Peatle Jville wrote:
Interesting emotions in your song Beamer.
To put it mildly,. Yep
502 2018-09-21 20:39:39
Re: What and Whatnots (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
My Vid of me performing this song also
503 2018-09-21 20:35:47
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill Williams wrote:
Ying and Yang? Lovey dovey and bitter. It actually sounds like it was written by two people; nice to start then you feel the doubt as the song progresses. Well done both, when can we hear it?
Funny as you should say that, because I am a big believer in the Yin and Yang, Karma, and most of the astrological personality traits.
Stand by to see my new tattoo that I will be getting this Tuesday!
Also Jeff and I have found ourselves to be a good writing team. coming from two different schools of music, we can Gel them together.
This song is actually part 2 to What and Whatnot's. # 3 is Battle for my Soul. the anger stage and self-building song. I see at least 2 more being written to tell my story.
504 2018-09-21 20:17:14
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
OH I forgot to put my version up! I also changed a verse that I need to still give a change to Jeff.
Here is my version I did in the bedroom on the TAK.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z0HRWl17VvI
BTW, I need to give props to the band I am wearing the T-Shirt of. Jesus Wears Armani Support your local music!
505 2018-09-14 17:26:51
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I just figured it was the same as any chord pro
506 2018-09-11 14:32:46
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I pulled the chord-pro format right off the linksoft program
507 2018-09-10 01:51:31
Re: BATTLE FOR MY SOUL (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Classical Guitar wrote:
This reads great and says alot. Good work.
Thank you so much. Means a lot.
508 2018-09-10 01:49:44
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks buddy. wonder why it would not work for me?
509 2018-09-10 00:54:41
Re: BATTLE FOR MY SOUL (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Tenement Funster wrote:
Yup, that's a metal song if I ever heard one. In my head I hear the verses as a spoken growl over a heavy bass riff, and some power chords backing the chorus being sung. It'll be interesting to hear what you come up with, Beamer.
Well for the most part, you are correct on the verse and chorus will be more melodic.
510 2018-09-10 00:49:29
Re: BATTLE FOR MY SOUL (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Tenement Funster wrote:
Yup, that's a metal song if I ever heard one. In my head I hear the verses as a spoken growl over a heavy bass riff, and some power chords backing the chorus being sung. It'll be interesting to hear what you come up with, Beamer.
Well for the most part, you are correct on the verse and chorus will be more melodic.
511 2018-09-09 15:34:12
Topic: A KISS IN THE SUN (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
IDK why it wont post correct, help by someone pls.
A KISS IN THE SUN Beamer and Jets
The [D]days been so [A]fine and [G]fun.
[D]Not supposed to [A]get con[G]fused.
[Bm]How else can I [A]make you [G]mine,
and not [D]feel a[A]bused?
[G]This is just a kiss in the [D]sun.
I know I should [A]relax… take a deep [G]breath..
Don’t be so Mac[Bm]beth.
[D]You tell me [A]not to [G]think.
You [D]say you’re not [A]trying [G]too.
[Bm]Putting your finger [A]to my [G]lips,
[D]What else can I [A]do?
[G]I catch your eyes looking a[D]way
When we’re talking [A]near. I wanna be[G]lieve
… but still, I [Bm]fear.
[D]Then the night comes [A]bringing [G]doubt.
I [D]toss and I turn… how [A]my heart [G]yearns
[Bm]I want to [A]reach [G]out...
…to [D]coldness and it [A]burns
[G] [D] [A] [G] [Bm]
[F#]….And the times I'm alone I [Bm]wonder...
[F#]Who or what you [A]long for[Bm]
[F#]…[G]when I am not a[A]bout?[A7]
[D] [D] [A] [G] [D] [D] [A] [G] [Bm] [Bm] [A] [G] [D] [A]
[G]I say, “I’m all in.”, and I [D]keep
reaching for the [A]light until you [G]say to,
“Give up the [Bm]fight.”
[F#]…I want to see you’re there [Bm]too
[F#]Wanting only just to make this [Bm]right
[F#]…[G]Trying to put the past out of [A]sight… [A7]
[D]Meanwhile, we still en[A]joy each [G]other.
[D]We can still [A]have some [G]fun,
[Bm]And I will [A]always [G]love you,
and all our [D]kisses in the [A]sun…
512 2018-09-07 20:29:07
Topic: BATTLE FOR MY SOUL (6 replies, posted in Poems)
UNTIL I GET THE MUSIC WRITTEN THIS SHALL GO HERE 
BATTLE FOR MY SOUL
S.SAILER 9/7/2018
DARKNESS TEARING AT ME, PICKING THE SCAB
SELF LOATHING LAID TO REST, ON THE SLAB
HEAVY CHAINS, BEATING ME DOWN
GROWING MONSTERS, I CANT EXPLAIN
CHORUS
COME AND GET ME, IM READY FOR THE FIGHT
COME AND FIND ME AND WE WILL GO HEAD TO HEAD TONIGHT!
