in the sky with diamonds? all great songs but not really literary masterpieces?
did disco music change attitudes? for the most part it's got to be a NO! "you can ring my bell"?
i wont even mention the "new romantics" waste of time.
i heard someone say that rap is all about politics??? no just sex drugs and shooting people...am i being too controversial?
i guess i'm just "wounded, old and dangerous" well not dangerous (Ian Anderson's words)

in conclusion; write what makes you happy, or to get stuff off your mind. if you make it you'll get rich (hopefully) if not.....     

1,208

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

I understand your feelings and Mr Nelson's. I went through a period of recording my stage set but at home not live. I gave a copy to someone that showed an interest and they played it there and then. I told them to take it off half way through the first song, which was rhinestone cowboy, it sounded awful to me and all I could hear were the flat notes and cock ups! Which is why I only rarely post my songs on YouTube.
Having spent a whole day traveling to Australia same coming home twice I don't think I could survive the flight to New Zealand. So when are you coming to Wales? Your beer is getting warm my friend.....     

1,209

(19 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

this is a shot out of the blue my friend. i can only imagine what you're talking about but i hope this wont be the last we hear from you.

all the best phill     

1,210

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

I can't imagine any of your stuff being irrelevant or cringeworthy this proves it. I for one recognise this whole situation, barstool preaching, grown men winding up each other while imbibing in wobbly pops, as cap 54 used to say! As usual you've taken a moment a scene if you will, described it in such a way that I could see each character smell the old beer and soak in the atmosphere. The line regarding the tide marks as the beer "evaporates" pure joy to an old lagerlout. Love it and tell your mate to speak it slowly. Cheers     

1,211

(1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

it must be important to you as you've made 5 identical posts. are you trying to boost your post figures? i'm sure the mod for chat will come along soon and delete 4 of them.
as to print button; sorry to say there are still a few problems with the new program. try the work about i suggested in the first post.     

1,212

(11 replies, posted in Poems)

Inventive and imaginative writing if a little brutal for my taste. I lost my love of super heros when the original batman series ended....kerpow, zap...holy poems batman!     

Hi Vic? I've just seen your post and as it happens I got an email from Gear for music and they show the set up you mentioned. So at £110 it sounds a bargain so if your busker amp has sufficed in your gigs it sounds perfect for what you need. You can buy relatively cheap vocal and instrumental FX from Amazon. One thing though, if you're going to use backing tracks I'd keep using the guitar amp. Good luck.     

1,214

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Not just a statement of fact but a need to know question. Sorry for your loss but as always tragedy gives inspiration and breeds excellent poetic works like this.     

1,215

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

There words just flow. So much so that I couldn't help but feel you're speaking from experience?
I haven't tried it yet, no time at the moment, but it's another winner.     

1,216

(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Welcome to the forums. We all have a rant from time to time but you feel so strongly about it that you posted it twice!!!!! Don't worry the mod for that forum will delete one of them.
As for who chooses which song goes into which category that is also a mystery to me. It could well be the program. As is often stated here on the forums, Chordie is basically a search engine, no songs are actually stored here apart from maybe originals?
I hope you feel better after getting that off your chest and that you may join us in our discussions, Q and A and advice.

1,217

(3 replies, posted in Poems)

excellent misdirection not revealed till the last verse. clever. like it i do     

1,218

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

A sad poem, I think? With an optimistic outlook? I tried imagining a rhythm or style but failed, maybe best kept as a poem?
A great piece of writing and I love the background, maybe you'll start a new trend?     

1,219

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

As usual the first line came to me in the shower! The title came some time after the song was done. I tried it in different styles, CW, rock, ballad, waltz...etc, I've yet to see how it works out.
Calling Elvis hadn't occurred to me even though I've listened to it many times. Maybe Paul Simons Graceland or Mark Cohen's Walking in Memphis had some input.
I think the song is describing the impact Brexit is having on my home town, with everything, it seems, closing.     

1,220

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Jeff, I'd love to hear how you'd play it as I tried it about ten different ways. I've begun recording it but I'm still not 100% on the style I've chosen.     

1,221

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

And hello to you, welcome to Chordie forums. Give us a few details about yourself, do you play an instrument and where do you come from? It is always a privilege to welcome a new member.     

1,222

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

A country rock slow-ee?

Memphis Is Calling.Undefined


[A] So, you're moving down to Memphis.


And you're going on your own.


No one going with you.


And you've bought a brand new phone.


[D] You don't want no one calling.


When you're [E] looking for a job.


And [A] maybe if you're [D] lucky.


You can [E] find a Lancelot.


Down in [A] Memphis. [F-E] Down in [A] Memphis.




[A] You used to own a coffee shop.


And people called around.


Sunday afternoon you had a band there playing loud.


[D] Taxes went up through the roof.


And your [E] profits they went down.


You [A] had no other [D] choice.


But to [E] turn away the crowd.


And go to [A] Memphis. [F-E] Go to [A] Memphis.







(CHORUS)




[F#m] Memphis is calling.


You can [E] start up once again.


You [D] used to live there long ago.


So you're [E] gonna see old friends.


Down in [A] Memphis. [F-E] Down in [A] Memphis.




[A] You felt like they all let you down.


They wont miss you here.


Sometime in the future.


They may wonder where you are?


[D] Don't want no one calling.


If you [E] find a brand new place.


[A] Last thing that you [D] want is to [E] see a familiar face.


Down in [A] Memphis. [F-E] Down in [A] Memphis.




(REPREAT CHORUS)





Words & Music by Phill Williams. Home Rex. August 27th 2019. 

1,223

(1 replies, posted in JamPlay.com)

Glad to hear it. Keep it up... practice makes perfect.     

1,224

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Such a deep and meaningful song. I had to read it twice to fully understand your depression and how sums up how I felt when I was made redundant after 19 years in a job I loved.
Let's hear it soon.     

1,225

(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Sweeeeeet!!! I'm not sure about the heavier gauge strings though.