1,826

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First of all, this is purely fictitious. My baby treats me good, but that would never make a good bluesy Christmas song so I what if’ed she didn’t treat me so good and came up with this. Hope you all like it.

Please Santa Claus By Jeff Gilpin


December 23rd, 2007


Intro


[A] [D] [A] [E7]




Please Santa [A]Claus


You know I been [B7]good


So [D]why don’t she treat me [E7]


Like you know that she [A]should [E7]




And Santa [A]Claus


Why I’m singing this [B7]song


Is that [D]she always thinking [E7]


That I’m doing her [A]wrong [E7] [A7]


Well I’m [D]devoted


I [A]tell you that I worship that [A7]girl


But I [D]think she must be blind


The things I [B7]do out of goodness


She thinks I’m [E7]being unkind


Hey Santa [A]Claus


Please help her to [B7]see



I’ve [D]got no disguises [E7]


She shouldn’t worry about [A]me [E7]


Santa [A]Clause


I know you see [B7]all


So [D]please tell my woman [E7]


Can you give her a [A]call [E7] [A7]


You see [D]she…


She [A]gets so angry and [A7]mad


You see [D]she expects the worst


She thinks I [B7]must be doing wrong


Oh Santa [E7]please call her first


Hey Santa [A]Claus


I know I’ve been bad be[B7]fore


But [D]that’s in the past [E7]


I don’t stray [A]anymore [E7]


Please Santa [A]Claus


This Christmas [B7]please


Let [D]my woman know [E7]


She shouldn’t worry about [D]me [E7] [A7]


1,827

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well, Billy Joel's song is a bit darker than mine I must say. I've kind of focused on the solders' reasons for being over there and their side of this war without dwelling on the political reasons why the solders are there. I think I might have treaded a darker path if I had mixed the whole political side into the song. I really worry about our kids who are over there and who take the monetary reenlistment incentives that are being offered and end up serving multiple tours in a place that is not very safe. It's kind of like a high stake gamble.

1,828

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Lena - Actually I have heard the story behind this song and there was a movie made about it called "Joyeux Noël" back in 2005 that I saw and did a pretty good job capturing the moment (thanks to Netflix for letting me find it). Being a bit of a crazed football fan I often search out movies with football and I guess both the Carol and later a football match happend during this battle in the war.  I recommend this if you ever get the chance to see it. It is a good story for people who like to think about the human side of war, like me. I would love to hear you sing this if you would like to post it on your site I would be forever in your debt (no pressure though as I think I owe you a song or twenty myself). Thanks and have a Merry Christmas.

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Dino - Thanks. Yep, my son went back over for his second tour back in November. He is a lot busier this time around so I'm hoping it will make the time go a little faster for him. It's still going to creep along for me I'm sure. I hope you and your's have a great Christmas.

1,830

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is just a song for all the troops serving far away this Christmas.

Christmas in the Desert By Jeff Gilpin


December 22nd, 2007






[G]Christmas in the [D]Desert


[Em]No white Christmas far from [C]home


Just [G]solders keeping [D]company


[C]Wondering how they’ve [D]come to [G]roam [D]


[G]Seems just the [D]other day


[Em]They were working that 9 to [C]5


[G]Weren’t making much of a [D]living


[C]But e[D]nough to [G]survive [D]


[Em]You see they're going to do their [C]own thing


And they're [D]going to try and make it on their [Em]own


They [Em]signed up for a just [C]few years


Where they’ll be [D]learning away from home


Now they're [G]working and [D]waiting


[Em]Helping this land that’s in [C]need


[G]Trying to prop their people [D]up


[C]Trying to [D]help them to [G]succeed [D]


[G]They'll be keeping [D]track of


The [Em]time as it goes [C]by


As [G]they learn their occu[D]pation


So that [C]one day they [D]give it a [G]try [D]



Because they're [Em]going to do their [C]own thing


[D]They're going to make it on their [Em]own


They [Em]only have a [C]few years left


Then [D]they’ll be heading back home


I [G]hope that they’ll be [D]ready


[Em]When that time comes a[C]round


To [G]jump in and get [D]going


Making [C]real money back in [D]their home [G]town [D]


But if [G]they don’t think they're [D]ready


There’s [Em]always signing away a few [C]more


They [G]have time till that de[D]cision


So [C]who knows [D]what's in [G]store [D]


[Em]They can go do their [C]own thing


[D]They can try to make it on their [Em]own


Or [Em]they can decide in a [C]few years


When [D]they'll be heading back home


[G]But today it’s [D]Christmas


In the [Em]land where duty [C]calls


And the [G]solders are cele[D]brating


So Merry [C]Christmas to [D]one and [C]all [D] [G]


1,831

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Ken - I played it Blues in E (E, E7, A, B7...that sort of thing) and it seemed to work out. I have to admit I can't get my own voice around scotish slang (if you can imagine a cross between scot slang and american country...well thats what came out...not a good combination. It sure is a nice down on your luck and don't care story song. smile

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Just a little introspective thinking that kind of ties in with what I've been doing: planning my goals for the next year, self assessment performance reviews for the past year, and song writing that never seems to stop no matter what time of year. I hope you all like it.

