726

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Bill your name in the local NZ indigenous language is Wiremu .     

727

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill Williams wrote:

Hey Bill, I think this idea of yours is inspired. But this message is for Pete.
Pedr
1. Your writing style is unconventional...a good thing.
2. Your means of delivering your message is unconventional...another good thing.
3. Why do you rubbish your voice, this song proves you can sing, hold the pitch and reach the high notes.
4. If I have a criticism it would be to get a set of head phones and download a free DAW from the infernal net, you'll also need some kind of interface, there are many cheap ones out there, then you can record in good quality and multi track as much as you like. I'LL HELP YOU AS MUCH AS i CAN, NICE VID BY THE WAY

Thank you Piri for your vote of confidence.  I try to make my approach to music and lyrics original and not conventional . Tech and the interweb always get me confused people show me how to do things on the computer and next thing I know I have forgotten what they have shown me. I must find out what an interface and a DAW is. I brought a recording mike and a recording multi track studio download earlier this year when it proved to hard for me to use so I took it back as the guy in the shop said to me if it proves to hard they would refund me. 
Thank you again your a wonderful musical mentor.

728

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cheers Bill
My singing and playing are not that good so I just stick to making the odd very rough demos of my musical ideas all just recorded on my cellphone or laptop. The mic on both is not that good.. I was given a looper to try so that was is what I used to give a sort of backing vocal. I couldn't get the  feel of using it but I thought  I gave it a practice run on there. It came out a bit messy but I thought I would let it go as it showed the intended vocal arrangement  of the song. Maree gave up music years ago  she is a trained classical pianist and doesn't really like my musical  attempts. There is a group of us who meet up on many a Sunday late afternoon for  couple of hours at a bar and Brian is one of them. Brian and I have different styles of music that don't really flow together well but he does a good cover of my songs. I have covered some of his songs also unfortunately my poor musical ability doesn't do his songs much justice.
Love to you and Dondra , Bill your a  legend.
Pete

729

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Bill I will send you this song I recorded on my cellphone for you.  I'm sorry about for the sound  quality not being the greatest. Maybe just as well with my bad guitar playing and singing. I wont ask you to sing it because I think it is not as good as the other ones written by the chordies above.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pkqXdic200     

730

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Bill your a champion. I have enjoyed reading your journal. I'm not up to much on the songwriting front as I haven't been that well.  Not sure how to work with your chords but I will drop a lyric suggestion  here that one of our clever people on here might want to use toward your song.

Today and everyday I will keep on pushing.

No matter what.

No matter what .

No matter what anyone says.

No Goliath can hold me back.

No Goliath can hold me back.

I set my goal.

I’m on a roll.

No Goliath can hold me back.     

731

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Piri, I know having heard your magic playing your pick would have done a good job. RIP your pick I bet it has made  your guitar sing perfectly. Maybe in time to come archaeologist will find your pick and wonder what it was and it's place in history.
My little plastic fantastic.
Danced with many a string.
Listen to by many a boy and girl while they were having a fling.
Now my beautiful pick.
Rest in peace beneath the soil.
Leaving me with many memories of its beautiful toil.

732

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Good one Jeff I can relate to what you have written there. I learnt earlier on in Maree and my  marriage the easiest way to plan a vacation is to  give her the best dates to go away and some of my ideas plus a budget and let her arrange the rest. I am pretty sure there are moments when I get on Maree's nerves we have learnt the art of  giving each other space. Compromise without the arguments.

733

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Here is a final article on Toa attached he was given a  good farewell honouring  his  brave spirit..
https://www.stuff.co.nz/dominion-post/w … farewelled     

734

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Just incase anyone is wondering how Toa got on .  Sadly his health went down hill this evening and now his spirit swims free... RIP Toa.

735

(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

A friend of mine a very good guitarist and musician never smoked but in his music room he had an ashtray which held his much loved guitar picks. When he played gigs he never put his picks in with the guitar cases they were placed in his wallet with a bit in it designed specially to hold his picks. He was okay with other people playing his guitars but no one could touch his picks. I was told after he died his ashtray with the picks in it now sit on a table besides his wife bed as her way of keeping him close even though he is gone. His son told me that his mother guilty pleasure is when cleaning the ashtray when dusting and vacuuming is holding the picks in her hands. Apparently it wasn't until after he died that she got to touch those picks.     

736

(15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Welcome back Bill hardly a week goes by when I wonder what has happened to Bill and Dondra. I look forward to hearing more from you
Love to you and your family.
Maree and Pete     

737

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Phill and Jim, Today, Friday we have a big storm here and with the rough sea they have had to put Toa into a pool until it passes. I will attach a video taken on Wednesday.
     https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UpBgHYtQvvw

738

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

I tried to write a song about this baby Orca called Toa who locals are trying to reunite him with his Pod after he got separated from them.  Unfortunately, all I could come up with is this poem.         
https://www.rnz.co.nz/news/national/446 … er-arrives
                       

                           Here to give Toa a hand.

Toa our baby orca we are here to help you find your lost pod.

It is good to know the world is not full of rotten sods.

We are not here fishing the ocean to catch you on our rods.

Thousands of humans are out looking for your pod.

If humans can put a man on the moon.

Surely our baby will be saved real soon.

People on sand dunes rocks and hills.

All of us people from a multinational gravy.

