451 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jeepers Scott

I hope I don’t have to wait so long for another excellent bit of writing from you!

Rock on bro!
Jim

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452 Reply by TIGLJK

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Bravo Peatle!     

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453 Reply by TIGLJK

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Peatle
Brilliant observations, great writing. I agree w/ Phill 100%
As I read it, for my case it is spot on, the only change I would make in my case would be adding two more words on the last line. 
I think i would add to certainty, the words "and approval"
Well done my friend!!
Jim.     

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454 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jan

Loved this song.
Phill I agree with you halfway on you comment on media coverage.  You are correct that they can be career- enders.
However - I also agree with Jan that they turn a blind eye to many.( Depending on political  perspectives or monetary impact)
I can't stand the way CNN and FOX both make up crap  or dig especially deep for political endorsement.
News show be impartial and wholly truthful.

But anyways - good thing we have independent writers and musicians that do exposes on importmatters that get lost in the media.

WELL DONE JAN !!
Keep them coming!

Jim     

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455 Topic by TIGLJK

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https://youtu.be/7GAioBLixmk

I think Phill was awesome on this one !

Jim 

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456 Reply by TIGLJK

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Very nice Jan !
Your golden voice is great as usual, and the lyrics are spot on.
flows nicely.
Loved it

Jim     

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457 Reply by TIGLJK

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https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … m-the-dust

link to Phill's version of Rise Up     

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458 Reply by TIGLJK

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Thank you Peatle

Phill is amazing     

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459 Topic by TIGLJK

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https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … m-the-dust


This is the link to the song I wrote.
Phill did such an incredible cover - I think you will agree.

It's funny, Phill played it almost exactly how I was hearing inside my head, but I had no
idea how to play the music as such.  THANK YOU PHILL !!!!



Jim 

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460 Reply by TIGLJK

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Phil
"Wowser" is an Australian and New Zealand term that refers to a person who seeks to deprive others of behaviour deemed to be immoral or sinful.
a wowser is commonly someone who looks to crack down on enjoyment
someone who disapproves of people enjoying themselves
someone who stops other people from having fun

I had never heard of it before either...   lol

as far as the chorus, I just put a comma in - that should help = what it means is that before her are the opportunities to move forward - through the symbolic doors so to speak.

My niece had her husband leave  a few years ago - and she is a wonderful girl.   She is so hesitant to begin her life again and venture into any new relationship.  It was a conversation about her situation that sparked this song, along of course, with the suggested words from our friends here on chordie. The transfer from "she" to "you" was intentional, like an old uncle (which I am ) giving her some advice ( which I actually did) smile  I also changed it from girl to woman so as to impress that she has changed as well.   
Phill - thanks so much - your comments always are spot on and helpful.  If you have any suggestions musically, you know I always need help there !  I'm pretty much limited to cowboy chords and easy progressions.

I would love to hear your rendition if you get a chance.

Cheers
JIm

ps, this morning my town in mid NY State is getting blessed with up to 24" of snow !!  It's beautiful, but a pain in the arse.  smile

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461 Topic by TIGLJK

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Rise Up From The Dust By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[Em]The sounds of lonely winds, and the [A]secrets they [Em]hide


[Em]just a prelude to the misery that [A] she keeps in[Em]side


Oh,[Em]her heart was shattered, now she’s[A] looking for a way [Em]out


[Em]and leave behind the past, but [A]she’s drowning in [Em]doubt


.




Verse 2


.




[Em]She tries to live in the present, but her [A]mind’s still in the [Em]past


[Em]she caters to what she might lose, [A]believing nothing will [Em] last


[Em]blinded by tears and fears, and what the[A] wowsers might [Em]say


[Em]struggling to be free, and to live for [A]love on some other [Em]day




.






chorus


now girl, [A]before you, are the doors to start again,


and a [Em] fight to rise up from the dust


but [A]you must chose to leave your solitude,


just as[Em] twilight deepens into the dusk


.


[A]it’s time for you to take a leap of faith,


and be[Em]lieve that you are strong


just [A]open up your heart and find love again


and [B7]live life to the [A]fullest , before it’s [Em]gone


.