Reasons Why By Jeff Gilpin


December 21st, 2007




[A]Peeling back the [C]layers of my [A]mind


[A]Looking at what’s [C]in there under[A]lying


[D]Trying to see what it [G]is that makes me [D]tick


[A]Finding who’s the [C]real me will be a [A]trick




[E]Reasons why I get happy


[D]Reasons why I get [A]sad


[E]Reasons why I act this way


[C]Reasons why I get [G]mad [A]


[A]Understanding the [C]reasons why I’m [A]me


Why [A]I do some things and [C]others just let [A]be


[D]Seeing certain [G]things still makes me [D]crazy


Yet [A]other things [C]tend to make me [A]lazy


[E]Reasons why I get happy


[D]Reasons why I get [A]sad


[E]Reasons why I act this way


[C]Reasons why I get [G]mad [A]


I [A]want to know what [C]goes on in my [A]head


To [A]understand my [C]fate without [A]dread


[D]But if I do [G]not like what I [D]find


I [A]guess I’ll have to [C]try and change my [A]mind


[E]Reasons why I get happy



[D]Reasons why I get [A]sad


[E]Reasons why I act this way


[C]Reasons why I get [G]mad [A]


The [A]reasons I’m the [C]way I am are [A]many


[A]Some due to my [C]parent’s genes a [A]plenty


[D]Others from e[G]vents in this life I’ve [D]lived


[A]Good and bad I’ve [C]taken what life could [A]give


[E]Reasons why I get happy


[D]Reasons why I get [A]sad


[E]Reasons why I act this way


[C]Reasons why I get [G]mad [A]


[A]Why I’m looking [C]inward at this [A]time


I need to [A]see if I have [C]peaked of still need to [A]climb


If I’ve [D]already reached the [G]top then that’s o[D]kay


But [A]if there is more I [C]better get to it to[A]day


[E]Reasons why I get happy


[D]Reasons why I get [A]sad


[E]Reasons why I act this way


[C]Reasons why I get [G]mad [A]


1,833

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey you Guys - Thanks - I feel the same. Sometimes I want to play sad music because I'm sad other times I want to play it because I'm happy and just like the tune....Bell Bottom Blues is a great example of both...Working Class Hero is another song I like to play no matter what mood I'm in. Now Emotional Music is not a sad song but I kind of play it like a bluegrass tune and a little upbeat. Yep, Roger, it's a good finger picking song too and it makes me wish I could play the banjo.  smile

1,834

(136 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

True - I lost count but I think I have 5 now...yep 5

The person below me enjoys playing many different types of music.

1,835

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

A friend of mine listened to my song Grey Skies and she said it made her sad because she likes blue skies. Well I thought about that for a bit and wrote this song in response. I hope you all like it.

Emotional Music By Jeff Gilpin


December 17th, 2007


Intro


[G]x4






[G]Singing a sad song


[A]On a happy day


[D]Doesn’t make me sad


It [G]makes me want to play


So [G]if you hear a sad song


Don’t [A]let it bring you down


[D]Listen until you’re happy


Or at [C]least ‘til you come around


[F7]Don’t let [C]sad songs bring you [G]down [G7]


[E7]It’s just a song not the end of the world


So [Am]hold on and ride it through


[E7]It can’t take you anywhere or make you


Feel [D]any which a way un[F7]less that’s where you want to go to[C]day [D] [G]


[G]Singing a happy song


[A]When I’m all fired up


[D]Sometimes calms me down


[G]Or makes me erupt


[G]Calming down getting riled



Don’t [A]make no never mind


E[D]ventually I’ll run out of steam


[C]Giving enough time


So [F7]hold on and [C]give me some [G]time [G7]


[E7]It’s just a song not the end of the world


So [Am]hold on and ride it through


[E7]It can’t take you anywhere or make you


Feel [D]any which a way un[F7]less that’s where you want to go to[C]day [D] [G]


So [G]go play them all


Let [A]go of your fear


E[D]motional music


Will [G]get your head clear


Ro[G]mantic or funny


[A]Happy or sad


[D]All of the music


[C]You won’t be mad


[F7]Listen to it [C]all and be [G]glad [G7]


[E7]It’s just a song not the end of the world


So [Am]hold on and ride it through


[E7]It can’t take you anywhere or make you


Feel [D]any which a way un[F7]less that’s where you want to go to[C]day [D] [G]


1,836

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Everyone. I rerecorded Ayasey Lullaby and it is posted on my myspace page now. Stop by and have a listen.

http://www.myspace.com/stilljeffgilpin

Hey Alex - You are right. That's a great song.

