Great poem, Doc. Did you mean to say you asked for a coke in the last line of the first verse? Well done for it being your first love poem. I like how you say family was like a little army. Very cool
626 2009-03-27 13:59:48
Re: THE "MY FIRST LOVE" POEM (+ improving my skills) (11 replies, posted in Poems)
627 2009-03-27 13:53:42
Re: t:title"the queen of chordie"{old doll} (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great song for a great lady. Well done, Daddy
628 2009-03-27 13:51:52
Re: Come If You Can. (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Looks good, Alan. Cant wait to hear the riff. "Back of the house , You'll find a bucket, Fill it with water cos we got to rough it." I can relate to that. Dont miss those days! The whole songs great.
629 2009-03-27 02:00:32
Re: Roll On (24 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Old Doll wrote:Good Song Jerome.
I believe all our Karmas clocks are ticking. We all have a limited time of existance .
I also believe you could have restrained from explaining so graphically why you didnt finish this piece
last night !. As were ofton told here, there are younger members here on chordie. I'm surprised that you in particular
overlooked this fact Sir.Old Doll.
Wanking in a musical sense as in just having fun rather than trying to finish a composition???
I think she just misunderstood, thats all.
630 2009-03-26 23:19:26
Re: Potentially The Greatest Movie of ALL TIME!!! ( Nuk, nuk) (21 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I dont see them pulling this one off. I love all those actors but not as the Stoogies. I'll still have to see it though.
631 2009-03-26 23:15:57
Re: THE CHESS CORNER (11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
they really pay you to sit around and play?
Oh yeah, we play lots of games. We're hiring too, want an app? ![]()
632 2009-03-26 23:11:43
Re: Ripples..Just Drift Away.. (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Ark,
Reminds me of morning for some reason. Like Im waking up, having a cup of coffe and telling myself its gonna be a good day. I really liked the arppegios your doing. Great guitar playing for being "rusty".
633 2009-03-26 02:55:19
Re: THE CHESS CORNER (11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I remember my brother showed me how to play and after I learned I beat him and he never played me again
I just got a new set its triple heavy and came with a roll up green and white board and a carrying case it was $29.95 including shipping ups and there's a new chess club that just opened where I live and now I have a place to hang on Monday
Same thing happend with my wife, she taught me now she wont play me anymore. I taught the kids at the school I work at how to play. I was suprised how well they picked it up. Now I get to play chess atleast 3 times a day with theses kids. 2 of them even almost beat me! Not bad getting payed to play chess every day. Beats playing Monoply.
634 2009-03-25 21:48:17
Re: THE FAIRY GLADE (10 replies, posted in Poems)
Sorry, my ignorance embrasses me!I wish I lived in Wales, then.
635 2009-03-25 21:38:04
Re: THE FAIRY GLADE (10 replies, posted in Poems)
I like this one, Phill. Very descriptive. Well done, wished I lived in England
637 2009-03-25 17:38:19
Re: Quote option (6 replies, posted in About Chordie)
I think you have to delete the part you don't want to quote. Quote me and delete one sentence.
selsobob
Hey that worked. I tried that before but I think I deleted something it needed to post it.
thanks, i learn something new everyday
638 2009-03-25 16:53:17
Topic: Quote option (6 replies, posted in About Chordie)
When I use the quote option and I only want to quote some of the person is saying, not the whole post, how do I do that? Ive seen people do it before but I tried and failed.
Thanks Selso
639 2009-03-25 16:45:43
Re: Roll On (24 replies, posted in Songwriting)
120 bpm, thats more like slayer. Again me likey. Love to hear it when its done
640 2009-03-25 14:17:14
Re: t:title"amy lou" (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
"A little princess of rock and roll" I like that line. reminds me of my daughter. This ones a keeper, daddy. Great job
641 2009-03-25 14:14:58
Re: t:title"time stands still" (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Felt like I was there as a read this. Very good daddycool
642 2009-03-25 14:13:29
Re: Roll On (24 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Its almost punk rock. not bad at all. I like the frist couple of verses
643 2009-03-24 01:34:13
Re: You must have a reason (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi selso,
Another well written song.
I liked the use of the ticking clock? in the background. It definitely gives it a distinctive sound.
Nice
Kenny
Also enjoyed "Never cared too much for Hippies"
You have a good writing style my friend.
Thanks Kap,
It was actually a wooden spoon thingy that my kids had. It was more of an exepirment on multi recording with audacity. Thanks again for taking the time to listen
Selso
644 2009-03-24 01:27:28
Re: Two new songs. (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great songs! Just sent you a message on myspace so I'll leave it at that
645 2009-03-24 01:19:19
Re: Caged (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi selso just love your country and western sound ,could possibly be a bit longer,another couple of verses but otherwise a great piece,well done....stay cool
Thanks daddycool. I dont mean to write country songs but thats just the way they come out. I agree that it could be longer, but I struggled with it for so long when it finally came I couldnt force any more, know what I mean?
and thanks every to everyone else, Kap, Phil, Ark. Its a hard song to sing because of the lyrical content. I was a bad boy when I was younger ( atleast until my wife set me straight)
Selso
646 2009-03-23 01:15:13
Re: "I Can't Wait to Start the Day" (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Glad to be inspriration to you. Glad you liked my little old song. This ones sounds pretty darn good, too. Way more postive then mine. When ya get a recording let me know. You made my day, Jeff. Thanks alot. Well done on yours
647 2009-03-22 19:20:43
Re: Caged (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Definatly! Working on one right now
649 2009-03-22 18:18:05
Re: Has our legitimacy been compromised????? (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This may be off the subject(well not really). In seeing Southpaw's post I went and looked at other songwritng forums, even posted some of my songs. They where really hard to figure out and not as organized as Chordie. I dont really write "poetry", as all my lyrics get put to music. I think it's great that chordie expanded its self to enclude a poetry forum. If I ever write a poem thats where it will go. As for "jumping ship" Its just hard for me personally to write a good song quickly. I think the problem (and it's a big I think) is the lack of response. Not saying people dont respond but its hard to write them out in the correct form, record it and not have much of a reponses(again,no offense to the ones who do responed.) I personally would like to see more constructive critisism. I dont know, I love this site and the people on it. So I'll just keep on posting and like I said , if I ever write a poem then the poetry section's were it'll go
650 2009-03-22 15:56:22
Re: Caged (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
So does going back and editing those brackets back in not fix the problem or would I have to retype the whole thing?