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I always get great poem replies to these kids poems
i look forward to this one getting your brains and keyboard working.
Grandads Computer
grandads not good with computers
he always makes mistakes
he goes red in the face
and says naughty words
i try to help him
though im 5 years old
oh but my grandad
he just wont be told
grandads got a new cellphone
OH NO
more naughty words
Tig
i must look up that chord.good to see you still writing.
you been quiet lately.well done on this one.
Peatle and i having a bit of fun on a wet day.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQDcEJSL59k
Tig
thank you soooooooo much for your comments.
i was all keen to put these poems into a book,but then got a couple
of negative comments that set me back.i thought hey maybe they
dont work like i thought.i have written a lot more,perhaps ill push on now.
Peatle and Phill really really good poems.thx
neophytte wrote:I usually read your songs and poems, but don't usually reply - but ... this one is good!!
Cheers
Richard
Neo
as you know a bit of feedback(good or bad) encourages us to keep posting.
for this reason i always comment to others contributions.
another kids poem
Robot
I am a robot I am a robot
granddad said
as he walked across the floor
with a cardboard box
on his head
he walked into a door
he took off the box
and rubbed at his bruise
a little cut and a bit of blood
wouldn`t slow him down
yesterday he got lots more injuries
when he was dressed up as a clown
lately ive been writing lots of kid type poems,having a blast doing it.
Engelbert The Cat
Engelbert was a cat
he was black as coal
and he was a wee bit naughty
because he always stole
in his night time wanderings
around our neighbourhood
things had disappeared
from places he has stood
now you may think its funny
but not to the lady from next door
for Engelbert stole all her left socks
shes now only got right ones in her drawer
rags slippers and scarves
and today he bought home a hat
this is the life of living with
a kleptomania cat
pritisbc wrote:It says it is not found
i deleted it due to lack of interest.
Grah
its great to see you commenting,
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/heaters-on
banged out a quicky to support csom used the word ``winter``
looks good Tig,you cant go wrong doing Buddy Holly
great poem Peatle,you gave me an idea.
i was standing at the bus stop
everyone had their heads down
and i wondered
is there something on the ground
then i realised they were all looking at their phones
i had to laugh,when i looked again
because im living in the past still using a pen
although i had to confess to this tech bunch
my phone was at home
id used it to post an exciting selfie
of me and my lunch
well done Neo,good to see some life back in ``song of the mth``
perhaps ill bang one out.
Ok guys,to support CSoM ill see what i can come up with.
thx
Neo
it would be good if you helped Jan
its great to have a challenge,a reason to write a song.
but with 2 mths gone by now,i haven`t had reason to write something.
and of course i love hearing what others have come up with.
ah Phill you`re coming round,the dark side awaits
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/the-chinese-bike
True story,hope you get a laugh out of it.
told off the cuff,so a few mistakes.
i love doing these rambles but they are neither songs or poems
so have put it under chats forum.
thanks Neo ill give it a try or maybe its just a poem as it only came to me with words only.
ive got this song,but for the life of me i cant seem to put it together.
ive tried a few different progressions/feels/styles but with no good result.
usually when a song comes it comes with all this already there.
if anyone can sort this for me id be thankful.
Drink Driving
drink driving
and in a mess
ive done this
i must confess
when i was a young man
an unthinking fool
the sound of twisted metal
and screams of bloody pain
i can remember
so i wont drink drive again
so now i put
my drinks on a tab
when im drunk
i catch a cab
cause i can remember
so i wont drink drive again
Peatle Jville wrote:Most of all it was fun and entertaining I enjoyed watching and listening to that vid thank you EB. I hope someone else might have a vid to share.
I dont fancy the chances of anyone posting one Pete,as we have spoken about
know one else joining in,maybe its time we took our banter back to personal e mails.
EB.
Dr Dr i need you help please
i cant say or write anything
without making it rhyme.
I`ve got a bad case of Peatle fever.
Dr.
take these pills twice a day
that should make the rhymes go away
if that doesnt work, take 100 pills a day
that way you will be so busy taking pills
that you wont have any time to rhyme.
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