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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi daddy,youve been busy were do all these songs come from,the lyrics in all I find to be very good,you must have a lot of time on your hands and get inspired often. I wish I could.

Trevor

327

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Steven ,I liked the first part,got me a bit when you went into the strumming,found it to much of a contrast,overall thought it was good,nice sounding guitar.

Trevor

328

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song Russell,Life is a bitch,But some times special things happen,sounds a bit like "Dire Straits" But that's not a bad thing. smile


Trevor

329

(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song Selso,Takes me to the late 70's early 80's when this sound was all the rage in Great Britain,love it.

Trevor

330

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi StranSongs, I'll let you know when I've put them on there


Trevor

331

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i can identify with this song,I got hit twice on the same day,Warning keep away from Littlehampton give it a wide berth if your driving. lol

Trevor

332

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi daddycool,Love this song right up my street,My philosophy is screw the baskets any way you can for everything you can,because they will screw you till the day you die & probably after you dead too.

keep your chin up smile

Trevor

333

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi kenny, Dropped you an email about the lyrics. Tanks for posting. smile

I'm gonna put them all on www. Sibelius.com, when I finish scoring them. But will be just backing & top line,no singing. plus I've just got Sibelius 6,takes awhile to learn how to use it.

Trevor

334

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

You put the light in to my lifeTrevor Scrivens


116-20 BPM pop




Verse 1




[C]I've been up,


I've been [F]down,


Love has [C]spun my head all a[F]round,


[Am]I had no direction until i [F]found [G]you, [G7] Yer,


[Em]you came [F]along


And you [Em]made me feel so [F]strong,


I[C] never knew just [F]how true love could [G]Feel, [G7]




[Em]You put the [Am]light in to my [Dm7]life-


I want to thank you,[G7]lady-


[Em]You put the [Am]light in to my [Dm7]life-


[G7]And i always want to [C]be with you-


[C]I've been blind,



So un[F]kind,


god i [C]nearly lost my [F]mind,


[Am]Before you came my [F]life was all so [G]cruel, [G7] then,


[Em]You came [F]along,


Made me [Em]feel like i could be[F]long,


And [C]with your heart,[F]I will never be un[G]true [G7]


Repeat chorus




Bridge




[Em]Loving you,All [F] life,


[Em]Loving you,[G7]Forever,




Repeat chorus x2



335

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi kap, I'm gonna score them and put them on the Sibelius website. When done ill put a link to my page. It will take a while to do.

Thanks for commenting,always appreciated smile

Trevor

336

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi russell, What a great song loved how it all flows along,good lyrics and sound,I can still hear it in my head as I write this.
I'll let you into a secret. I've used computer generated drums lol

Thanks for sharing smile

Trevor

337

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi daddy,I've still got a few more yet. smile

Trevor

Cheers daddycool,but I'm looking for a richer arrangement of chords,not just Majors. If you have any ideas,feel free to post again.

Thanks anyway,much appreciated smile

Trevor

339

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi SouthPaw41L, Religion=money,power,control,That's all I see,But saying that. I have some religious friends who have been a great support in my life.

Thanks  for commenting smile

Trevor

340

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

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Words & music by Trevor Scrivens 1989

If I see you in another way

Slow ballad

Intro

Verse 1

All the time,you were there,
can't understand why,I did'nt run to you,
I miss-treated your trust,I can lie no more,
Is it to late?,I'm so confused,

Chorus

If I could see you in another way,
Would you hold me in your arms,
If I could see you in another way,
Would you let me stay,
would my devotion make the difference,
would your tears fade away,
would it bring a smile to your face,
If I see you in another way,
In a different way-----

Verse 2

Love is a strange emotion,
Sometimes you dont know its th-e-re,
Please don't walk away,I need you to stay-,
Give me the chance,to show you i can care

Chorus repeat

Bridge

I was wrong,this life belongs to a fool.
Will you forgive me,say that you do,
Cos i can't stand the thought of living without you.


Chorus repeat to end

Lyrics by Trevor Scrivens 20/12/88

I wrote these lyrics back in 1984,I had just met the mother of my children,but was also seeing another girl i had grown up with, anyway to cut along story short. I felt guilty and told her I was sleeping with this other girl,she cried n cried & that's when I wrote this for her and got it made into a song,we ended up staying together for 13 years and had 3 children,I got someone to write the melody and arrange it for me,but have long lost the score,
moving from home to home,if anyone on chordie would like to put this lyric to music i would love to hear from you.
The original was in the key of G then modulated to Ab on the chorus,But you can do it how you like.

hi daddy,got a few more yet. smile

Trevor

343

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi daddy cool, Nice song about the wife,Its amazing what you can do with 3 chords smile

Trevor

344

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Kenny,I did record this years ago,but seam to have lost it,I'll have to redo it.
             
Trevor

Hi S.N.S Welcome,I have posted about 8 others on here.

Trevor

Hi Phill, Yes an x girlfriend,She was a nightmare, one i never want to repeat.....Woman you got that right,but there are some lovely ones if your lucky enough to find one. By the way checked out your three new songs on sound click,what can I say absolutely brilliant,very good recordings,i wish i could play guitar like that,I better practice more LOL smile

Trevor

Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.



Words & music by Trevor Scrivens 1988

Thanks Ken & AccoustikNoyz,But got Phill working on it at the moment and doing a good job I might add.

Thanks again for your input smile

Trevor

Great song daddycool,Brings back thoughts of my children when very young,my oldest son Brandon who is now 20, decided to get up early one Monday morning and repaint our kitchen yellow,After I had spent the weekend redecorating I went to bed with the misses very happy and woke up to hell,I couldn't be mad at Brandon he was just trying to help. I still can't figure how he got the lid off? I'll have to ask him one day. smile

Trevor

Hi mark,just went to your my space,I like it,a good strum along, I like the melody too.

After listening to all of you on chordie i must get a new guitar.

Trevor(Ctech)