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(21 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Ian, Nice job... I liked the lyrics and I am trying to get the flow of the song. Keep it going -  great stuff !

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I have been working on the song that I posted last week - re arranged the lyrics and added (at least what I think is ) a pretty cool intro to the song.   I wish I could sing ( i am really bad) ... but I just love how the music fits.  I am hoping that some of you good guitarists with nice voices can appreciate it.  I am just a beginner at guitar but have always been a songwriter since my college days.  I love the irony of this song b/c   the chords are flavored with minors and it is about the " minor man" . Hope you like it. If you have any suggestions to improve it - i am always open to them.  Loving learning how to play and love this chordie.com - it is the best !
 
Thanks to Mekidsmom and Arkady  for their assistance in getting me to post this the right way!
( and I do  hope I have it right this time!)
smile

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I was just messing around trying to play minor chords better when the idea of writing a song using mior chords about a minor man who cheated - just popped in my head ! ( I never cheated!)

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Minor Man Jim K





Intro


[Am] [Dm] [E7] [ Am]


[Am] [Dm] [Am,e7] [Am]




Verse 1


[Am]What began as a minor


                        


[Dm] incident, has [E7] nowbecome the


[Am] main event




[Am] What seemed like minor [Dm] circumstances,    


with [E7]inviting smiles , and


[Am]enchanted glances




Chorus


[Dm]You’ve got minor faith in


[Am]anything I say, I’ve [E7] blown your trust, and there’s


[Am] hell to pay




[Dm]To say I’m sorry


[Am] just won’t do, You’ve got [E7] minor faith in my


[Am]love for you


[E7]minor faith in my [Am]love for you




[E7] [Am]


Verse 2




[Am] Should have told you


[Dm]Long ago, about[E7]Minor details that you


[Am]ought to know





[Am]Lies and deception


[Dm] of the soul, a [E7] minor situation where I


[Am] lostcontrol


Chorus


[Dm]You’ve got minor faith in


[Am]anything I say, I’ve [E7] blown your trust, and there’s


[Am] hell to pay




[Dm]To say I’m sorry


[Am] just won’t do, You’ve got [E7] minor faith in my


[Am]love for you


[E7]minor faith in my [Am]love for you


[E7] [Am]




Verse 3




[Am]Traded love for a


[Dm] touch of skin, [E7]Played a game that I could


[Am] never win




[Am] With blinded eyes and a


[Dm ]jaded plan, [E7] major flaws in a


[Am] minor man


repeat3x--> [E7] major flaws in a


[Am] minor man



Ending


[Am][Dm] [E7] [Am]


[E7] [Am] [E7] [Am] [E7] [Am] fade



Hey Everybody - JK Here (Jim)   I am a teacher in Upstate New York near Cooperstown.  I have been teching myself guitar - theanks to all the wonderful freeby lessons on the net...and after a couple of years I'm actually starting to get it. I am enjoying playing songs and even a little writing. Playing guitar is my "getaway". I just try each day to learn something different and play everything  else over again. (It used to be quick - now it takes a lot longer) NIce to be part of this family - Kudos to Ken for sending me this link !

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank You !

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