1,838

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for the comments. He's doing good but we miss him no being around.

1,839

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This is just a missing my Son during Christmas song. I’m sure he’s doing okay over there in the dirt but we all sure do miss him and wish he was here with us. Anyway I hope you all like it.

No Magic at Christmas By Jeff Gilpin


December 13th, 2007






[G]There is no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year


[G]No Santa [Em7]Claus


[D]No Christmas [C]cheer


[G]You’re far far a[Em7]way


The [D]one we hold [C]dear


That’s why [G]there’s no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year


Oh we’ll [D]hear all the carols just the [G]same


Peace on [D]earth and those other [G]refrains


Yet the [C]one who’s usually here


Is [D]in all our thoughts but not [D7]near


[G]There is no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year


[G]No Santa [Em7]Claus



[D]No Christmas [C]cheer


[G]You’re far far a[Em7]way


The [D]one we hold [C]dear


That’s why [G]there’s no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year


We’ll [D]open presents one at a [G]time


And yet [D]it’ll seem just like a [G]crime


As [C]we sit around the Christmas tree


[D]Missing a big part of our [D7]family


[G]There is no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year


[G]No Santa [Em7]Claus


[D]No Christmas [C]cheer


[G]You’re far far a[Em7]way


The [D]one we hold [C]dear


That’s why [G]there’s no [Em7]magic


At [D]Christmas this [C]year [G]


1,840

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Zurf - Thanks! smile - I like both Pennsylvania and Kentucky...Aw heck, I like a little bit of texture in the land I live than most. I'll get there someday I guess.

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This is just a song about the more you learn the more you realize you don’t know. I have accepted the fact that I will never know as much as I thought I knew when I was 18. It sure would be nice to have that feeling of unfounded fearlessness once again but I don’t see that happening anytime soon. Anyway I hope you all like the song.

The Teacher By Jeff Gilpin


December 12th,2007




Intro


[Em]




Verse 1


[Em]...21


[G]Never gonna die and [D]all about fun


[Em]That is until I run


[G]Smack dab into [A]life [D]




Verse 2


[Em]…23


[G]Taken it all a too [D]seriously


[Em]More grown up but still pretty free


[G]Then smacked again by [A]life [D]




Chorus


[F7]I use to know it all


At [C]least that’s what I thought


[F7]Then steps in Life, the teacher


[B7]Oh the lesson life’s taught




Verse 3


[Em]…25


It’s [G]a wonder I made it [D]here alive


Out of [Em]danger’s way I managed to dive


[G]Into the deep end of [A]life [D]




Verse 4


[Em]…30


[G]I not really old [D]just a bit dirty


Es[Em]caping all the things that can hurt me



But [G]can’t escape from [A]life [D]




Chorus


[F7]I use to know it all


At [C]least that’s what I thought


[F7]Then steps in Life, the teacher


[B7]Oh the lesson life’s taught




Verse 5


[Em]…38


[G]Young in my head but a [D]bit over weight


[Em]Still a big kid who’s grown up too late


But [G]not too late for [A]life[D]




Verse 6


[Em]…47


I’m [G]kind of grown up and [D]wondering about heaven


[Em]Worried our future won’t be so pleasant


[G]Worried about our children’s[A] life [D]




Chorus


[F7]I use to know it all


At [C]least that’s what I thought


[F7]Then steps in Life, the teacher


[B7]Oh the lesson life’s taught




Ending Chorus


[F7]Now I know that I don’t know much


[C]Life’s funny that way


From a [F7]know it all to I just don’t know


Hope knowing a [B7]little will get me[D]through the [A]day [Em]



1,842

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Lena - I like this one too and it's high on the list for my next recording session. Boston is one of my daughter's favorite's but some how she ended up in New Mexico, a great place too but a long ways from Boston or DC for that matter.

1,843

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Hey WeeJie -  I like it a lot. It reminds me of a poem I read back in college by William Blake called The Chimney Sweeper in his collection Songs of Innocence. Can't wait to see the chords.

http://www.poetry-online.org/blake_the_ … weeper.htm

1,844

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Lena -  I recorded Ayase Lullaby too in the same sitting so I should be putting that one up as well.

