She lays in bed
Sheets below her chin
I place the cup upon the table
She smells the brew and her eyes flicker open
Mmmm, she smiles... lovely
The wind and rain has given the sun a chance to warm the land
Shall we go walking I ask
Sun is out, washing day
Oh well back to my arm chair and the TV
826 2021-01-21 11:03:23
Topic: Washing day (4 replies, posted in Poems)
827 2021-01-21 10:55:51
Re: Love and Space (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Oh yea! Friends with benefits eh? An other relationship piece? I love the way you and Peatle can take everyday events and make them into enjoyable stories.
Well done Brian.
828 2021-01-21 10:49:11
Re: Nothing Flash (4 replies, posted in Poems)
I love it Pete. You come up with some quirky stuff that everyone can identify to. I hate the plastic Pam's my self, if it ain't natural it ain't real!
829 2021-01-18 10:11:06
Re: Frances (4 replies, posted in Poems)
It's a heartbreaking story, no one should die alone. As usual you've made a tale readable in a completely sensitive way. This is a poem we can all relate to. Remember the good times, the conversations and the personal exchanges between you both.
Puts me in mind of Strummer boy bill, anyone heard from him at all?
830 2021-01-18 10:01:09
Re: MISSISSIPPI 1955 - A song about racial inequality (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
You certainly know how to make a point. Almost spoken in a very tuneful way. It's hard to believe people can treat people in this way, and it still goes on....great song and observations.
831 2021-01-17 18:37:23
Re: Prince Edward Island (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
you got a new job as tourist promoter for Prince Edward Island Jim?
It's a cracking song which wouldn't go amiss on a tourist brochure or a poem. You might want to revise your 3rd verse a little, it doesn't flow as good as the other verses and chorus, that's my only criticism and it's not a biggie.
try;
So far away Prince Edward Island.
I wonder if she remembers me?
Like yesterdays rain that's gone
Am I just another faded memory.
just a suggestion.
832 2021-01-14 20:00:01
Topic: A Texas Limerick (2 replies, posted in Poems)
I don't normally write limericks but when the muse hits that spot.....
There was a young lady from Texas.
Whose stomach was all solar plexus
Her biceps so large.
They would fill up a barge.
And her attitude simply just wrecks us.
So who said there's no rhyme for Texas?
833 2021-01-14 19:51:56
Re: new computer (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hi Robert. win10 automatically downloads updates. make sure your settings allow auto updates. if you still have no sound then you may need a sound card. i have an external sound card because i do recordings on my PC. if that is your aim then i recommend Steinberg UR22 mk 2, not overly expensive and you get a rather classy DAW free. obviously you can buy an internal sound card but you will need to be careful how you install it.
let us know how you get on.
834 2021-01-13 20:25:43
Re: Just A Girl From Texas (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
nice one Pete, made i laff. I thought my verse was risque...lol
my sea legs hadn't quite acclimatized
and the saddle was chaffing my thighs
i watched as she bounced in her saddle
all i could see were her gorgeous big eyes.
who's next?
835 2021-01-13 11:15:32
Re: Just A Girl From Texas (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Goodnight Jim Bob!
Pete how about this for your opening line...
She rode my horse like her butt was on fire..
Her tight blue jeans up to her waist.
Her chequered shirt tied 2 inches higher.
And I had to ride hard to keep up.
I can imagine it sung to a kind of ghost riders beat. Over to you
836 2021-01-13 11:01:16
Re: rtu (4 replies, posted in Other string instruments)
We sometimes get spammers or idiots that post senseless posts, please ignore it means nothing.
837 2021-01-13 10:58:24
Re: new computer (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Ok Robert, welcome to Chordie. Without knowing what computer you have or operating system, it will be pointless giving you advise. If you have win 10 or above you should receive updates regularly. Windows have stopped updates for Vista and earlier. BTW programs are software so the driver should be downloadable. If you don't have a sound card built in your computer, you may find buying one fairly expensive especially if you can't fit it yourself. Go to your computer manufacturers web site and check for updates for your driver's. You will find websites that will check your PC for out of date driver's or you can purchase a program that will keep you up to date. I must warn you these may contain unwanted and often Hidden spy programs and you may get a lot of spam or worse. Good luck hope this helped
838 2021-01-12 20:32:05
Re: Cold Virginia Snow (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I can imagine the joy of them all only to be torn apart by a cowardly and vengeful act. They must have been devastated. My condolences.
839 2021-01-12 10:40:45
Re: Just A Girl From Texas (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Jim that song rocks even though it's a country, cowboy, barroom thing. Texas is getting a lot of attention lately. Let's hear it...
840 2021-01-12 10:34:24
Re: Cold Virginia Snow (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
OMG I know the civil war was brutal, but here you've brought a personal account of a tragic event. I have damp cheeks after reading and listening to your song a fitting tribute to your forefather. One word.... brilliant.
841 2021-01-11 10:48:09
Re: Hank Williams On My Mind (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
It's strange how inspiration works, but you certainly came up trump's with this one. What a great song, it has all the elements of a big country hit.
842 2021-01-09 23:27:37
Re: Chordie Member Has Won A Semi Final Place In A Worldwide Song Contest (15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
it took me 20 minutes to find your song but you got my vote too. good luck
843 2021-01-09 23:23:31
Re: it's raining in Texas (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hey Joe, I know I have relatives in Canada and my dad was in the navy during WW2 and he visited your fair shores...so you never know?
My recording device works from an SD card and it's holding around 6 unfinished songs at this time, they're all waiting for vocals, so what's the problem? I tend to sing quite loud and Ann moans to me about making too much noise, you can tell she appreciates my singing cant you? Therefor I have to wait until she goes out so I can belt out a few tunes which leads me to another problem...lock down! I need to sound proof my studio
844 2021-01-09 10:38:36
Re: Wretched Lives - on you tube and or soundcloud - featuring Phill (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well done with the video Jim. The song actually sounds better through a decent sound system!
845 2021-01-09 10:31:21
Re: it's raining in Texas (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well thanks y'all! It just goes to show how a phrase or event can give inspiration, so thanks for that AKA Joe lol. Global warming is messing things up constant rain is what we get in Wales! Just lately it's been sunny yet crispy. Winter here means summer in New Zealand and I believe almost zero covid.
Thanks Pete, maybe I'll write about Wellington next, plenty of beef in it?
846 2021-01-08 23:52:31
Re: it's raining in Texas (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
this was inspired by a remark made by Mojo. it's a bit of nonsense in which i also incorporated a little bit of romance as a nod to Jim
847 2021-01-08 22:45:05
Topic: it's raining in Texas (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
It's Raining In Texas.Undefined
Words & Music by Phill Williams.
848 2021-01-08 10:36:20
Re: MELT INTO THE CROWD (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Pete FYI, it took a ton of will power to just record a six string, a twelve string and my voice! I know if I start from scratch and make it slower it will have the full treatment...meat and two veg with all the trimmings! Lol I am thinking about it!
849 2021-01-08 10:30:53
Re: the last song (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I also think this is a great song...long live the Texas rain which has given me inspiration for a song....!
850 2021-01-07 21:41:39
Re: MELT INTO THE CROWD (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I've remixed the song (difficult to know the difference) and uploaded it to soundcloud, the full song is here now...