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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you jets60 I wrote it from a dream I had . On the aaid day of the battle. 14th October .  England would never be the same again,we lost our laws,or language, our culture and our land. We,'ve been the under class ever since.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Here is the new "ill die with a sword in my hand"I went a little wrong near the end. I blame my age,HAHA!  Listen to I'll die with a sword in my hand by Ctech #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-415450650/i … word-in-my

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi ark I will be adding a new recording soon with added new lyrics.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks jets60 I'm recording a new demo soon with new lyrics added and with no sound affect's. Hopefully a lot clearer.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Haha you got me there phill,I actually come from Kent mate.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Jim for your kind words.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Peatle Jville thank you. I haven't had much inspiration lately but hoefully a song will come . Since my canary died suddenly and my father being ill ,it taken its toll.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Jangle much appreciated. 

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(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I like it jet60,. Good melody and words and we'll put together. Enjoy listening on sound cloud.

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(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I like it jet60,. Good melody and words and we'll put together.

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(29 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Been away awhile ,as my Father was very ill and was close to death unbelievably he pulled through, but need some care so been spending a lot of time helping him . I've just posted 3 song on the UK song writing contest and I have added a different ending to "ill die with a sword in my hand" I'll be back soon to coment on all the songs that have been added.

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(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Tenement Funster I don't usually write poems and when i do they are dark. I found this one lurking on my computer so thought I'd post it. I wrote it way back in 2006.

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Excellent poem Peatle Jville. Very well put together.

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(4 replies, posted in Poems)

“Some times you have no control over your destiny,
Who you fall in love with, and where that path will lead you,

Or,

What through people's ignorance, it can destroy along the way”

Forbidden Love

As I slowly lose sight of my life,
Every day grows longer than the last,
I sit here with many thoughts in my head,
A mix of feelings, some of joy, some of dread,The light draining from my soul
                                                           
All that is good in me is slowly eroding away,replaced by hate,
A hate for a sick society that categorises me and my actions,
Destroying my faith in myself,
Until I no longer know who I am,

Everything I love has been lost or taken,
Only fading memories remain as the darkness takes hold
I have nothing left and that's what you wanted,
But, One day I will return,
Burst back into life.

I will smile again.

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(19 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Phill You could get a sdcard recovery program and get them back.

I only have rough recording posted under Ctech on soundcloud. Excuse my stupid head but I don't know what you mean by charts.

I want to enter 4 songs into this year's
http://www.songwritingcontest.co.uk/
As my playing and singing don't do my
songs justice and to be in with a chance.
I'm asking if any chordie members would
like to help out with a demo of the following
Songs.
The songs I want to enter :
I dont know where this would fit best:The lone tree
Folk song: The Awakening
Christmas song: Christmas without you
Pop song: Lady you got me going crazy.

They only need to be simple
I greatly appreciate any one who can help me.
Thank you Trevor

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(21 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Tenement Funster I wanted to show tenderness but also the pure passion you feel when you meet someone who takes your breath away. Also I feel since putting more of my personality into a song I feel they are getting better. Being a Gemini / Cancerian it's easy to cut yourself off sometime and just see darkness but now I'm trying to get more intouch my Gemini side.

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(21 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Jandle haha! Old girl is not something I'd ever say to a woman only to the German Shepherd I once had. My version of the song is raw exactly as it came into my head. BGD's version is good rythm and easy  to listen to. I'd say gentle, when I heard it , l felt it. Also I wanted to write a song with 4 chords repeating over in verse and chorus.

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(8 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thanks ark for giving me a method to work from.  I'll have a listen and see if I get inspired.

Don't put yourself down TIGLJK that was no way lame you caught the mood just right and I can hear some good stuff going on in your song. Thanks for posting.

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(21 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cheers topdown I'm pleased Baldguitardude is recording it. Thank you for your kind comment I feel honoured. I'm gonna send the song to the girl whom I wrote it about.

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(21 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Baldguitardude no hurry I look forward to your finished arrangement I appreciate you taking the time.

Thanks Tenement Funster I think I may join. It's just you can't be to careful these day people will steal the coat of your back. As for music apart form a few songs since 90''s mainstream music died in my eyes. As for hip hop I'd bin that. 80s hip hop was better though.

Thanks Dirty Ed it's sounding more promising . ($200 a year! Expensive. I thought Great Britain was the only rip off country to be fair they could have a service worth $200 ) the one in England has a demo service I may try that's what got me intrested and copyright protection.