Verse 3



.




[Em]it’s not easy to find a new song, in the [A] jukebox we call [Em]life


[Em]despatchers send us doubts, they say[A] love cuts you like a[Em] knife


[Em]but the past is the past for a reason. It's [A] been, and now it is [Em]gone


[Em] Woman, it’s time to look ahead, yeah, it’s [A]time to move [Em]on


.






chorus


now girl, [A]before you, are the doors to start again,


and a [Em] fight to rise up from the dust


but [A]you must chose to leave your solitude,


just as[Em] twilight deepens into the dusk


.


[A]it’s time for you to take a leap of faith,


and be[Em]lieve that you are strong


just [A]open up your heart and find love again


and [B7]live life to the [A]fullest , before it’s [Em]gone




outgo


.


[Em] rise up from the dust


[Em] rise up from the dust


[Em]rise up from the dust


.


slow


'




[B7] fight to [A]rise up from the [A]dust



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462 Reply by TIGLJK

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well, I had to actually look up what a frigging " wowser" was ( thank you for that whoever suggested that one !) smile   lol

But I ended up writing a song this morning that was able to use all of the suggested words once again.

Here it is -let me know what you think.  I'm sure I will tweak it a bit going forward.


Rise Up From The Dust By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[Em]The sounds of lonely winds, and the [A]secrets they [Em]hide


[Em]just a prelude to the misery that [A] she keeps in[Em]side


Oh,[Em]her heart was shattered, now she’s[A] looking for a way [Em]out


[Em]and leave behind the past, but [A]she’s drowning in [Em]doubt


.




Verse 2


.




[Em]She tries to live in the present, but her [A]mind’s still in the [Em]past


[Em]she caters to what she might lose, [A]believing nothing will [Em] last


[Em]blinded by tears and fears, and what the[A] wowsers might [Em]say


[Em]struggling to be free, and to live for [A]love on some other [Em]day




.






chorus


now girl, [A]before you are the doors to start again,


and a [Em] fight to rise up from the dust


but [A]you must chose to leave your solitude,


just as[Em] twilight deepens into the dusk


.



[A]it’s time for you to take a leap of faith,


and be[Em]lieve that you are strong


just [A]open up your heart and find love again


and [B7]live life to the [A]fullest , before it’s [Em]gone


.


Verse 3


.




[Em]it’s not easy to find a new song, in the [A] jukebox we call [Em]life


[Em]despatchers send us doubts, they say[A] love cuts you like a[Em] knife


[Em]but the past is the past for a reason. It's [A] been, and now it is [Em]gone


[Em] Woman, it’s time to look ahead, yeah, it’s [A]time to move [Em]on


.






chorus


now girl, [A]before you are the doors to start again,


and a [Em] fight to rise up from the dust


but [A]you must chose to leave your solitude,


just as[Em] twilight deepens into the dusk


.


[A]it’s time for you to take a leap of faith,


and be[Em]lieve that you are strong


just [A]open up your heart and find love again


and [B7]live life to the [A]fullest , before it’s [Em]gone



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463 Reply by TIGLJK

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Fantastic pics Jan
You look fabulous !
Love that little electric uke in the photo.

Mekidsmom (Amy) taught me how to post pics on chordie - wish she was still on here.
She had a golden voice like you as well Jan.

You are so considerate - I would never have thought about background people



Graham - Link did not work for me either.

Jim     

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464 Reply by TIGLJK

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Phill,
an amazing song.
Hits so close to home as my wife's cousin was hit and killed by a drunk driver, and last week we had a 15 yr old local girl hit by a drunk woman at 2pm in the afternoon. That woman also took off, and then returned to the scene later- only to be apprehended.  The girl is in the Syracuse medical center clinging to every breathe to survive.
I also quite agree about what used to be nice communities being infliltrated by drug dealers - it seems rural areas are now the fave spot for them to hide out and produce their evil pharmaceuticals.

Your lyrics are excellent  the defining line in the song for me is "What can I do, there's no way out?"     The way out is to face up to the truth and do the right thing - or better yet- think before you do rotten stuff like this !   
I am sure you will put a recording up right ?