I WILL FIND THE SUNSHINE I WILL SEE THE LIGHT
TAKE YOUR LOATHING AND BURN IN ____ TONIGHT!
TAKING THE POWER, BACK TO MY CONTROL
NO DEMONS GONNA WIN, I WILL OWN MY SOUL
FIGHT THE GOOD FIGHT, AND I KNOW I WILL WIN
SHIELD MYSELF FROM DARKNESS, NO MORE CRAKS TO GET IN
CHORUS
COME AND GET ME, IM READY FOR THE FIGHT
COME AND FIND ME AND WE WILL GO HEAD TO HEAD TONIGHT!
I WILL FIND THE SUNSHINE I WILL SEE THE LIGHT
TAKE YOUR LOATHING AND BURN IN ____ TONIGHT!
513 2018-09-07 19:23:02
Re: First Is Best (6 replies, posted in Poems)
3RD VERSE SAME THE FIRST! LOLOLOLOL
514 2018-09-07 19:19:18
Re: Linksoft songbook (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
neophytte wrote:
For the desktop I like SongSheet Generator: http://tenbyten.com/software/songsgen/
It's donationware (works without donation) and runs on multiple platforms ...
ill look at that one also.
515 2018-09-06 16:46:36
Re: Linksoft songbook (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
It works. Still that program is nice for the desktop
516 2018-09-05 23:58:04
Topic: Linksoft songbook (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Since Chordie will no longer convert for us. Here is the easiest program to use
https://www.linkesoft.com/songbook/windows.html
Hey mods I think this needs a sticky.
517 2018-09-05 23:15:02
Re: A KISS IN THE SUN (2 replies, posted in Poems)
Tenement Funster wrote:
Another beauty, Beamer ... you're writing skills have really been shining lately ... much appreciated.
Thanks! Wait till Jets and I get done! He is forcing me to play 7th chords!!!!!!!! AHHA! LOLOL
518 2018-09-04 23:07:28
Topic: A KISS IN THE SUN (2 replies, posted in Poems)
This is also a new song collaboration project between Jets and myself. but this is the raw poem I wrote last night (labor day)
A Kiss in The Sun
A kiss in the sun
The days been so fine and fun
Not supposed to get confused,
How else can I make you mine
This is just a kiss in the sun
You tell me not to think
You say you are not trying to.
But the times when I am in the car
Do you text or shout when I am not about?
As I said, Im all in
I reach for that shred of light
Untill you say, Give up the fight
We still enjoy each other
We still can have fun,
I love you , and our kisses in the sun.
519 2018-09-03 16:00:53
Topic: Hero's to Human (0 replies, posted in My local band and me)
A song I have had in work for a while. Still waiting on another verse to come to me.
One chord stumble up front.
Hope you like it.
520 2018-08-31 17:58:10
Re: What and Whatnots (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Jan and CG,
Thank you for your kind words.Yes this sucks. I am just glad I know how to write and express this oppressive weight.
CG, and some hurt deeper and harder than others.
Jan, I will make it through the valley, with or without her. I feel like crap, but I will survive. I will be a better person. I will keep writing.
As the song in the original point break goes I WILL NOT FALL https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_JlZ7tsygA
521 2018-08-30 19:08:29
Topic: 50 years (2 replies, posted in Poems)
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I thought I would post a more positive and non-depressing one I have been writing.
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50 years and I open my eyes
see the sunset and watch it rise.
Where I"m going,
you would think I could see
and as a young man , not a clue what would become of me.
all the care bears were my friends
having good times
and playing music till the end
Years went by and we never became super stars,
now we are scattered near and far
Technology has come such a long way
and the friends I thought lost,
and ones i have never met,
are but a mouse click away.
522 2018-08-30 18:52:10
Re: Love That's Lost (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
JIm,
is this happening presently as mine is? Your song hits me right in the chest, if you have seen what I have been submitting, you have a brother with whom to share your pain. i could have written this song as it deals as just the same.
Thank you for a beautiful song and I would love to hear you sing it.
523 2018-08-27 02:05:18
Topic: THE CHECK OUT (3 replies, posted in Poems)
As I drown in a sea of sorrow and regret,
Things I should have done better,
And some not at all.
I stand alone as I wait for the incision/decision
Sharing my gut with any who will listen.
As I wait I must carry on,
Drifting along in a numb haze
As I zombie through my dayz.
Still we must eat,
And the grocery becomes my retreat
The checkout is an un-expecting place
A big bright smile is directed at me,
A saving grace.
524 2018-08-27 00:48:35
Topic: Naked (0 replies, posted in Poems)
Now I lay here naked and exposed,
tried to watch some porn, but I had to close.
I only want to feel each of us deep inside,
not just physical, but that our hearts abide.
And from this I think sometimes you really want to hide.
525 2018-08-26 21:49:44
Re: 4 Letter Words (5 replies, posted in Poems)
Well there are no words to replace it with that have 4 letters. But it n the contexts of the topic,, I think we can let it slip.