4,001

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi stransongs,

when it comes to a bridge, if i'm stuck i usually look back at my old (failed) songs, i may find one catchy line, or a chord sequence that'll set things off.

i like what you've done so far, 2 more verses to follow, and a bridge?

phill

4,002

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

hi kenny,

kudos,  i knew you were a great musician, but i never realised how brilliantly you wrote lyrics, and you put this together in a day?....there are no words i can say to express how i feel about this piece, so i'd just like to award you the victoria cross of poetry...brill

phill

4,003

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

hi stransongs, i think kenny has said it all there, this is an extraordinary piece, beautiful and tragic.

well done sir

phill

4,004

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks to all who commented,

mekidsmom, i think were stretching things here with the elton john refference, but thank you, your so lovelly...anal?  na

thanks kenny, are you keeping OK? talk soon buddy

geoguitar, thanks i'm trying...very trying according to my wife!

hi helena, a citog? i hope that's not swearing? thanks, i usually up-load the songs and lyrics the same time, but my-space can take up-to 24 hours before they can be listened to. hwyl

hi brokenarrow, thanks, dont forget, life is just a box of chocolates...what ever that means

phill

4,005

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi linus,

terrific imagery, audio or video would be nice

phill

4,006

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert,

please dont take this the wrong way, as i mean it as a compliment, but you could put this on a greetings card, the verse is super-duper...well done that man. have you thought about posting some stuff on the poetry section, you'll be very welcome.

and i notice a liberal sprinkling of minor chords too...

phill

4,007

(24 replies, posted in Recording)

I was just looking through my discs (and there are many!) and I've found some that will only record on my stand alone CD recorder and they are TDK CD-Music. I think you have to use DATA discs in your PC.

Phill

4,008

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

hi stran,

wow, very powerful piece.
i've stood out-side the hospital ward doors too many times my self, it's not a place i like being. parents, in-laws, children and worst of all my wife (4 years ago she had a very serious op) i can even empathise with the lost years, as i met my wife at 16, we didn't get on so we lost touch for 15 years, then we met again, fell in love and the rest is history...
the last part you have all to yourself, i've never smoked or drank heavily and never taken drugs or been nasty to anyone. but it is all there, marvelous, you've captured reality and made a very gritty and realistic poem.

congratulations 10 out of 10

phill

4,009

(24 replies, posted in Recording)

hi tony,

burning disks is a bit of a minefield! some disks wont play on older players, some wont play on expensive ones!!! so you ask "what's the point?" i've got no answer.

i know i'm just an old fart, but has the CDR+ or - got anything to do with it. i've got a philips CD recorder, and it will only record on one type,(cant remember which as i haven't used in a while)

surely you can down-load a free burner program? i've seen some on CNET, give them a go.

and check out if your burning to data or music....

phill

4,010

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

"you gave me inspiration to create my songs
now i share them with all chordians"

dubious and dare i say cheeky little rhyme there daddy?

nice one

phill

4,011

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jody,

i read through your words first and i could hear the guy who sang "boy named sue" (i've forgotten his name, old age creeping up on me!) so then i played it on youtube and it was totally different to how i heard it. i think it needs to be more beaty with a faster rhythm. the song itself is a great narrative.

fine work

phill

4,012

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks for all your very positive comments. sorry i've been so busy the last 2 weeks that i haven't had much chance to get on line and do all the things i want to.

just to say though, it's my pleasure to work with mr harding, i can just throw him a couple of jumbled up chords and back he comes with an instrumental break that'll make hank marvin tremble in his hush puppies.

before i go i'd just like to say that it's such a privilege working with such fine writers and musicians, something i'd never have been able to do without chordie or the internet.

pob hwyl

phill

4,013

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi folks, sorry i've been very bizzy of late, anyhoo, russ  and i have done a new version of are you awake? or as russ calls it "as we sleep"...is he trying to say something?, any road up, it's on my space...click left, we would like to have your comments.

thanks in anticipation..

phill and russ

4,014

(1 replies, posted in Poems)

Here's another one dedicated to our men and women serving abroad.

Welcome Home The Hero's.     

Phill Williams. 28th February 2010.

Through the darkest dark, the coldest cold.
The hero's march, both stern and bold.
No lesser men could rise this high.
Their duty clear; to do or die.

Life is dear to all who live.
Life is all some have to give.
Give not your life in senseless rage.
For another's cause who lives on, safe.
To take the lives of innocents.
Women, children, non-combatants.

And so the hero's through the dark.
Stealthy shadows, silent walk.
To take one life to save so many.
Who'll give his life to kill so many.

And yet the oppressed do not cheer.
Do not celebrate life without fear.
All their work their sacrifice.
As dust in the breeze, a torch in daylight.

But they wont give-up, wont turn and run.
No fear of fools, of madmen with guns.
Sometimes let down by their own countrymen.
Don't sneer in his face, don't deride what he's done.
For the next life he saves may be yours...
Cry “FREEDOM� .
Cheer loud.
Applaud the parade.
Welcome home the hero's.
Give thanks for what they've saved.

4,015

(8 replies, posted in Electric)

i've had the same problems with d`adario's myself. i changed the set hoping that it was just a bad set, but the replacement set are doing the same. i've put some good old rotosound on my acoustic which have a lovely tone, so i'm gonna give them a go next time, i do use a .009 to .042 set, which are quite light, but i need them as i do a lot of bending during gigs, (i find ernie balls too bendy). so the only advice i can give is try a different make.

phill

4,016

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark, you could be on to something, as it seems more and more popular for members to add their songs on video. it's a lot less fuss than recording then transferring to MP3 then up-loading when most computers will record a song while you play it...simples!

hi bud-wiser, your wish is my command, words duly up-loaded, let me know how you get on?

hi stransongs,  OK THEN I'LL SHOUT...only joking, words are up here somewhere.

hi russel,  crock rock was recorded in benidrom, spain last october by my son, who thought he was taking a photo on my sony stills camera! that's when i found out it takes video too. glad you liked my other offerings.

phill

4,017

(1 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I wrote and recorded this in the key of F, using a capo on the 5th frett. I have transposed it to C for ease of play, as not everyone sings in the same key.

