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Ok I read this article talking about Lionel Messi's goal this morning: " "He struck the ball out of the air," Miami coach Guillermo Hoyos said of Messi's first goal. "Those of us who have played football know what it takes to find the time and space to connect, meeting a cross coming from left to right and hitting it cleanly on the volley with his left foot. If we were talking about painting, it would be Picasso.": That last line  got my mind rolling. I came up with this song.....

it's not about futbol ( soccer ) or Messi though.   smile

Cheers,      Jim

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … re-talking

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Phill,
try this

Jim

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … al_sharing     

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Phill,
There is no video - just the music.
Jim     

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https://on.soundcloud.com/KCZoscA6pHovxnea4o


Song I wrote  - hope it works !

Cheers

Jim 

Bahahahaha - at least the poster was fantastic! Hilarious Graham

Cheers,
Jim     

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That is just outstanding literature
Personal, historical and cultural
That relates to places all over the world.
My brothers used to play stick ball in the streets
Well Done.     

https://on.soundcloud.com/yJKPJfDWiKEJyACz9o

song about the perils of falling in love for the first time ! 

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Pete,
Ditto what Phill said.

I had a very dear friend who was a world famous abtract artist. The first day I was in her studio I thought to myself, these painting look like when I just cleaned my paint brush.
Then as I became really good friends with her, she helped me understand abstract art. Her name is Louise Fishman.  She called to wish me a happy birthday , and the next day on my birthday she died. (5 years ago) . She was such a kind and caring woman. When I read your poem it caused vibrations in my mind -  i could see louise painting and I could see her paintings.  She gifted me two originals and also gifted one to my daughter.   If you remember,  I wrote about her  this is a link to the video I made.

These are a couple of   links about her  if you want to peek 
https://awarewomenartists.com/en/artist … e-fishman/

and from the NY Times

https://www.nytimes.com/2016/06/12/arts … ierce.html

your poem , to me, describes Louise and her works, precisely !!   thank you for that. ( I will read this again in two days - my birthday )


Thank you Pete for sharing this wonderful piece of literature. It is priceless !

Cheers, Jim     

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My wife and I are having our wedding anniversary ( 42nd ) this week
I wrote this song to let her know how I feel.

https://on.soundcloud.com/CM8Vmy4qiqCzT2v4ha 

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Take the nostalgic tour !! smile

https://youtu.be/5Kb0X83x9eM 

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I worked on this song the past few weeks- ever since my wife went to see a Rod Stewart concert in Florida ( the second time she has seen him).
Then I heard Rachel Steele do interviews with Peter Frampton and Mick Jagger on the radio.

I got thinking about all these  great Rock and rollers that are still out there - even touring.  Recently the  Doobie Bothers and Carlos Santana ( who was only 22 at Woodstock n 1969) played at Saratoga Performing arts center. (was awesome)

I finally finished it -  and of course there are probably another dozen I should have included in the lyrics - but just couldn't - had to choose- so I just picked my favorites.

This is the link to the song  - It's called Back In Time

https://on.soundcloud.com/muC3h1f4NKCwomPlr5

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Joe,
Brilliant piece of songwriting !   
Love the sound !  Your voice is perfect for this song !
" I got no money for an impound fee !!"  smile love the end!!
I had that happen, but not with my car.  Mine was I had no rent money and the landlord locked me out .
Finally got my mom to pay the rent, (just two months) until I got on my feet again

Thanks for sharing Joe !

Jim

THANK YOU ROGER !!     

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I was stuck inside today- so I  drudged up an old rock n roll song I tried to write a while ago - revamped it ( a lot)

This is how it came out

https://on.soundcloud.com/g6lJ2nbe2Ng3oeiaqd
This for you rock n rollers out there ! {Graham smile  }


Hope works for you all

Cheers

Jim

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Well our 3 daughters and 8 grand kids will be moved away at the end of this month. We are happy for them all, but a bit sad.
I wrote this song reflecting our feelings.

https://on.soundcloud.com/ZLMOlQni3bPaU8x0PS 

why does it say " not secure" by the URL address now ? 

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Phill

It is Ai -  and yes - I was pretty much walking a thin line.   
It is amazing though - I have gotten responses from a whole different group of people
- by different  I mean occupation.   Got a few responses from truck drivers, which I never have before
Thanks for the listening.
Jim     

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This is a song I have been working on for a couple of years.  I got the idea from a conversation between two disc jockeys on Outlaw Country Radio on Sirius XM.  (as I was driving)   They were laughing about the term " Mother Trucker" !  I said there's a country song title if I've ever heard one.   so I wrote some notes down and it just kept changing until I liked this.
Here is the link on soundcloud

https://on.soundcloud.com/hsRxMfcE4u8ZYLNUPP 

My grand niece is actually a cross country truck driver as well !
Hope you like it

Cheers,
Jm 

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"Oh, what did Delaware, boy? What did Delaware?"
"She wore a brand New Jersey."
"Why did California?"
"She called to say Hawaii (How are ya?)."
"What did Mississip?"
"She sipped a Minnesota (mini soda)."
"Where has Oregon?"
"If you want Alaska, I'll ask her where she's gone."
"She went to pay her Texas (taxes)."
"How did Wisconsin?"
"She stole a Nebras-ky (new brass key)."
"Too bad that Arkan-saw..."
"...and so did Tenne-see."
"It made poor Flori-die..."
"She died in Misery (Missouri).     

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The song is "Delaware", written by Irving Gordon and made famous by Perry Como in 1960. It became a novelty hit, reaching the Top 25 in the U.S. and even higher in the UK     

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Song I wrote quite a few years ago. 
I re-wrote some lyrics

It's about a woman  friend that everyone saw had a perfect family - but it fell apart.
It was sad.  I tried to write it from her point of view.

https://on.soundcloud.com/JBhdhxrIcXxkslVFKL 

Kind of a story  related to the lore of Robert Johnson at Crossroads.
https://on.soundcloud.com/OfXJLYbapsygeK8FpM 

Ok Jan - here ya go

wrote this one - may be my favorite one I've ever written - so thanks !!!!
Lyrics are in description on soundcloud

https://on.soundcloud.com/OfXJLYbapsygeK8FpM     

I am going to post in Songwriting as well.

Graham
that was awesome - sounded great. I hope it made a lot of maney for the research.

Jim     

For What It's Worth  and Ohio  by  Crosby, Stills, Nash, and Young

Woody Guthrie's " I'm Shipping off to Boston"   sung and made famous by the Dropkick Murphys

How about Woody Guthrie's " This Land is your land "  read this article - I never knew it was a protest song !!
https://www.loc.gov/static/programs/nat … r-Land.pdf



Nora Guthrie was Woody;s daughter  - she said this about the song.........
Nora Guthrie responded to an inquiry, saying, “Here’s what I cherish, and what the song means
to all of us. One of the most visionary moments, when the song was genuinely, and cosmically,
‘fulfilled,’ was at President Barack Obama’s inaugural concert. America was singing at that
moment.”
That moment had embraced, she wrote:
- Pete Seeger, a blacklisted musician for 25 years, center stage, leading the country.
- Singing to the first African American elected President of the USA.
- Accompanied by Bruce Springsteen--the biggest rock star in the USA.
- Backed by an African American gospel choir of young people.
- With an Indigenous percussionist.
- With the biggest sing-along audience of millions of Americans--who ALL knew the words to
the song! What other song could have possibly fit the bill? None.
Nora added, “As I watched it, crying, I looked up and said to my dad, ‘So THIS is why you
wrote it!’ It was as if the moment was made for the song, and vice versa. I don’t know if that
kind of moment in music history will ever happen again.”