3,876

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

i'm sorry, this doesnt rhyme and the verses are unequal. this is about my dad and me, but it'd dedicated to a friend

the first thing i remember is his garden,
how i hated all the digging and the planting.
eating peas fresh from the pod, was so amazing
beans right off the vines, raw and nice.

he was tall and had a wicked sense of humour.
when i was small and grown-ups were so big.
as i aged and he spoke to me as an adult
he saw me play and said he loved the gig.
that meant more than the cash at the end
than all the hand shakes the "well done lads"
to think that night i actually made him proud!
i still beam at the way he smiled.

i thought he was a pain as i was growing
he most likely thought the same thing of me!
i couldnt wait to get away, to get out from his gaze
now i wish i'd had more time with him

my dad now lays in the garden
his ashes mingled there with my mam's
my sisters my brother and i still visit every now and then
they are in my heart, they're never very far away.

sleep tight, dont let the bed-bugs bite.....

3,877

(1 replies, posted in Poems)

hi robert, i like this one too, deep by name deep by nature huh?

keep em coming

phill

ps sorry i've been away awhile, visiting my son in oz

3,878

(3 replies, posted in Poems)

hi flybye

so sad that you have to answer your own poem!

it's a nice piece of work, and i identify with it wholeheartedly as most of my stuff revolves around my wife too, 30 years in may....

(married not her age ha ha)

phill

3,879

(1 replies, posted in Poems)

Enigma.          By Phill Williams.

I drink when I'm not thirsty.
Eat because it's time.
Sleep when I should be waking.
Lemon? could be lime.

I drive when I could be walking.
Dream when I'm wide awake.
Speak when I should be silent.
I am real when you are fake.

I've strayed away from nature.
That's what evolution does.
We should eat and sleep when we need to.
Crawl and walk and run.

If we lived on little islands.
No conventions, schools or jobs.
Then the smarmy robbing bureaucrats.
Would have no hold on us.

We could build our little houses.
Pull apples from the tree.
Grow veggies in the garden.
No wars, no tax. Be free.

9th February 2011.

3,880

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

i get the impression that this would make a great country song.

it's not really long, if you put two lines into one and doubled up the verses it would only be half as long on the page.

if this is a true story, stop kicking your self and learn the lesson for next time.

nice write, i'll say it again, make a good song

phill

3,881

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

it's nice to read a positive poem. this gives hope in such a well written and thought out manner. well done

phill

3,882

(68 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

there are some really great lines here. here's one from a band you might not have heard of ...

she wakes up. she makes up. she takes her time and doesn't feel she has to hurry, she no longer needs you. pm

yeah, a kick in the teeth sad

phill

3,883

(35 replies, posted in Electric)

i bought my mim in 1972. from the outset i wasnt completely happy with it....but i didnt know then that there were different standards!

the paint work is cracked (i put that down to constant gigging) and by the time i stopped using it, the fret board was worn behind the neck frets. and some of the frets themselves were worn. i never liked the sound i got, unless it was cranked right up through a marshall amp...which i hate cos they can only play dirty, i like to play clean occasionally!

i do like the shape of the neck though.

having said all that, i resisted buying a new fender for more than 10 years, using a crafter, that lost it's tune so easily, and just didnt feel right. eventually after searching for years, a telecaster was put in my hands, i decided i was in love before even strumming it. it was reassuringly heavy, the neck was a dream, it played like an angel and gave me that sound i've been looking for, for 30 years.

happiness is tele shaped.

i'm thinking now of getting a new neck put on my strat....any thoughts?

phill

3,884

(68 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i have got many favorite lines from songs, i was just wondering if other members had their favs too, such as:

ten thousand holes in blackburn, lancashire. now they know how many holes it takes to fill the albert hall!

isnt that a brilliant line from "a day in the life" lennon at his best.

phill

3,885

(10 replies, posted in Recording)

hi russ,

boy have i got a headache just reading that. sorry i couldnt listen to the track (norwegian wood is also one of my favs) as i seem to have developed a middle ear infection, and i'm suffering, headache and nausia with vertigo thrown in for good measure.... aaawwwe poor phill. so no music for me for a while.  talk soon buddy

phill

3,886

(15 replies, posted in Other string instruments)

THIS IS TO BIKEWER,

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again sorry, advertising is not allowed without permission from per the administrator.

phill williams (moderator)

3,887

(2 replies, posted in Recording)

there is one hang-up to this soft ware as russ and i have discussed, the freeware only seems to do mono. as i have not laid out any of my hard earned to try the full version, i cant say if you get stereo sound with it. i've started using audacity myself now, mainly to convert WAV to MP3 by way of a programme called "switch" as i couldnt get lame to work!

phill

3,888

(8 replies, posted in Recording)

nice one russ, how did i get in there? lol  looks like your getting into the new software pretty quick.

ps....what is the significance of the piper?

phill

3,889

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,

i wondered if it was similar to the old foreiner track, dont worry i think your safe enough.

judging by your other material, this is a little deviation in subject matter. so i'm guessing it's fiction?

nice one, i like it

rock on

phill

3,890

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert,

glad you liked the song, but i think you listened to the wrong track! they dont know me is a medium paced country song. i think the one you listened to is called "lime green pick-up truck" and is about an american military family and also quite fast. it sounds like a line dancing song to me....though i cant dance, not even waltz!!!. i shall put up pick-up shortly.

hi ark, always happy to hear your comments....

phill

3,891

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny,

right on all counts. it is a fast-ish country/rock eagles style (maybe too eagles style?) so i'm hoping if it does sound too much of a steal. if you guys can tell me so i can pull it.

by the way, it's about what we brits call a wide boy, a thug and all round bad boy! steals cars and eventually graduates to robbing a bank, but ends up target practise for the cops. no loss there then!
more info if required.
it will be put up on my-space ASAP.

phill

3,892

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

They Don't Know Me.Undefined


[G] Hey, the motors running there's gas in the tank.