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

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465 Reply by TIGLJK

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Graham

you are a master of disaster smile

cyclotron   bahahahahahahahaha     

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466 Topic by TIGLJK

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This is the link to the song I wrote.
(As usual, my playing and singing might make your ears suffer smile ) 
I messed up the ending a bit - but I didn't have time to do it over.

Let me know what you think.

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … g-helpless 

ps
I wouldn't mind if someone that can actually play and sing would cover it. 
lol

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467 Reply by TIGLJK

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Jan
Stray Cat Strut  was incredibly well done.   Voice is great and instrumental part was excellent!   Perfect song choice.   I loved the " meow!"    you nailed it ! One of the best songs you have performed !

Yellow bird was well done as well.
Thanks for sharing.   Jim     

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468 Reply by TIGLJK

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Nice one Jeff  It  made me hungry for some of that pie!!! 
I can smell the aroma all the way up here in NY !!

No wonder you had errors in the project - impossible to concentrate with that aroma flowing around.

Jim     

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469 Topic by TIGLJK

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A classic love story of anguish and hope...hope you like it.

Feeling Helpless by Jim Kenyon





[Am] I’m wondering if you remember, the night when we first met


[E]touching hands and a virgin kiss


so[Am] hard to forget


[Am] oh, we wandered into love, with a thousand tender fears


with [E] stars shining brightly in our eyes


there was [Am] never a need for tears




[Am] time has a way of passing by, it always brings winds of change


[E] seems like we have drifted apart


the fa[Am]miliar now seems strange


[Am] There's some people that believe, that true love never dies


but [E] I can feel it fading away, baby


I can [Am] see it in your eyes


.


Chorus


.




[Dm] Why am I feeling


[Am] helpless


Like I’m [Dm] living in the


[Am] dark


is there [Dm] anything we can


[Am]say or do


[E] to mend these weary


[Am] hearts




[E] to mend these weary


[Am] hearts


.




[Am] my eyes look to the future, but my heart’s living in the past.


but I’m [E] doubting if you even care


but those [Am]memories seem to last


[Am] They say you don't know what you've got, until it's gone.



I [E] couldn't disagree any more


‘cause I’ve [Am] known all along


.




[Am] the dreams we once had are distant, lost in a sea of regret


[E] there’s not much left that's unbroken


and [Am] words we’ll never forget


[Am] try and remember all the good times, but they seem so far away.


[E]I wish we had the answers


to keep [Am] our love from slipping away




.


Chorus


.






[Dm] Why do I keep


[Am] praying


That it [Dm] doesn’t have to be this


[Am] way


is there [Dm] anything I can


[Am] say or do


you know, [E] baby, I still love


[Am] you


[Dm] Why am I feeling


[Am] helpless


is there [Dm] anything I can


[Am] say or do


[Dm] Why am I feeling


[Am] helpless


because[E] baby, I still love


[Am] you


[Dm] Why am I feeling


[Am] helpless


you know [E] baby, I still love


[Am] you


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470 Reply by TIGLJK

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Sounds great Graham.   I could n't help nut think -  "They called me the snowman"   "ghost Blues"   

Could it be a reflection of grey hair ?      smile   smile   smile

Looked like a lot of fun and a nice bar.

Jim     

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471 Reply by TIGLJK

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I wrote this song this morning  because Jan threw down the gauntlet challenge for the chordie song of the month smile
Graham - "aardvark "   baghahahahaha   it made me laugh out loud!

It's got all the words in it as usual.  I kinda got a little bit on the soapbox here, but i tried to mask it a bit.

Let me know what you think

(I also will post it in songwriting)

On The Wings Of Morning Doves by Jim Kenyon


[A]I dreamt I was riding a horse with no name


Through an octopuses’ garden in the [E]night


[E]There were free birds flying in the clouds


And Buffalo soldiers forced to [A]fight


.




[A]There were iron butterflies in the air


As werewolves of London howled at the [E] moon


[E]while politicians dove down their rabbit holes


As paper tigers dance to the money [A]tune


.




Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knows only love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of a morning [A]dove


.




