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Thanks Ken. I'm not religious either I study Taoist philosophy, Living simply,compassion & Humility Easy to say not always easy to follow.

Thanks again smile

Trevor

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Hi Phill,Don't know If you got my email,about other song,but I've sent it. No this is another 4/4 time arpeggio,but it can be played anyway may need to change chords a bit to fit the type of music.

This song came about Because when I was growing up I was told if you do wrong you wont be let into heaven.

I'll have to get singing these and putting them on my site,so everyone know how they sound.

Trevor

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Hi Daddy like you,I like to think we are reborn,even its to be a tree or a plant,or maybe some kind of animal,to see the world from these things eye that would be very special & amazing.

Trevor smile

Hi Selso, Thanks for the compliment ,Lennon could write! one of the best.

by the way I liked the song you wrote for your brother :night he went to god. It must be hard for you. I hope you don't mind me saying I'm sorry for your loss.
I lost my brother Colin when he was 1 week old & i was only 3,but I still like to keep his name alive & think about what sort of a man he would have become.

Trevor

Thanks daddy,I thought I'd never get a post,just tried it sounds great,thanks your a cool guy,much appreciated.

I don't know why I didn't think of it,I do get stuck in my ways. LOL smile

Trevor

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Hi Daddy & Selso,No its one Phill wrote,I asked him to post it as I really like it. I've got one on here I want some help finishing called I want you back,I'm really stuck with it.

Trevor

You can't beat the times they are a changin' by dylan

Thanks again Phill smile

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Thanks Phill,Much appreciated  smile I like the chords you use,i sometimes get lost for which one to use.

I love the first verse of this song & the 4th part,where it starts:We don't have to take this kind of, bussybodiness.

Trevor

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I went to a religious school & was made to go to Sunday school so I ask this question,Will he be there waiting? 



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Copyright Trevor Scrivens 1991

Thanks Phill, I'm no1 in there chart with How many times,made me smile,a lot of people have said that i sound like Dylan & Donovan but the man to me is John Lennon. Imagine simply said it all,a masterpiece. I'll try to record I can't believe at a later date,I'm not totally happy with the 3rd verse it doesn't flow like the others,Had to sing.

I tried searching for you song Maybe I'm wrong couldn't find it on Chordie ,could you post it so I can have the chords & Lyrics,I like to have a go at singing it,I love it. reminds me of a cross between Barry Manilow & Neil Diamond.

Trevor

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I second that Phill,very brave lads,just doing there job

Hi Kenny, yer have to be careful how I state thing,easy to get the wrong message LOL smile

I can't sing this one to good but will give it a go,soon

Trevor

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Hi ken,

just been to your myspace page, i really like this song and credit crunch,right up my street. smile

On the subject of war and atrocities Harry patch said it right  'they don't listen,THEY JUST DON'T LISTEN!!!'

Or a line from the  Pete Seeger and Joe Hickerson song Where have all the flowers gone 'When will they ever learn.

Like you I play just for fun.

Trevor

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Hi Wlbaye,Great song I see you havent worked out chopro yet,took me a while, under the song line put your song title in brackets eg. {t:10 Percenter Blue's} Then after the last line of your song add [/song],I hope that helps.

I lost my job due to a back injury,still looking for work but like the USA no jobs in great Britain unless you fit the PC profile,bring back common sense & equality. I keep looking with a smile on my face, it wont grind me down. smile

Bob Marley what a great man

Trevor

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Hi daddy,I'm pleased you like it,When I get the chance I,ll record it.35 years good on you, Life is full of ups n down,its whether you stay the distance that is important,so many people take it to lightly now a days, married one minute, divorced the next. When I get married it will be forever. Being 45 I better not leave it to long,LOL smile

Trevor

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Hi ark,you are right they are a bit overpowering,I got to find some different strings,maybe a bit softer as i feel they are to hard. Ive got a vsti on a disk somewhere that's  better. I use Cakewalk sonar 8, Vsti's and plug ins on my Athlon x2 PC,The poor man's. way. I'm glad you get the overall feel of the piece that important. Thank you for you advice. Ill remix it when got time.

Trevor

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Hi Phill, Got just one word for you 'Sedition'' There's not enough of it, They see the pyramid with them at the top,I see the pyramid upside down with us at the top,How can so few rule over so many? The world is in such a mess.

Really good song written then recorded in a matter of 30 or so minutes,I love it smile

Trevor

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Hi Shuvelhead420, Just watched you on you tube,Agree A strong, solid song! good rhythm smile

Trevor

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Thank you Kenny, but cant take all the credit,my pc helps,plus Sibelius, Guitar pro 5,cakewalk sonar 8 and numerous Vsti's I use.

I still prefer to just strum along and sing a song,cant beat that.
if a song sounds good with just your guitar or keyboard and your voice,then you've got it made.

Thanks again smile

Trevor

Maybe you will like this Daddy cool,I'm not to sure about the chords in the bridge.



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Hi mark,

Just had a listen,I really like your songs. On the chord progression thing check out this link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TP0--qwCuek   36 songs 4 Chords It will give you a laugh it did me. smile


Trevor

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Hi everyone,I just uploaded this New instrumental called alone on zebox,I like to know what you think,its a work in progress.

Trevor

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Hi Ark,Great sound reminds me of the sixties somewhere in there,Love it  smile

Trevor

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Your a bad boy,but can identify with this song,used to have a really horny neighbour and god didn't  she know it,Phew I'm getting all hot under the collar thinking about it,I was 14 at the time LOL.

Like how you switch to the wife being next door great song.

Trevor