There's a [C] map on the dash, guitar's in the back.


I'm [G] going down south where it's not so cold.


Where the [C] music is loud and the bars are full.


And [D] little old ladies get helped cross the road.


And my [C] reputation is yet to unfold.






They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


[G] Just today I took a seven tonne truck.


[C] Drove it through the window of the Pizza Hut.


[G] They wouldn't serve me `cos I didn't pay.


For the [C] food I had there yesterday.


Well they [D] should have known what I would do.


Cos my [C] reputation is about to come true.


They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


[CHORUS)




[D] Pretty girl serving gave me “goo goo�eyes.



Don you [Em] know who I am? You don't give me no lies.


Two big [C] cops put the Tazer on me.


But I [D] gave them the slip and now I am free.




Don't they [G] know me? Don't they [C] know me?


Don't they [G] know me? Don't they [C] know me?


(SOLO OVER CHORUS)




And the [G] motors running while I'm hitting this bank.


Got a [C] gun in my pocket and I ain't paying tax.


But the [G] clerk hits the button and there's cops all around.


[C] Siren's and bullets make a god awful sound.


And [D] little old ladies look and point at my blood.


As [C] I'm laying there dying just like Bonnie and Clyde.




They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


They don't [G] know me. They don't [C] know me.


(SOLO OVER CHORUS)





3,893

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny, you seem to be cooking on gas (pun) lately. so when are we going to hear (and see) the results, as you've got this new camera? come on, get em up on (your) my-space.

phill

3,894

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark,

nice renderings my friend, i particularly like "she moves the fair" puts me in mind of 2 pieces i'm familiar with, 1 beatles and 1 jethro tull. i love the eastern drums.

well done

phill

3,895

(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny,

sorry i didnt comment on this before, the subject matter is a little too close to home, ann, my wife went though a year of worry which ended in a major operation, and though she was clear of cancer (thank god) it has left it's mark in the form of her confidence has all but gone! but i still have her, and she will still be here with me for at least the next 40 + years...

as i say, the song is brilliantly written and evokes the memory of fear and joy, for me. well done canuk.

phill

3,896

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

this is such a boring and annoying subject. it was getting up my nose when they started putting rival tracks up for people to buy rather than have an X factor no1...it's all a money making con. by simon cowel and the people who want to rival X factor!

here's a cheaper word of advice to those that might be gullible enough to spend their hard earned cash on this nonsense....

                                                  IF YOU DONT LIKE THE X FACTOR...DONT WATCH IT!

                                            IF YOU DONT LIKE WHAT'S IN THE CHARTS...DONT BUY THEM!

                      BE A HERO AND SHOW YOUR INDEPENDENCE, repeat after me.....I AM NOT A FOLLOWER, I AM A LEADER

i have not watched x factor for about 4 years, and i dont miss it. or big brother, or i'm a celebrity get me out of here, or any of those other "reality" shows! it's easy to do; change the channel!  there are lots of other tv channels that broadcast a wide variety of programmes, try one.

3,897

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

well thanks, i think... actually it's written by me about me from my wife's point of view, only she's not as humorous as i am...lol. oh and by the way this guy (that i used to be) is out of my life. admittedly i do forget the toilet seat now and then. but my hygiene is much improved! so is it ok if i stay?

phill

3,898

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ and members,

i just had a little listen on my lap top speakers, and the backing vocals sound awful! in my defense though, i do have a sore throat.

this is my favourite song, russ's voice suits it down to the ground, and as mentioned, the harmonica really works. it takes me way back to my mother who used to sing lullabyes to all the kids, and to me, which is most likely why i love singing...i just wish i could!

phill

3,899

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ,

that's the trouble with us older guys, we can remember something that happened years ago better than something that happened yesterday!

this is a lovely song the words are so full of love and caring and (may i say) sung sweetly?
ARE YOU GETTIN` SOFT OR WHAT?

get well soon, i'm so looking forward to helping out with this song, it doesnt need a whole lot of overdubs. we'll keep it pure

dont let those nurses give you any nonsense...lol

phill

3,900

(62 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

as a big beatles fan since i heard "my bonny" on radio luxembourg in 1962 (i think) it was freddy and the dreamers that actually got me and my mate jeff davies, to pick up guitars and form our own noise, sorry, band. no i think i was right the first time, noise! but it was paul mccartney's influence that got me to play left hand! it was also lennon mccartney that got me to write songs.
i had to get myself a paper round to pay for my first guitar, which cost £5! and broke within a month... couldnt hold the strings down any way!i bought a book with my next guitar and learned a new key every day. no problems with Bm. but i couldnt get G for the life of me. it took me about a month to master G (the chord not the key).

phill...that's just about my life story. lol