376 Reply by ctech

(43 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Kenny

Just went to you website Definite Jonny Cash & Bob Dylan influence there, some people told me I sound like him. I like all the other artist there especially the Beatles. Best group in the world,the way they used chords magical. I like your sound Better productions than mine,keep it up mate.

Trevor

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377 Reply by ctech

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Hi kenny , You are to kind its nice you think that. smile Thanks for the suggestion I'm new to this stuff. Ill do it now,gonna load up another instrumental to zebox in the next hour hopefully,called alone,can't put it on here as no words yet.

Trevor

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378 Reply by ctech

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Hi Riddler,Glad you like it smile  I like your sound,really polished. Home sweet home cant beat it.

I only listen to a couple,but ill be back.

Trevor

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379 Reply by ctech

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Hi Selso Had a listen I like Caged a lot,I think you have a lot worst in prisons out there not so bad in the Great Britain. Funny I'm writing a song called I cant feel the sunshine any more not finished yet. I really like That's the price you pay,love the harmonica.

Trevor

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380 Reply by ctech

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Thanks ark glad you liked them,still got a long way to get to your standard, I'm not to good a arranging I feel.

Thanks again for taking the time to listen:)

Trevor

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381 Topic by ctech

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You are so beautifulTrevor Scrivens


[Dmaj7]




Verse 1




[D]I was'nt looking for [Dmaj7]love,


but somehow it [Bm]found [Em]me,[A7]


[D]and like a bolt from up a[Dmaj7]bove,


your looks a[Bm]stound [Em]me,[A7]




[F#m]You are so [Bm7]beautiful,


my[G] eye's can't forget you,


[A]my heart wont let you go,


[F#m]You are so [Bm7]beautiful to[G] see,


[Em]and i can't [A7]let you [D]Know


Verse 2




[D]If i held out my [Dmaj7]hand,


would you just [Bm]push it a[Em]way,[A7]


[D]or would you under[Dmaj7]stand,


just why I'm [Bm]feeling this [Em]way,[A7]





Repeat chorus


[D7]


Bridge




[G]I find my[A]self [F#m]thinking [Bm7]about you,


[G]And the [A]way my life could [D]be,[Dmaj7]


[G]God if you [A]knew,


[F#m]just what you [Bm7]do,


[G]your everything to me,


[A]All i can see.




Instrumental break based on verse melody


[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm] [Em] [A7]


[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm] [Em] [A7]




Repeat chorus




[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm]And [Em]i cant [A7]let you


[D]know[Dmaj7] [Bm]no [Em]i cant [A7]let you


[D]know[Dmaj7] [Bm]But [Em]i cant [A7]let you [D]go



Copyright Trevor Scrivens 1994

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382 Topic by ctech

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still no sure about the chorus,any ideas

4/4 time arpeggio style



Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.



copyright Trevor Scrivens 1998

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383 Reply by ctech

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Great song  Phill I can relate to that,there are so many I don't knows,it's about time we got the real answers

I like you recording,I just plug a mike into my x-fi card in my pc,open up sony vegas and of I go.

Trevor

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384 Topic by ctech

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I wrote this when I lost my love,but I'm pleased to say 3 years down the line she came back to me & I've never been happier.


Now that i've lost you Trevor Scrivens


6/8 time




Verse 1




[D]I wander around,


[Dmaj7]With my head to the ground,


[Bm7]I want to,But I just cant [Em]speak[Em7]


[D]The pain in my heart


[Dmaj7]Well its torn me apart


[Bm7]I gess the feelings they all ran to [Em]deep




[Em7]Now that I,ve [F#m]lost,lost


[Bm7]you,and I [Em]can't get you [Em7]out of my [A]head,


Now that I,ve [F#m]lost,lost


[Bm7]you,and I [Em]think i'll be [Em7]better of [A]dead,


Verse 2




Well the [D]guns in my hand,


[Dmaj7]but i cant understand,



[Bm7]Why can't I [Em]just end my [Em7]life?,


[D]Living with you,


[Dmaj7]Was my dream come true


[Bm7]Now it's filled with [Em]trouble and [Em7]strife,




Repeat chorus




16 bar Musical break




[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm7] [Em] [Em7]


[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm7] [Em] [Em7]




Repeat chorus 2X




16 bar Musical break Repeat to fade


[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm7] [Em] [Em7]


[D] [Dmaj7] [Bm7] [Em] [Em7]



A raw copy with me singing can be found on http://zebox.com/ctech/music/

Copyright Trevor Scrivens 5 June 2004

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385 Reply by ctech

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You are to kind mate,thank you for being the first one to comment on this song

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386 Reply by ctech

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Thanks anyway Kajima smile

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387 Reply by ctech

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Thanks Ark that's sorted it,such a simple thing I over looked.