[A]black crows singing singing for what it’s worth


and next thing I knew I was aboard Noah’s [E] ark


[E]a shaman appeared and asked me this question


why pass on the unicorn’s, but save the aard[A]vark ?


.






[A]I saw a Lion sleeping all through the night


and all the other animals were feeling very [E]lucky


Dogs were barking at the  cats  in a cradle


As men with hoods drank mint julips in Ken[A]tucky


.





Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knowsonly love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of a morning [A]dove


.




[A]As the dawn was starting to end the night


my dream put me in a car, I think it was a [E]Chevy


[E]and people were crying, as a few were dying


I drove it down by the river near a dry [A]levee


.




[A]My dream took me to a party at the Bohemian club


The members all had Rolls Royce’s with a plastic[E] Jesus


[E]I saw bombs with people’s names hidden in the clouds


since that apple in Eden, seems we do what [A]pleases.


.




Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knowsonly love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of a morning [A]dove


.




Outgo- a little slower


yeah and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of a morning [A]dove


keep dreaming that[E]peace is found on the [D]wings of a morning [A]dove





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472 Topic by TIGLJK

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I wrote this song this morning  because Jan threw down the gauntlet challenge for the chordie song of the month smile

It's got all the words in it as usual.  I kinda got a little bit on the soapbox here, but i tried to mask it a bit.

Let me know what you think

(I also will post it in the SOTM Thread)


On The Wings Of Morning Doves by Jim Kenyon


[A]I dreamt I was riding a horse with no name


Through an octopuses’ garden in the [E]night


[E]There were free birds flying in the clouds


And Buffalo soldiers forced to [A]fight


.




[A]There were iron butterfliesin the air


As werewolves of London howled at the [E] moon


[E]while politicians dove down their rabbit holes


with paper tigers dancing to the money [A]tune


.




Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knows only love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of morning [A]doves


.




[A]black crows were singing hallelujah mama


while young people wondered for what it's [E]worth


[E]and all along the watchtower it seems


no one cares that blood still stains our[A]earth ?


.





[A] I saw a Lion sleeping all through the night


it was peaceful on the plains of the[E]savanna


but then I saw mama's crying, and good men dying


as men with hoods burned crosses in Ala[A]bama


.





Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knows only love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of morning [A]doves


.




[A]As the dawn was starting to end the night


my dream put me in a car, it was was a '59 [E]Chevy


[E]the snow was flying, the radio said the music was dying


so I drove myself down by the river to the[A]levee


.




[A]My dream took me to a party at the Bohemian club


The members all had Rolls Royce’s with plastic[E] Jesus'


[E]I saw bombs with people’s names hidden in the clouds


like that apple in Eden, seems we do whatever [A]pleases.


.




Chorus


[D]Dreams can be a place where no child goes hungry


[A]A place where the world knows only love


[D]a place where heart’s are filled with compassion


and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of morning [A]doves


.




Outgo- a little slower


yeah and [E]peace is found on the [D]wings of morning [A]doves


keep dreaming that[E]peace is found on the [D]wings of morning [A]doves





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473 Reply by TIGLJK

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Thanks Phill

"Jusing" is a word that  means the writer used to have the word" just" right in front of the word "using", but when he edited it, he only took out the "ust" of just, thus creating the word "jusing" !    smile

Thanks for giving it a go when you get the time. As usual, feel free to make any musical adjustments you feel necessary. I 
I was reading historical prose and poetry from the 13th century (among others) actually, (CARME 85 FROM CATULLUS’ LIBER, DANTE’S VITA NOVA,GUIDO CAVAL CANTI’S RHYMES GASPARA STAMPA’S RHYMES  “SATURA”,  DON’T GO AWAY BY MARIO LUZI,  just to cite a few.  I read so many that I don't really remember which one that it was that had that line  {I think it was one of Dante's}  In Dante's Vita Nova (" New Life") he writes about a woman named Beatrice ( who becomes the focal point of many of his works) and he says "my first sight of her was at the age of nine "  .... "from that time forward, Love quite governed my soul”.   What a line - I almost used that as the genesis of my writing. { Maybe another one someday, smile } It's funny how words from so long ago effect you - I actually feel sometimes that I as read poetry like this I become one one the characters - it makes you feel their feelings sometimes.  It's a shame that most school's have moved  away from some of the greatest writing ever - choosing instead to have kids read a lot of modern junk and let them watch tic - tok instead.