Forming a citizen's navy.

Showing good amongst worldwide gloom.

Here to give Toa a hand.

We are sick of the those with firing rods.

Dirty rotten destructive sods.

Destroying nature and the family of man.

While our good people are pounding the sand.

Here to give Toa a hand.

Some looking out to sea from different parts.

While other are flying above land.

Here to give Toa a hand.

All sorts wealthy people.

Poor people.

Some down to their last penny.

Here to give Toa a hand.

Many in boats.

Thousands of citizens of this land.

Here to give Toa a hand.

Our brave baby orca.

Inspiring human kindness.

Here to give Toa a hand.                                       

On sea, air and land.

Here to give Toa a hand.

739

(0 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Here is me performing my poem song  "Thankful For Love" just me and my guitar.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8aWh-yVBCo 

740

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good song for the Kids Jim and educational also.     

741

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Phill and Jim that is brilliant how you can turn a subject into words that flow. I love seeing words play out on replies to different posts. Food is a big part  of all cultures when I have been travelling. Our different experiences with food I find it to be very interesting.

Culture, race, and ethnicity.

One person's normal may seem to another eccentricity.

In my travels I love the place food plays.

My nana always had love on a plate.

Different dishes made to make people feel great.

Hospitality and food a great way to show love not hate.

742

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Phill our Weet- Bix is a breakfast biscuit similar to your Weetabix in the UK but slightly different.  I will attach a short video below with some of our top team known as All Black' rugby players their jersey colour not their skin talking about Weet- Bix .



When I was a young man.

The worms in my stomach were always hungry.

My mum always has porridge for breakfast.

Now she is 100 years young it is still the same.

After porridge could be toast and marmalade or jam plus a brew of tea.

My friends had vegemite or marmite and also so did my gran.

Sometimes it would be eggs or spaghetti or bake beans on toast.

Then my worms would cry out Weet- Bix with milk and sugar and a splash of boiling water.

Now I am older my breakfast are small but still the same things plus cornflakes or rice bubbles among other things.

Every now and then my favourite left over stew or the bolognas mince from last night on toast.

Now we are retired breakfast is quiet often the time-of-day Maree and I talk the most.



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z9-8_Se1IOA&t=9s     

743

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Raised on potatoes and Weet-Bix.

Not much in-between.

Is a story worth telling.

Nothing flash  tin Spaghetti and Baked beans.

This river is not as shallow as it seems.

Put your foot in the water its more than it seems.

744

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Beamer  good one cleverly crafted lyrics .     

745

(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Phill those Bankers can be a bunch of other uckers.

746

(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Good to see your are still here on chordie Mojo. One area where I hear NZ is different to the rest of the world is our banks no longer accept cheques. Money has to be paid into their account online.  My American friends who receive pay cheques from the USA now can't cash them here. I use to pay people who did work for me at home  by cheque now I have to direct credit it into their bank accounts.

747

(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jim and Phill , Thank you for your feedback. With all these cyber attacks and reliance on computers and the internet for  all sorts of things I wonder how safe the net is. I have a friend who has worked in banking for years he tells me that the banks are getting rid of branches and people to save money. Their trying to get people to do everything on line so they don’t have to pay for business real estate space also have less staff. I recently had to get something sorted with the bank as our local branch has been closed. I was made to phone the call center which took me nearly an hour as I had to wait for my call to be taken.  I had to listen to awful music and a voice every so often saying your call is value and we will be with you soon. I had to phone to make an appointment to talk to someone at the bank in the city. It was only  a few  years back you could just walk into the bank and talk to someone. Many of my friends use to pay their bills at post offices which are slowly been closed down around the country. Many of my friends don’t have computers so they have to pay an extra fee because they get their statements through the mail. Today many outfits here charge an extra fee if you want your invoice mailed out where as before everyone got their invoices in the mail without  an extra fee.  Maybe it is a weird theory of mine the over reliance on the internet could backfire in a big way with the cyber wars going on at the moment. The Kindergartens and some hospitals  here have had to go back to pen and paper while the computer experts try and sort out a mess caused by ransom ware and hackers.
To me it is a bad form of social engineering and a form of discriminations for the elderly. For my one hundred year old Mum banking and bill paying has become a nightmare for her.

748

(13 replies, posted in Poems)

Good poem Phill now I have retired I appreciate not having to spend long hours away from Maree. When I have my own time going out doing my individual man stuff it is always wonderful to come home to her. Getting older I realize that  time with family is precious.     I agree with Jim I can see you adapting those words into a song.

749

(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Internet Banking

Don’t get rid of your pen and paper.

Cyber wars are here closing down businesses and hospital wards.

Affecting the innocent  hordes.

The pen is still mightier than the sword.

The money bosses have closed down my local bank.

Conspiring monsters in their think tanks.

Telling the ranks  this  is the way to go.

To me it doesn’t seem like a safe show.

In the news are all these hackers causing massive stop go’s. 

750

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

That is brilliant Phill I love it when people have fun with words on my post. Everyone please feel  free to have a go.

It is an age-old story.
If you're looking for thrills.
And you don't have the skills.
Don't walk the tightrope.
Your walk on the highwire.
Will be dire.
With an involuntarily fall from the wire.
Your loved ones will want none of this.
With a quick flight through the abyss.
It will be a sad goodbye for your family through your stupidness..