Thanks again smile

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388 Reply by ctech

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Still having problem the song is on here but wont format,anyone see why? Help appreciated.

Thankyou

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389 Reply by ctech

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Cheers daddy cool I think you solved the problem I've been putting [ song/ ] not [ /song ],hopefully I'll get some where now.

Thank you

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390 Topic by ctech

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Chordpro error: The song does not contain chords. Please include at least two chords in brackets within the text, like this: [C7].



Trevor Scrivens 14 August 2003

A raw copy with me singing can be found on http://zebox.com/ctech/music/

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391 Reply by ctech

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Hi ark

Checked out your link to your music,Wow took me away, very calming.

I do chi kung to help me relax, next time have have do it with your music playing in the background.

All your music is very good,puts mine to shame.

Trevor

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392 Reply by ctech

(23 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Ken

Gave it a try,no luck,I must be thick or something everyone else seems to get it.

Thanks anyway

Trevor

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393 Reply by ctech

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Hi Phill

This is the first song I came across before joining,I really like this song,does it for me,i love the chord changes and the lyrics.
It was a pleasure to listen to. Keep them coming.

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394 Topic by ctech

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Take me awayTrevor Scrivens



8 bar Intro


[Bm7] [G] [A] [Em7]


[Bm7] [G] [A] [Asus]


   


Verse 1




I[D] wake up in the morning,Throw cold[F#m] water on my face,


[Em]stare out thro the bars,of this [A]cold & lonely place,


[D]Wishing away tomorrow,with a[F#m] head of useless dreams,


[Em]I cant face another day,the disa[A] pointment that it brings,


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,


[Em7]take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,[Asus] [A]


     


Verse 2




[D]I Walk along the fours,my heart[F#m] so full of shame,


[Em]Pushing past my anger,I try[A] hard to feel again,


[D]All the beautiful things,that this[F#m] life has to give,


[Em]I can see it in your eye's,in the[A] memory of our last kiss


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,



[Em7] take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way


   


Bridge




[Em7] I know i let you down,My[F#m] mind it wasnt strong,


[Em7]When I felt I lost your love,I[F#m] couldnt carry on,


[Em7]every day that past,i fell[F#m] deeper in my pain,


[G]my life was spiralling down & down,i [A]wanted you back a[A7]gain,




[Bm7] [G] [A] [Asus] [A]


   


 


Verse 3




[D]Crossing off another day,in here[F#m] time passses slow,


[Em]I think all our yesterdays,the times[A] we used to know,


[D]sitting down i write to you,with a[F#m] smile on my face,


[Em]for all this love i feel for you,no[A] time will ever erase,


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,


[Em7]take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,[Asus] [D]





Copyright Trevor Scrivens 27/04/2009 updated 30th November 2017

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395 Reply by ctech

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Hi everyone Can anybody help i don't know where I've gone wrong,but my song has not come out in 'chordpro' format

Thank you for your comments so far.

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396 Topic by ctech

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How Many Times?Undefined



[D]2 bar intro




Verse 1




[D]How many times,


[G]Must we stand tall?


[D]When you kick us to the [A]ground,


[D]How many times,


[G]Will you take us for the fool?


[D]And keep our hands-a-[A]bound,




Verse 2




[D]How many times,


[G]Must we have to fight?


[D]When you know that fighting’s [A]wrong,


[D]How many times,


[G]Will you steal away that right?


[D]Make believe that you are [A]strong.




Bridge




This is my [F#m]life, and I’ll choose how to [Bm]live it,


[Em]All I want is to be [A]free,


This is my [F#m]life and I’ll choose how to [Bm]give it,


[Em]You can't take that away from [A]me.




How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,


How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,



How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


Verse3




[D]How many times,


[G]Will you spill my blood?


[D]In the name of liber[A]ty,


[D]How many times,


[G]Will you hide the truth from us?


[D]Make us so blind that we can’t [A]see.




Bridge repeat




This is my [F#m]life, and I’ll choose how to [Bm]live it,


[Em]All I want is to be [A]free,


This is my [F#m]life and I’ll choose how to [Bm]give it,


[Em]You can't take that away from [A]me.




How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,


How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,


How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,


How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


How many [D]times,


How many [G]times,


How many [D]times, Must we [A]fall?


[A]Must we [D]fall?



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