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TIGLJK wrote:Peatle A very meaningful song - the lyrics are terrific ! I think you sounded great as well. Happy Holidays to you and Maree !!
tig
maybe you can answer a question thats been on my mind.
in usa you refer to christmas as ``happy holidays``
is this a move away from christian values or something else?
it seems most countries say merry christmas or happy christmas
Phill
really looking forward to hearing this.great to see a new song from ya.
ill be putting it on my christmas playlist.
Richard,great start to CSOM.looks like a lot of fun.
lets face it Christmas is all about sharing and having fun.
thanks to those that had a listen and commented.
i am encouraged.gonna bang out a few christmas songs now for CSoM
hopefully others will do a christmas song too HINT ! HINT!
i would love to add your christmas song to my christmas playlist
Im still banging out songs most days but havent posted anything
mainly because know one else has.have got a few xmas song ideas
just need to record them for CSOM
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/worth-the-wait
Peatle
good to see some new writing from you,rarely disappointed.
im off to listen
ps thats rarely( not really)
Neo
a friend of mine worked in Aussie on a bulldozer making fire breaks
the greens in their wisdom changed the fire break policy, that ended
his contract.so less fire breaks, more and bigger fires.
go figure?
I guess it wont surprise anyone that i scored 9/15
Jan
thats great,i really like the way you wrote it as a conversation.
good to see a poem on CSOM
Neo
I hear your frustration.
although there are heaps of words to choose from
i just dont have any that fit.
Phill Williams wrote:Aaaww, poor kid! When I was loosing my milk teeth, I got just 3 pence a tooth! I think my grandkids get up to £5.00! I knew I was born too soon.
Here is my answer to Brian's poem from the other point of view...
Me bruvver ith tho nathty
He pulled all my tooffs out
He that upon my chetht
And wouldn't let me shout
He thead he'd share da munny
And buy me lots of toffee
So I'm really so upset wivv im
He never gave me any
Phill thats fantistac im pleased to see it got your writing and posting.
thanks for giving me the idea guys.
Tooth Fairy
mum told me about the tooth fairy
it sounded kinda funny
but it seemed an easy way
of making lots of money
but there was a problem
i really like my teeth
ENTER little brother!
i pinned him to the floor
pliers in hand i set to work
and pulled out most his teeth
it took quite a while
he can still talk
but i think i ruined his smile
HEY easy money
Phill
no this is all made up,but no doubt its happened to someone.
Peatle did some quick sketches to go with a couple of these poems
i love what he did,sometimes an illustration takes it to another level.
Tig
thanks for the correction ``where``,great to have a teacher doing the edit.
got heaps more of these silly kids poems.
just another silly kids poem
The Haircut
My big brother needed a haircut
i told him i could help
i sat him in a chair
and shaved all his scalp
when he looked in the mirror
he cried where is all my hair
i pointed at the floor
it was all around the chair
he said he would complain to mum
hey we can`t have that
so i told him
your hair will regrow
in the meantime
wear a hat
Christmas
Christmas
Christmas
Christmas
I always get great poem replies to these kids poems
i look forward to this one getting your brains and keyboard working.
Grandads Computer
grandads not good with computers
he always makes mistakes
he goes red in the face
and says naughty words
i try to help him
though im 5 years old
oh but my grandad
he just wont be told
grandads got a new cellphone
OH NO
more naughty words
Tig
i must look up that chord.good to see you still writing.
you been quiet lately.well done on this one.
Peatle and i having a bit of fun on a wet day.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQDcEJSL59k
Tig
thank you soooooooo much for your comments.
i was all keen to put these poems into a book,but then got a couple
of negative comments that set me back.i thought hey maybe they
dont work like i thought.i have written a lot more,perhaps ill push on now.
Peatle and Phill really really good poems.thx
neophytte wrote:I usually read your songs and poems, but don't usually reply - but ... this one is good!!
Cheers
Richard
Neo
as you know a bit of feedback(good or bad) encourages us to keep posting.
for this reason i always comment to others contributions.
another kids poem
Robot
I am a robot I am a robot
granddad said
as he walked across the floor
with a cardboard box
on his head
he walked into a door
he took off the box
and rubbed at his bruise
a little cut and a bit of blood
wouldn`t slow him down
yesterday he got lots more injuries
when he was dressed up as a clown
lately ive been writing lots of kid type poems,having a blast doing it.
Engelbert The Cat
Engelbert was a cat
he was black as coal
and he was a wee bit naughty
because he always stole
in his night time wanderings
around our neighbourhood
things had disappeared
from places he has stood
now you may think its funny
but not to the lady from next door
for Engelbert stole all her left socks
shes now only got right ones in her drawer
rags slippers and scarves
and today he bought home a hat
this is the life of living with
a kleptomania cat
pritisbc wrote:It says it is not found
i deleted it due to lack of interest.
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