thanks for the feedback and advice guys

hi jeff,

you wrote this about me didn't you?
eg;  i was working on something in my shed and i put a tool down to take a sip of tea, when i went to pick up the tool....i couldn't find it. two weeks later it came to light in the kitchen! i don't even remember going in the kitchen!!!!

my wife has a good one though. say she's upstairs, she'll come down to do or say something, by the time she gets to me she's forgotten what it was all about (she never forgets if it's something to nag about. funny that?) so she'll turn around and go back up stairs to see if it will jog her memory! it works sometimes.

yes, good song. full of meaning (specially to us older teenagers LOL) let me know when it's up and how to get to hear it.

phill

hi tigljk.

i admire anyone that can write a song then realise that it can be improved then do it. but what you should do in that circumstance is to either delete the previous versions or to edit the first one or add to the first post. what you've done is to take-up a lot of space in the forum. could you please delete the versions you aren't satisfied with, the first 6? thanks

nice song by the way

thanks jets. i try and make each song as individual as possible.

hi jets and billy, thanks for the kind words. i've actually put this up on my space, if you'd like to give it a listen click the website button to your left then click "music".

FAO, the house i'm pictured standing in front of is John Lennon's in Menlove avenue Liverpool, i had the pleasure of visiting on my 60th 2 years ago.

i recognised it right off. what a great song, and such a swine to sing! it's kind of quiet, then just as your nodding off, it screams at you, then goes quiet again. Beatles fan since "My Bonnie" only ever played once on Radio Luxembourg, and i heard it, what a great day that was!

you know when i saw those photo's i had a strange feeling in my stomach, i felt a little sick and my mood changed to depressed. i know that's part of the process and once done the guitar will have a new lease of life, sound and look beautiful. but looking at it now makes me rather weepy. sorry, i just had to say that.....boo hoo. please hurry-up and get it back to beautiful and get the pictures up here. i could never be a guitar doctor!!!!!

hi curpy.

sorry i cant help you with that song but i will advise you not to display your email address. there is a button on the left side of the screen so you can direct people there and they can send the message through chordie.

THERE ARE SOME NOT SO NICE PEOPLE ABOUT, so i'd remove your email address ASAP

thanks both, i dont know why i set the reverb so high, it sounded good (i thought) on the first vocal track, then i did a second and i couldnt then take it down, and i couldn't be bothered to do it again! lazy i guess.

hi dino, russ's thumb is big enough for the two of you. cheers

well done Ed, just think of all those lesser mortals you've done better than. you've got a mention and a good listen by a lot of powers that be, you may well be destined for the big time. kudos

nice lament there brother. i've been trudging around the pubs/clubs of South Wales for over 30 years. i've met all sorts; good singers bad singers and smartalecs by the score.

i did a really great gig one night and a guy came up to me at the end and said "my mate is a much better singer than you" so i said great, where does he play? the guy says " oh he doesnt do it professionally, he's got to get legless before he starts singing, then he falls down after a couple of songs!" so i said, he's not better than me then is he?

i'd like to hear this if you put music to it. let us know how you get on