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Ken (DE)
I quite agree with Phill once again !
While each verse is unique and meaningful, the last one really got to me.
The lines really grip the passion you have for your wife and appreciation for what you have between you.
The simplicity of the rhyme masks the deep and complicated requirements of a great marriage.
Cheers to the great healing job and recovery of your daughter - and maybe some healing inside when your wife returned.
Beautiful song !!
Jim
I think that I may have become cynical having to deal with this Covid world we have inherited. Like Easybeat said - when something comes to you - you gotta put it down.
I'm not totally sure the music is correct, but it works for me.
Let me know what you think.
Jim
exactly the same thoughts as Phill
What the heck happens ???
Ditto Phill !
My wife knows of my wild youthful days - but no details
NICE ONE Phill Pretty soon we will need to get you a ten gallon hat, cowboy boots with spurs, and a horse !
Great advice Dad!!
Exactly what I do as well.
Phill once that even a half done song is success bc you can always go back to it even years later- and he’s knows his stuff!
Ken thank you for the feed back - I appreciate it. I actually tried it in A but then went to D and for me it played much better and was more comfortable. I changed a couple of the chord structures in the verses as well. I am not a musician per se like most of you on here, but I like writing songs.
Again, Thanks for the comment!
Jim
ps How did you get " Dirty Ed" from Ken ?
Well I finally got a moment to try this out. Apologies for my lack of musical ability - But I do like the lyrics
Welcome Aradi !
Yo have come to the right place. There are many on the forum that can assist you in a variety of ways.
Glad to have a new member !
Jim
Ed This is nothing short of fantastic ! Luckily the line about your "sister not gettin' it" made me laugh, otherwise I had tears in my eyes. I hope she hd a good sense of humor! )The lyrics paint such a vivid picture that if I close my eyes I can easily envision every scene. This has the quality that could easily be on the radio. Your guitar work and voice are spectacular. I really enjoyed this one ! Congrats on a super cool song and a great performance.
If the adult beverages really have anything to do with the quality of singing and playing, well then I need to drink about case of beer and a fifth of whiskey to sound good !!
Jim
Jeff
My bad days usually include
unnoticed stain on clothes until I get to work
forgot my glasses, phone, keys or wallet
stepped in dog poop
battery is dead in car
out of coffee
car broke down
internet is down
paper cut on end of a finger
keys locked inside car
guitar string breaks
you are right this list could be of epic proportion !
Loved it !
Jim
Russell
I got one - it came today !!
I hope it can help me play better !
Jim
Just watched that commercial - hilarious !
I think the songmaybe .....
If You're Going Through Hell (Before the Devil Even Knows)
Rodney Atkins
Well you know those times
When you feel like there's a sign there on your back
Says I don't mind if ya kick me
Seems like everybody has
Things go from bad to worse
You'd think they can't get worse than that
And then they do
You step off the straight and narrow
And you don't know where you are
Use the needle of your compass
To sew up your broken heart
Ask directions from a genie
In a bottle of Jim Beam
And she lies to you
That's when you learn the truth
If you're going through Hell
Keep on going, don't slow down
If you're scared, don't show it
You might get out
Before the devil even knows you're there
Quite a nice piece of literature there Sir Phill !!
Peatle
Sweet Song for Maree !! Nice playing and singing Peatle !! I did not know you played keyboard!
or is it KiwiBoard down there ?
Jim
and I have no clue why i did an 8 line chorus
Thank you all !
I made some changes in the lyrics and totally changed the chords
I like it so much better now !!
Jim
I would guess it is a black widow spider.
Very mysterious song - made by simple lyrics.
Very clever Phill ! but is it more clever than your granddaughter - i think not - she is asking all the right questions !!
Looking forward to the recording
Give my best to Ann
Jim
Russell - that sounds great ! It appears that you are really into it and very satisfied.
I think you have already gotten your money's worth just in that video. Awesome!
Can you record with that system ? ( as in add lyrics - singing as you play ?
Jim
Russell - that sounds great ! It appears that you are really into it and very satisfied.
I think you have already gotten your money's worth just in that video. Awesome!
Can you record with that system ? ( as in add lyrics - singing as you play ?
Jim
Beamer
I 'm thinking this is a man that is in deep trouble, and realizes he needs help - not only in making through the impending trouble of the moment, but in his life as well. Kind of - "Please let have an hour and don't let me die, if I make it I'm gonna make significant changes".
As a writer - b/c I'm not much of a musician, and I know absolutely how punk rock works - I think I would suggest a change that in the last line from acclimate to " before it's too late" but hey, it's your song.
Nice work
JIm
Nice one Mojo - ditto to all of the above !
Do you still have that painting. If not, it would quite a project to hunt it down.
You always come through with songs that have such imagery, and also always attach inceredible emotion or passion. Very heartfelt.
JIm
He has a bunch of great songs. Just add him to the list of way too many great musicians that have passed lately.
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