Bill,
I made a change - not exactly what you suggested ( i I think " isn't no" would be a double negative or some thing like that )
and yeah that's kind of how it goes - along the lines of an Eagles song - that kinda country rock.
Thanks for the kind words.
Peatle
Thank you Peatle- yes, there is a lot of interpretation left to the individual in the setting of this song
Thanks for giving it a look.
TF
Thank you for your comment.
I'm not smart enough or talented enough to actually sit down and write a song, I totally rely on my emotions and how I think people would react.
It's why I love the Dylan's, Van Zant's, Guy Clark's and Steve Earle's -among many others- they are all storytellers.
Especially since I know so little about music. Most of my lyrics would sound much different if someone who actually knows music used the right chords, strum patterns, tempo, etc...( that's about it for me - I don't know any other music terms): ) was writing them . It's why I love when You, Mojo, Phill, Jan, Graham or many of the others on Chordie had covered a song and they put their own flare, mystique, and music talent to it - or some one like Bill gives me an English lesson - it is always a great improvenent. I'm pretty locked in to the cowboy chords. (: It is also what I love about Chordie - it has so many different, talented people on here - and so many perspectives - it is like candyland to someone like me.
Again - all of you THANK YOU !
Jim