Your insight is keen, as i actually just started out writing a poem and when it was done, I said " what the heck, why not throw some chords in there ?" 
I'm not sure if your allowed to make a "chorus" like I did - that's why I wrote "kinda" afterward with a  smile  .

Thanks again, Phill

Jim

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474 Topic by TIGLJK

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first of all , this song has nothing to with me or my life,  purely a figment of my imagination. 
I was reading a book and the line " life's never what it seems" kept coming up.  it kinda stuck in my head and when I picked up my guitar, this is what eventually came out. It probably ( or certainly)  will need some tweaking, but it's long and I'm spent.
So here it is.
Please let me know what you think .

Nothing’s ever what it seems By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[A]In the summer time when the [G]sun is warm


Love can[A] steal the hearts and minds of [G]men


I recall we [A]met on the [G]beach one night


my [D] life would never be the same again


.




[A]her eyes were blue, her [G]smile was deadly


Knew my [A] heart never stood a [G] chance


I watched her [A] silhouette moving a[G]gainst the sea


as [D] she swayed in a perfect moonlight dance




Chorus ( kinda smile )




and[E] I couldn’t [F#m]help wondering,


am I[A] caught up in a bad [G]dream


I[E] stood there watching [F#m]breathlessly


Thinking [A] what could [D]this really [E] mean


nothing’s [G] ever [D]what it [A]seems


.




Verse 2


.




[A] there’s something about [G]falling in love


Feeling [A] things that you never felt be[G]fore


It doesn’t [A] seem to have a[G] rhyme or reason


It [D]always leaves you begging for something more




.




[A] But we got caught in the [G]winds of change


She seemed [A] to lose the purpose in her [G] eyes


We tried to [A]mask the problems from [G] each other


But [D]seems it turned out to be a poor disguise




.


Chorus ( kinda smile )


.


and[E] I couldn’t [F#m]help wondering,


what’s[A] happening to our [D]dreams


I[E] stood there rather [F#m]hopelessly


Thinking [A] what could [D]this really [E] mean


nothing’s [G] ever [D]what it [A]seems




Verse 3


.





[A]It appeared she was [G]changing colors


I guess it [A]depends on your point of [G]view


Must be what[A] we had just wasn’t[G] good enough


She was [D]always looking for something new




.




[A]she said it wasn’t the [G] life she wanted


felt like [A] she was always running a[G]way


gave the [A] illusion that we’d [G]work it out,


but ]we [Dboth knew she couldn’t stay




Chorus ( kinda smile )


.




and [E] I couldn’t [F#m]help wondering,


what [A] was shattering all our [D]dreams


I[E] stood back in the [F#m]shadows


thinking [A] what could [D]this really [E] mean


nothing’s [G]ever [D]what it [A]seems




Verse 4


.




[A] I was thinkingabout[G] her this morning


but you [A] know that ain’t really big [G]news


it only [A]leads to misery [G]and an empty home


where [D] the only colors left are the blues




.




[A]don’t know what we could've [G] done different


we made [A]too many mistakes [G]along the way


I never [A]would’ve guessed it would lead to [G]this


where [D] there's no tomorrows, only yesterdays


.


Chorus ( kinda smile )


.


and [E] I couldn’t [F#m]help but to ask myself


through [A] all the pretense and the [D]schemes


did she[E] really ever have love for [F#m] me


was she [A] using me 'til it was [D]time to [E] leave


nothing’s [G] ever [D]what it [A]seems


nothing’s [G]ever [D]what it [A]seems


oh, nothing’s [G]ever [D]what it [A]seems





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475 Reply by TIGLJK

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Zurf wrote:

And many hats. One must wear a hat while playing. It's wrong if you don't.


Zurf,
No wonder I suck at playing guitar - I never wear a hat !   smile

Jim     

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