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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

OK

I had more time this morning and made some changes as you will see. Re did some lyrics, changed chords, and re wrote title.

To me it plays much better and fits better.

(Phill- If you ever get a chance to give this a go I'd love to hear it. )
(Beamer- did you ever give it a go ?)

Jim

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(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Trevor

Ditto what Peatle and Phill already said !
Record it and post it - like to hear it.  smile
Jim

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

CTECH

Nice words for a friend - sometimes it has a huge impact - hope so in this case.

Well done !!

Jim     

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle,
Hopefully they had no children to witness or endure.  What a sad atmosphere to have to live in. I guess there came a point of "no more" and the alternative was more appealing than continuing. A very sad story put into an excellent poem. 
It is astonishing to realize what many people have to live with day in and day out, yet try to paint pictures of normalcy for the world to see.   This story could've been the backdrop for the song I just wrote the other day and posted here - Thunderstorms and earthquakes beneath her sky of blue.
In the meantime, some people think their lives are sooooo terrible b/c the their cell phone battery died.
Thanks for sharing. a terrific , but exceeding sad, sad poem.


Jim     

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(311 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

CG

Fantastic finger picking. 
He plays the guitar so easily, it's like it's a part of him.

I love the lyric  in the song hard times never go away -  "Heartache and sadness, they look to be my friend.
How I'd like to kill them both and start all over again."    the essence of the blues right there !

Thanks for sharing - great way to start the weekend.

Jim     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beamer, Phill, and Peatle

Thank you.

Now I just have to figure out how to play it so it sounds decent.  smile
Jim     

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(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf and Peatle

I can imagine, but  what I am imagining isn't nearly as good looking or active as Maria !! smile

However, every day we get a little closer to 100 !     

I hope this works out musically - if anyone has suggestions in that regard I would appreciate it.  smile


Thunderstorms (beneath her sky of blue) By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1




[G] oh, her skin was soft and she [C]had the bluest[G] eyes


[G] with a sweet,sweet, smile that com[C]pleted her dis[G]guise


[G]"I'm fine", she’d whisper, to [C]hide the pain she’s [G]known,


as she [D]tried to deal with her [C] demons all a[G]lone.


.




Verse 2


[G]A voice soft as the breeze, when she[C] sang her favorite [G]song


[G]Her heart cloaked away any [C] hint of something [G]wrong


[G]”It’s okay", she’d say, as she [C] lived her masquer[G]ade   


while she [D]drifted through her troubled [C] life, in her cryptic [G]way


.






Chorus


[C] I thought I knew her ways, yea, I thought I knew her [G] well


but she [C] found ways to hide the hell she was going [G] through


behind her [C] hidden walls, I never saw her crumbling [G] shell


Seems there’s [D] thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue


[D] thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue



.






Verse 3


[G]she had everything you'd want, but it [C] wasn’t as it [G]seems


[G]there was an untold burden hidden [C] in all her [G]dreams


[G]“ I’m alright” she’d say, as she [C] tried to hide her [G]fears


while she [D] pretends to smile, as she [C]wipes away her [G]tears


.




Chorus


[C] I thought I knew her ways , yea, I thought I knew her [G] well


but she [C] found ways to hide the hell she was going [G] through


behind her [C] hidden walls, I never saw her crumbling [G] shell


Seems there’s [D] thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue




.




yea, there’s [D]thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue


yea, there’s [D]thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue


[D]thunderstorms be[C]neath her sky of [G]blue



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(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Congrats to your Mom Peatle ! That is awesome - she had everyone in the room's attention and even had them danceing as well.  Quite a milestone and I am sure quite a woman!
Thanks for sharing.
Jim

PS  how do people from New Zealand know how to speak Welsh ?     

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(311 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

Maxwell's guitar playing on  "my town" on that beat up ol' guitar was fantastic. such a fluid style of playing. I loved how he slid his hand down on the chords - what a cool style.  Wish I knew how to do that !     

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(311 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

CG

First off my apologies - I missed last week.

Billie Eilish is smoking  - what a voice.   I loved when she sings with her brother Finneas. She certainly has a passion for the blues. 
I also listened to her cover Bad by Michael Jackson - it was awesome.

John Maxwell is really good as well.  I like the true country sound that comes off his guitars and filters into blues.
I particularly liked How Can a Poor Man Stand Such Times and Live !

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

Very nice

V3 has great lyric - love the lines  very clever !
[Am]Now I don’t fall in love [Dm]so easy
[Am]Its the falling out [Em]I hate
[Am]The blues that [Dm]come after,
[Am]just are’nt worth [Em]the weight

Super collaborative effort- can’t wait to hear it
Since I really don’t know what 3/4 time is

Phill
I quite agree with Peatle - very witty in the lyrics.
Really great sound on the acoustic - nice rhythm - it flows nicely.
Everything sounds so beautifully clear.
Thanks for sharing

Jim     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I liked it to Brian - Peatles images brought it to life!
We are headed in the opposite direction in to fall and then winter.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I liked it to Brian - Peatles images brought it to life!
We are headed in the opposite direction in to fall and then winter.     

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Yes, I quite agree with Phill - nicely done Jeff!     

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Peatle
That song is fantastic - thanks for sharing it. 
Jim     

Here is a recording of my song

Sorry about the singing and playing smile

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … believe-in 

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

I didn't catch that Peatle - very clever however !     

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(311 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

CG
Thanks for the Ray Wiley Hubbard review.  I didn't respond bc I was away on Vacation.  He is really good with a very unique voice and style. It is very recognizable - soon as you hear him on the radio you know who it is.
He performed in a bar near me a couple of years ago - very personable man.

Here a couple more that I like .
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7z3QDkxXrvY   ( Chick singer, bad ass rocking) { duet with Carson Mahone as the chick singer)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZUOzCTUTz8  (drink til I see double) {Duet with Paula Nelson}
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ygTsN_sr4k8  (Conversation with the Devil)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxNO3XACxFI  ( I wanna rock and roll ! )

as for the Windy City Strugglers - definitely a different brand of performing.  I loved the washboard in  " the old Gods"

my favorite of the listed songs was " Can't Get Back"


Thanks again CG !!   Way to start the weekend !     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

That story about the dead Mum - is hysterical Peatle !!     

https://tabs.ultimate-guitar.com/tab/ha … ds-1872298

here ya go     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Good stuff Peatle !     

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

OMG Mojo - you sound so much like Guy Clark !  Fantastic !
I would love to have the lyrics and chords to this !
Send it in to get recorded, it's really, really good !!!!!

Jim     

These are some of my faves of JTE  - So Sad he is gone.   He was just a kid with immense talent, a big heart, and a wicked beautiful smile.

I encourage all of my chordie friends to give a listen !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jU1xL6rDAZI   Christchurch woman    ( Peatle and Easybeat - it took me awhile to figure out what a Christchurch woman was !  smile   )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xMbUNORbC9M   Mama's eyes
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y9W511HVxuY Ain't waitin'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCFAXOcc8Uo  Harlem River Blues

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_6f2OvfKy0 Mix of songs ( really good !  - crazy good guitar playing)

Jim