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Awesome Peatle !
You and Phill have developed into poets that are the eyes of the world.
Quite enjoyable to read both of your works - masters at it for sure.
EasyBeat - thanks for stimulating everyone - we would have missed out on some great stuff without your challenge.
What would be great is if some others joined in .
Very inspirational and touches home for me.
believe, believe, in eternity !
Thanks Peatle !
Phill
What an awesome description.
I felt like i was experiencing the things you described.
Loved how it also changed the focus as it went on. great line to finish - "an olfactory orgasm" !
I'll be using that line in the near future, I am sure.
Thanks sharing it - very cool.
Cheers
Jim
I recorded this for EB - bc I figured no one else would 
Sorry about my poor singing and playing, but at least you will get the jist of what it sounds like i my head.
Apologies to your ears, but I do hope you like the song.
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … al_sharing
hope you take the time to listen - let me know what you think.
Peatle
That is an amazing story ! WOW !!!!
So Cool
Thank you for sharing this - I enjoyed it immensely.
Cheers
Jim
Beatles
Fender ( But if Taylor was an option I would have picked it)
blues
60s
neither
A problem I will never have to worry about !
Clever wording EB
says the video is not available to people in United States
nice looking woman that worries a lot ?
a Sitar ?
Phill
LOL - My grandson watched it with me as he was in my computer room- he is age 7 - told me the same thing !
I quite agree with Phill except for one line
I think maybe it could be interpreted that you are the light - bringing goodness to the dark.
I can also imagine this being someone stepping into their cabin on a lake - just to get away from the business of their everyday life and work.
Solace - even by themselves - kind of a recovery and re-energizing place.
proves that short verse can be as thought provoking as epic length writings.
Thanks for sharing Brian
Good one
Jim
Brian
That was a great song and video ! Loved that it was recorded in the public garden of NYC ! Th turtles and the veggies fit so well with his fabulous playing and singing.
I loved at the end thet the butterfly flew away - so symbolic and in line with the lyrics.
Thanks for sharing that!
Jim
I wrote this song bc EB needs some help getting things going.
Kind of a country song - Mojo - if you have time maybe ? I could use some help I think.
anyways - here it is
Agreed, Chordie has lost many voices on the forum.
I just read the last post - I think it is spam - the earlier posts began with beamer, had mekidsmom and CG responding - those were from 2018.
EB You are right - that was not for me.
Cant say I would spend money on that genre.
Just Honest
Jim
EB
Nice tidbit of a rhyme that is spot on about so much music lately.
There is a lot of great music, but a large percentage is exactly how you describe it.
Good to see you posting.
Cheers
Jim
I recorded this as a blues song.
Apologies for singing and playing.
here is the soundcloud link
https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … al_sharing
Jim
Perspective is everything.
Jesus was missing ( at least in the bible from 12-30 years of age) does that make him a homeless person or a vagrant ?
Yogi's are isolated for years sometimes - same thing.
Nicely written Peatle- and again I agree with Phill - poetry need not rhyme.
You really should submit you poems to magazines of websites that that accept poetry for all to see. No sense of keeping good stuff all to yourself!
CHEERS !
PROST ! ( I learned this one on my European trip )
Jim
Peatle
Quite agree with Phill
in the words of Dylan "keep on keeping on " !
Jim
NIce one Graham
Seems there are more and more like that - not only in bars - but in schools, hospitals,
picnic areas etc... really - everywhere !
I suppose it's their way of enhancing their self image and gaining attention.
legends in their own minds I guess
as for him being a bedroom rockstar - I would believe it verges on vicarious experiences - more fiction than non-fiction.
Thanks for sharing
Jim
Well I spent a week traveling from Basel to Amsterdam and on the last night I heard a blues song that was sounded so beautiful. I got to thinking that my Astral Dream Woman song might fit so much better into the blues. So when I got home I changed it up to this.
Let me know what you think. I'm "pretty sure" I did this in 12 bar blues style, about 80 BPM tempo.
Memory
Nice, but I already have two Gibson's, my wife would "de-man" me if I bought this.
Peatle,
WOW, what a fantastic piece of literature!
Tremendous insight and use of metaphor and allusions.
I think this was writing that provides cathartic release as
well as symbolism and emotional introspection.
It transcends time as you address life from youth til current day.
Just a fabulous writing that is masterful in capturing the moment and expressing
deep thoughts- soulful assessment for sure!
Well done my Kiwi friend !!
JIm
ps
As I read it for the third time, I had thoughts about a past member of Chordie that I used to enjoy very much - Strummerboy Bill
I was not satisfied at all with the original version of this song.
I revamped some of the lyrics and changed the Chords - played it a bit more up tempo,
yet tried to retain some of the sadness the lyrics invoke.
I will try to get a version recorded, by my singing and playing don't exactly enhance the song
New Lyrics and Chords
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