Not bad at all, Mark. I like how you tell a story on this one

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(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song, Daddy. Stuffs tough all over. I think you did really well on the chorus
Selso

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

The recordings a little rough, but I like it even more now then before.

I'm still going through this!! Have a two year old who thinks food time is play time. She ends up wearing more then eating more. I have to mop at least 3 times a day

ctech wrote:

Thanks Phill, I'm no1 in there chart with How many times,made me smile,a lot of people have said that i sound like Dylan & Donovan but the man to me is John Lennon. Imagine simply said it all,a masterpiece. I'll try to record I can't believe at a later date,I'm not totally happy with the 3rd verse it doesn't flow like the others,Had to sing.

I tried searching for you song Maybe I'm wrong couldn't find it on Chordie ,could you post it so I can have the chords & Lyrics,I like to have a go at singing it,I love it. reminds me of a cross between Barry Manilow & Neil Diamond.

Trevor

I'd say like Lennon, but in a good way!!
Selso

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great effort from both of you. I like it when people com together like that.
Selso

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(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Geo,
Thanks for taking the time to listen. I tried to be a blunt as possible when I wrote it.

Hey Phil,
Your right, this did need to come out. I've written other songs about my brother, but nothing so straight forward. Thanks for listening.

Hi ya Kap,
Your emailed helped alot. And I thank the mods for being so cool about the lyrical content. Sometimes we just need a push from an unexpected source. Thanks again, buddy

Hi Ken,
I figured you might like this. Though we defiantly have difference of opinion on some stuff, I think music is one thing we can agree on. Thanks for commenting.

Selso

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[A]She said the gravy trains over and I aint gonna miss your crap
[D]She said the free rides over and I wont miss you a bit[A]
Go find you a gal,[E] that’ll put with all your  s$$t. [A]


That's an awesome verse. I feel your pain for sure.
Selso

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Anybody who's ever been to war will tell you how much it sucks. I see where your coming from with this, so I'll just say good song and leave it at that. It's good to hear other point of views and not be stuck in my little gung ho bubble
Selso

Here, in New Mexico, every one says" Just another day in Paradise". What ? is every one a Phil Collins fan? Or when some one is late or doesn't show up they say " It's the land of Manana" Manana being tomorrow in Spanish. That's just a few of them.
Selso

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Thanks you guys. Your comments mean a lot. Especially yours, Southpaw. This was a hard one to perform, not necessarily to write. but I can barely make it through with out breaking down
Selso

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Well, yesterday was the 11th year of my twin brother's death and I thought I'd break out with this one. It's edited for content but if the moderators feel like it needs to be edited further,  I take no offense. the recordings on myspace


Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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Temptation calling? Well like you said, look but dont touch. I always wondered if touching but not looking was okay. Probably not. Good one, Daddy

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Looks like the vid doesn't really match up to what your playing. None the less good song
Selso

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That was pretty cool. You strum the hell out of that thing
Selso

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She said to say she loves and misses you all.
Selso

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Keep'em coming, bro. You got talent

I like it alot. Love to hear it if you got a recording. Ive got one called Caged I think you'd like. Check out my myspace page. If you want. Not trying to high jack your thread. I can just relate

I read tab and my wife started to teach me to read the notes but I'm slow as heck. I play by ear and thats my only saving grace

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(43 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nicely done, Kap. Cant wait to hear it

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bonedaddy wrote:

Has anyone recently tried googling 'french military victories' hilarious!

I think you'll find it under US victories

Not much to add but I use to live in Woodstock and people their seem to get mad about the whole Woodstock thing. after the last Woodstock i think they'd rather just forget the whole thing

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That was freakin cool. I need me one of those things

I think the title needs to be on its own line. Does that make sense? And at the bottom the [/song] needs to be on its own line as well. I think, not for sure. I tried your link and it worked for me, go figure. My computers acting weird theses days.
Selso

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(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

KAP54 wrote:

Sweet :-)
I don't know why I love the sound of the mandolin but I do.

you do cuz its sweet!