1,845

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Lena - thanks - Could you send me that song or is it posted here? Guess I should look.

Take care

1,846

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for all the comments - I usually think of myself as the kid that reluctantly had to get a job but never stopped being a kid. I guess I'm still him but I didn't want to ever have to take meds for...well, anything I guess. I'm hoping I can get off them after I lose a few pounds and get in better shape although my wife has set high expectations for me. I think she is trying to get me down to the weight I was when I married her a long, long time ago. That's like 2 pounds for each year we've been married. yikes

1,847

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I just liked the chord sequence and played around with putting words to it that were mostly nonsense at first but over time changed into what you see now that kind of make a little sense although open to interpretation. Truly though the words mean nothing but were useful words to fit into this chord sequence I like and hope you like too.

Where Will I Wait for You By Jeff Gilpin


November 16th, 2007




Intro


[Am]


Verse 1


[C]Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


[C]Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


With the [F]world spinning round my [G]head


Just go [F]on leave me go on a[G]head


But before you [F]go


Please let me [G]know…where to meet you [C]




Verse 2


Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


[C]Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


So much [F]happening I can’t make [G]sense


Some[F]times I wish I weren’t so [G]dense


Maybe you [F]know


But I don’t think [G]so…but tell me [C]





Verse 3


Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


[C]Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


No more [F]tears my eyes are [G]dry


Want to [F]quit not sure why I [G]try


Wish I were [F]tough


Or just e[G]nough…but tell me[C]




Verse 4


Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


[C]Where will I wait for wait for [Am]you


I’ve paid the [F]cost but might get [G]lost


So before you [F]go please let me [G]know


Do you [F]know I don’t think [G]so


But I’ll be [F]tough maybe tough e[G]nough


To wait for [Am]you



1,848

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I agree 100%! I think the reason I write songs as much as I do, at least one of them, is to try and improve. Some day songwriting is really a struggle and the songs don't come easy but other days I get a lot of ideas and it's like I can't stop writing even if I wanted to.

1,849

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

So I went in to the doctor awhile back and, well I guess the song pretty much says it all. I hope you all like it or at least can relate.

Finally Got Old By Jeff Gilpin


December 8th, 2007




Intro


[D] [G]




Verse 1


[Am7]Try to eat [E7]right


And work[Am7]out when you [E7]can


But [G]sometimes your [D]time


Is [G]in high de[E7]mand




Verse 2


But the [Am7]way of [E7]world


Is a [Am7]balanced af[E7]fair


So if you’re [G]starting to teeter


You [E7]best beware




Chorus


Because you’ll [Am7]start to break [E7]down


Only [Am7]slowly at [E7]first


Then one [Am7]day you’ll look [E7]down


And then [Am7]you’ll see the [E7]worse


[G]Sight you could be[E7]hold


You finally got [Am7]old [E7] [D]




Verse 3


Your [Am7]blood pressure [E7]looks


Like it’s [Am7]quite a bit [E7]high


And your[G] bad choleste[D]rol


Is way [G]up to the [E7]sky




Verse 4


So [Am7]one drugs for [E7]this


Andan[Am7]other for [E7]that


A [G]strict workout schedule


So you [E7]won’t be so fat





Chorus


Because you’ll [Am7]start to break [E7]down


Only [Am7]slowly at [E7]first


Then one [Am7]day you’ll look [E7]down


And then [Am7]you’ll see the [E7]worse


[G]Sight you could be[E7]hold


You finally got [Am7]old [E7] [D]




Verse 5


And [Am7]then there’s your [E7]diet


All that [Am7]stuff you can’t [E7]eat


[G]Was the main [D]reason


Why you [G]can’t see your [E7]feet




Verse 6


You get a [Am7]diet of [E7]healthy


And [Am7]nutritious [E7]meals


That are [G]high on fiber


And [E7]short on thrills




Chorus


Because you’ll [Am7]start to break [E7]down


Only [Am7]slowly at [E7]first


Then one [Am7]day you’ll look [E7]down


And then [Am7]you’ll see the [E7]worse


[G]Sight that you could be[E7]hold


You finally got [Am7]old [E7] [D] [G]




Ending Chorus


Because you’ll [Am7]start to break [E7]down


Only [Am7]slowly at [E7]first


Then one [Am7]day you’ll look [E7]down


And then [Am7]you’ll see the [E7]worse


[G]Sight that you could be[E7]hold


You finally got [D]old [G] [Am7]



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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Reb. I usually try to write with that in mind but sometimes I stumble and write a real clunker.

Picture from lifes other side is one of my favorite Hank songs and I think I'll go give it a play now.