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(33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Well said TF. My grandson is a budding musician, learning bass, I hope he'll join up one day soon. I'd hate for him to tell me, Grampa, it's just as bad as Facebook with everyone swearing and sniping at each other.
Let's keep Chordie clean?     

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(311 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

well done CG, it's good to see that some of our members are thinking about others no just themselves. Moody Blues...the softer end of the prog rock scene, which is not to detract from their ability or talent.     

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(33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf, there are stated guide lines or don't you read the "stickies?" I thought the 1. no swearing, 2. no spam, 3. don't be abusive to your fellow members as is seen on other less reputable sites, is quite plain?
I thought the main litany for Chordie was to help other musicians and to encourage them as well as inspiring them to improve and maybe attain the thing we all desire....recognition of what we do or write. If you cant achieve that without "effing and jeffing" or rubbishing a persons efforts then maybe I'm on the wrong site? I think I'm old enough and adult enough that I don't need to use bad language, yes I do use it but not in polite company and I hope most of our members here aren't childish enough to have to stick the "F" bomb in every other word?     

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(33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i do try and do my moderating in early morning and if possible in the evenings, like now.  i don't post many of my new songs of late due to the lack of interest and only begin a new thread if i have something to say, but i am a boring person (apparently) so i don't have a lot to say anyway!
a lot of my time is taken up with this brexit nonsense. the whole of the UK is split. sorry....politics, no, no.

i would like to echo my condolences to our NZ friends and offer any support that they may feel i can help with. such an idiotic waste of life on a difference in the way people worship what we all recognise as one God just worshipped in their own ways. life is precious, taking a life is the one true sin.     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for this Jim....thanks?, Yes, it took me back to my teenage years, where you'd find pretty young girls breaking their heart over some fool that dumped them, makes me wonder where they are now and did they ever get over that traumatic experience?
As has been mentioned above, you have a master's degree in writing stunning observational songs, heavily influenced by country music. Another winner my friend.     

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jeff. That is such an emotional song. Strong lyrics and clear sentiments. We all feel
anger and rage when events like 9/11 happen, I remember watching it live on TV, but as you say, you must redirect your anger and remember as my mother used to say "there's good and bad where ever you come from, whatever your colour, creed or religion" . Don't go destroying the hive because one bee stung you?
This is a great song as I'm sure the recording will be.     

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(20 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Your instrumental track is very folk/rock so I was expecting your words to be more "gothic"? Inasmuch as I wasn't expecting a dig at modern dating...tinder, texting, followers etc. Expertly written and snuck in under the radar, so to speak. I'll be interested to hear the finished version.     

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(6 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Reminiscent of Ian Anderson and Jethro Tull! Takes me back to one of the best nights I ever had, watching a folk group at our local YMCA (now closed) and a pal of mine guested, he sang Mr Tambourine Man...brill. and the stand out song was "Thrashing Machine". If you haven't heard it you should look it up!

Great job.     

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(6 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Glad to be of help.     

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(20 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Ray Davis of the Kinks once said he always wrote his songs on piano, something to do with "because I'm not very good at the piano". And I liked the synth drums!     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

That's good news, looks like you're moving on....is that a new tag line? Naughty rocker boy?     

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(10 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Tenement Funster wrote:
Phill Williams wrote:

The wife's always commented on the faces I pull when doing a solo, and one day she observed;"ooh, they all do it!"

This one made me smile, Phill ..

I can rarely do anything with a wah pedal, without mimicking the sound shape with my mouth opening and closing ... looks like a fish. I wonder if "wah face" gave rise to the Talk Box?

https://memegenerator.net/img/instances/19718706.jpg

GOTTLE OF GEAR. GOTTLE OF GEAR     

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(13 replies, posted in My local band and me)

I once saw a thing on tv about the Eurythmics and how they wrote their songs. Well as you probably know they were a very electronic band? Dave Stuart used to noodle on acoustic guitar while Annie Lennox messed about with words and melody lines until they arrived at a song. They then took the bare bones into the studio and electrified it. So, writing words and a tune is just the beginning, the hit song is created by the arrangement and production and of course the performance.
I wish I could listen to my own advice.     

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(13 replies, posted in My local band and me)

I like the way you've gone electronic lately this is another little cracker that has the basis of a great song. Let us know when it's finished, I can't wait to see what you do with the lyrics.     

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(10 replies, posted in My local band and me)

I often get punters trying to talk to me as I'm halfway through a song. I tell them, when I can, come back when I've finished! The wife's always commented on the faces I pull when doing a solo, and one day she observed;"ooh, they all do it!"
Great recording as usual. How many out takes? I do loads, never to be seen or heard...lol     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

I have to "mirror" what CG says above, this is a great little poem and I think it would make onehelova rock song!
It's the kind of poem that makes you reflect, I never promised not to do any Puns!, It's melancholy yet hopeful and  shows there is a light at the end of the tunnel. Thanks for sharing.     

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I enjoyed that recording. You gave it heart and feeling and sang it in a soulful way. Another top song.     

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(20 replies, posted in My local band and me)

I agree with Peatle...very prog, so much so that it could have been an intro for a Yes song?

The structure of the song is great but I think if you added a counter melody it  would give the tune a little extra oomph?
So apart from that and the small timing issue, bring the bass up a touch and I think you'll have a winner.     

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(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Unfortunately I think it's Lord Garland's last season with us? It was a great match edge of the seat, nail bighting stuff. With England there's always the likelihood of a break away at any moment. Luckily it didn't happen...yay.
I'm sure the Wales AllBlacks game will be as exciting as ever     

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(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Wales just beat England 21-13. it doesn't really matter who won as it was such a brilliant match. though Wales did deserve to win 

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Excellent piece of work my friend. It describes how I've felt several times in my life with all the accompanying ailments that go with it. I was experiencing high blood pressure, heart misfires, reflux and hiper ventilation. My doctor told me to change my lifestyle or die...soon. I learned to control it, much to a lot of people's chagrin, and here I am threatening 70 and still reasonably healthy!
Your tale is so well-written and describes a lot of us, but please tell your friend to calm down, breathing exercises and cutting my workload helped me without need for drugs, just daily heartburn tablets and the occasional beater blocker. You call it a song? Let's hear it when it's finished.     

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(6 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thanks for that Neo, it is a great song and you performed it well. Just one comment, I hope you don't mind me saying; maybe if you'd moved your capo up another semi tone? You seem to be struggling just a little with the low notes? It's great that you're performing all these songs and putting them up on YouTube, keep on please.     

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(26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Neo, I laughed out loud at your comment. I once went to Liverpool and had a photo with John Lennon in Matthew street! But he was made of bronze not wax! That's about as close as I'll ever get I suppose. We came home on the Thursday and Paul McCartney visited the LIPA school next day, probably walked over the place I'd been standing. Oh wicked fate!     

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(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

you sound and your writing are so reminiscent of Bob Dylan. nice one Jim, you always capture the feel and add composition to your...well compositions!     

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jim. I don't know how I missed this back in December, so thanks for re-submitting it. Minor chords do tend to give a song a melancholy feel so that's the way I played it. But it lacked something...which is why I changed the Am on the second line of the verses to G7, I think it adds a little something, it's up to you if you keep it or not. In the chorus the last line; "and now she sleeps alone" might make a little more sense as; "and SO she sleeps alone" What do you think. Only suggestions.

[Am] There’s things that happen [Dm] in this life
which [G7] bring sorrow to your [E] soul
[Am] Things you’ll never [Dm] understand
And [E] things you can’t con [Am] trol