Second Substitute.Undefined


[C] Am I [Cmaj7] invisible? You [Fmaj7] know I'm standing [Fmaj7add 9] here.


[C] Your talking [Cmaj7] about me, you must [Fmj7] know that I can [Fmj7add9] hear.


[Em] I know I'm not [Am] important, in the [Fmj7] greater scheme of [D7] life.


And I'm [Fmj7] 2nd [C] substitute.


Your, [Fmj7] sun to [C] fight the blues.


While, [Fmj7] I keep [C] you amused, as [D7] long as we're [Fmj7] alone.




Position impossible, I can't stay where I'm abused.


Am I your chimpanzee to keep your friends amused?


My feelings aren't important in your self-important life.


And I'm, 2nd substitute.


Your, sun to fight the blues.


While, I keep you amused, as long as we're alone.






(CHORUS)




But it's, [Am] all change when [D7] we are all alone.


Your a [Am] different girl when [D7] all your friends have gone.


And it's just [Am] you and me and [D7] I'm the one you want.



[Em] I keep forgetting that your [Fmj7] such a brat.


[Em] I keep forgetting thatyou [D7] can be like [Fmj7]that.




Sometimes you call me up, come on I need you here.


Then you will knock me back, when your friends are standing near.


You run me down to them until they've disappeared.


And I'm, 2nd substitute.


Your, sun to fight the blues.


While, I keep you amused, as long as we're alone.




(REPEAT CHORUS) > SOLO OVER VERSE)




And I'm, [Fmj7] 2nd [C] substitute.


Your, [Fmj7] sun to [C] fight the blues.


While, [Fmj7] I keep [C] you amused, as [D7] long as we're [Fmj7] alone.




Words & Music by Phill Williams. 17th February 2010.





The Fmj7 add 9 is simply an F chord, with no barre (top and bottom E strings left open, then remove middle finger to play the open G string.

4,018

(12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Abbey Road studio's are obviously worth saving, but a cost of £30 million + is licking the gravy train somewhat, dont you think?
As all these multi-national conglomerates can buy out British businesses, asset strip them and throw all the skilled and experienced people out of work, so they can make more profit for the already mega-bucked investors, by opening another factory somewhere that the wages are paid in peanuts, is not only a disgusting practice but should be a criminal offence. Who wins from this kind of business practice...bankers, and the aforementioned investors...may they burn in the ashes of their own profits. As has happened in the North East this week, and all over the country for some years! It brings it all into perspective?
As for Abbey Road, (it was only a small rant) as Lloyd-Webber says, it's one of the only places in the country that can house a large orchestra (Hey Jude) it can update to accommodate the latest recording equipment, and as proved recently, can hold a small audience while a live TV or radio programme can be made.
The company who bought out EMI, are up to their necks in debt, and are using the name, made famous by The Beatles, Pink Floyd and others to get themselves out of trouble, so will push to get the best deal. I suppose we would all do the same in their position?
As a PS, I dont suppose a housing estate would have the same draw, or the same romance as a world famous recording studio?
phill

4,019

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Every one seems to be making vids lately, so I've made one of a new song called "second Substitute" and a totally unrelated song called "With you my Love " sans video. Both can be found on My Space, just hit the button to your left marked web. thanks for listening and watching. chords and words will be up-loaded if requested.

Phill

4,020

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

it's the little things that mean the most

phill

4,021

(12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i see mccartney hopes that some people will get together and save the studio's, why cant he do it himself, better than give all his cash to heather mills.

phill

4,022

(2 replies, posted in Poems)

This is a continuation of a song theme "Good Men Of God"

She Fly's A Flag Out-Side Her Home. Phill Williams 18/02/10

A flag is flying caught by the breeze.
It snaps and cracks and flutters, free.
Not like the wife that suffers here.
Waiting for the visit home.
She makes the bed.
She washes clothes.
She makes her way to the corner store.
Meals for one.
Tears for sure.
Whether he still breathes when he gets home.
Till then she waits, with the wife next door.

She fly's her flag defiantly.
Some hoodies pass and sneer and jeer.
“Learn some respect you pathetic louts.
My husband fights to save your life.�
She paints the rooms.
Mows the lawn.
Candle light until it's dawn.
Wash the floors.
Watch TV.
Jumps at each knock on the front door.
Dreads who's calling, good news she hopes.

So she fly's her flag out-side her home.

4,023

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

wow, powerful piece my friend.

i've tried on occasion to write about wife-beaters and abusers, but i haven't managed to hit the spot like you have here, so well done.

my wife was abused by her first husband, and oddly enough most of the girls i went out with before we met, no wonder they all wanted to marry me.

there must be something about boring that is attractive after a beating!

i'd rather be boring, in fact i'm proud of it!

i like this well done....i'd like it more if i could hear it...

phill

ps, got there in the end...nice piece

4,024

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

sorry, i missed the link, i nearly ju,ped out of my skin when the voice came in my right ear; "try not to kill 'em Buck"

nice laid back feel

phill

4,025

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark, maybe you could re-title it; "what to do on a beach in northern france while waiting for the boat home"?

i haven't seen the film, but now i've heard your music, i'm certainly going to look-out for it, though i dont expect the movie score to be as good as yours.

phill