Ken,

Good question, and Phill got it exactly right. ( at least in my head. )

I can think of many instances of people that never got the chance to achieve their dreams b/c some establishment type obstacle thwarted them.
Two that comes to mind right away were Robert Kennedy and Martin L. King, Jr, in their cases, by  an assassin's bullet.
I think many young African American Musicians in the early years of the music industry who were robbed of their songs and $.
People that have spoken out on civil rights issues, whose ideas somehow get buried in the media or social prison ( I think of the women's rights movement)
Or more commonly, just a teenager that wants their own identity, wanting to break away from the authority of their parents, school rules, or other social norms. 
(I know that there were many times I did stuff that I hoped and prayed that my Mom never found out about. smile  )
Try to understand the kid that doesn't want to work the farm, or go to college, but wants to follow there dream of being an artist or musician.
( or someone telling Beamer to only play classical music, instead of METAL smile   )
So this song just comes down to basically a young person being rebellious, and not wanting to be stifled in what they wanted to do or say.

As for that the last line in the first verse, it means ( at least in my head) that the young person would achieve that freedom before they get old and change-
and end up being part of the establishment. Thus the line before it - want to break the mold.  (I think Pete Townsend wrote those famous words - " Hope I die before I get old! ")
The world would never have progress if there weren't dreamers that break tradition.
(Chuck Berry and Buddy Holly come to mind, musically) 

My brother told me a story once about a little girl who was watching her mom cook a roast beef.  The mother cut the ends off the beef and threw them away  and then proceeded to cook it. The little girl asked why she did that.   The mom said because that's the way her mother did it and it always tastes great.   The next week the little girl visited her grandmother and told her what her mother said, and asked her why she cut the ends off the roast beef.  Grandmother replied, b/c that's the way my mother did it and it always tasted great. The next week the little girl got to visit her great grandma. Sure enough she asked her, " Great grandma, My mommy and her mommy both cut the ends of the roast beef before they cook it and throw them away. They said it's b/c that's the way you did it. Can you tell me why ?  " 
Grandma smiled at her great granddaughter and said , " Sure, it wouldn't fit in the only pan I had".
smile  smile smile


This is just another reaffirmation that a song can be interpreted many ways.

Thanks for all the interest and the way you performed it. Hope this clears it up.

Jim

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill

WELL THEN,.........   LONG LIVE ROCK 'N ROLL IN A COUNTRY SONG !  smile

HOPE IT COMES OUT GREAT !

And on a side note, that's how I gauge when I START to get ready - when my wife tells me she is ready.   And I'm still ready before she is actually ready to walk out the door.  smile     

Ken
Thank you so much, that is really fantastic.
It's amazing how someone can turn the way a song is written
into something quite different that what they thought it was going to be.

It happens more often than we think.  There are many versions of songs we know and love.
While I had this song in my head as a country rock, or bluesy type song, I was amazed how nice it sounded and flowed the way you did it.

It's funny too, a couple of the lyric changes you made were exactly how I had written them but had changed them for some reason.

I know that Graham had said he might do a copy of it when his voice gets better which would be a true blues version that he is really good at.

I can't wait for Beamer to give his rendition as a " Metalized" version. Should be quite a contrast  smile

This kind of reminds me of how we used to have the FSOTM (Featured Song of the Month) here on chordie where someone would choose a song and a lot of members would do their own version.  It was quite fantastic

I always encourage any of our members to use my songs and make any changes necessary.

Phill is a Godsend here on chordie for many of us - he has had such a terrific way of helping me with my songs ( and others) .
I probably would have stopped writing a long time ago if not for him.

That's what makes Chordie so great.  What a collection of superb musicians (except for me  smile  ) and composers of so many various genres - yet all support and encourage each other.  If only the world operated the same way.


Thanks again Ken.

Jim

P.S.  and I agree with Peatle - it really does have that John Denver feel to it. 
It didn't occur to me at first, but after Peatle pointed that out and I listened again, I certainly got it.

829

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Sounds cool, lets hear it !!

Long live Rock 'n Roll !!     

Ken
OMG YES !!!

PLEASE DO.


I WOULD LOVE IT  !

Jim     

Mojo

AS the great poker players of Texan lore used to say.........

it's not cheating if you don't get caught.     

832

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Brian

Let's not confuse poetry with just a rhyme
similar sounds, with thoughts sublime
June and Moon and Fox in the box
alliteration, metaphors, and paradox
Cat and Rat, Free as the Sea
not meter, not octave, nor simile

a man from Nantucket, and sometimes worse
hyperbole, litotes, Shakespeare's blank verse
it's all good, whatever you choose
as long as you're writing, you can't lose
if you're wondering how this will end
it's two sestets, sans iambic pentameter, sans couplet !

smile 

Keep on keeping on my friend !

Jim     

833

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf
I am so pleased that you are returning to chordie.
Sorry to hear about the past misfortunes you have endured, but I am also excited to see what the future unveils
for your future.
Welcome home !
Jim     

834

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Beamer

The chorus lyrics IMHO  are top shelf buddy !

Hope you put it to music!
Jim     

835

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

My TOP 10 choices would be  ( in order)
Bob Dylan
Kris Kristofferson
Lennon& McCartney
Paul Simon
Hank Williams
Roger McGuinn
Brian Wilson
Smokey Robinson
Townes Van Zandt
Willie Nelson

A song is like a dream, and you try to make it come true.     

Phill

Yeah that's the hardest part for me - never the lyrics - always the music.
It might help if I could actually play or sing worth a hoot !  smile

As far as this song, I just kinda tried to play it like fast little bluesy song.
I'm sure I probably screwed up how it should go musically. 
That's why i love chordie - the guys who actually know this stuff usually tell me how to fix it. As usual, I am always grateful for criticism,corrections and changes.

Thanks for the kind words - just a couple of rebels we are !  smile

Jim

ahhhhh.... to be young again !

Just kind of reminiscing how I used to be brash and wild.
It's amazing how we change over the years.
If I was a songwriter when I was 16- this is probably something I might have written.

Chasing my dreams, hope I never caught by Jim  Kenyon


.




[E]Never believe everything I’m told


[E]not gonna have my mind controlled


[E]Maybe someday I can break the mold


[B7]Let’s hope it happens ‘fore we [A]all get [E]old




.




[E]It’s hard to face life’s reality


[E] we live in a world full of fantasy


[E] I wanna see the world like I want it to be


[B7]Guess it’s just a young [A]mentali[E]ty




.


Chorus


.


[A]They tell me that I should do just as I’m taught


[E]Putting steel chains on my every thought


[A]I might get sold out, but I’ll never be bought



‘cause I’m [B7]chasing my dreams, hope I [A]never get [E]caught




.


[E]It’s really hard to see, like black on black


[E]But it seems like freedom is what I lack


[E]Ain’t nobody ever gonna cut me no slack


[B7]I’m breaking away and I’m [A]never looking [E]back




.


Chorus


.


[A]They tell me that I should do just as I’m taught


[E]Putting steel chains on my every thought


[A]I might get sold out, but I’ll never be bought


‘cause I’m [B7]chasing my dreams, and hope I [A]never get [E]caught


Yeah , I’m [B7]chasing my dreams, and hope I [A]never get [E]caught


[B7]chasing my dreams, and hope I [A]never get [E]caught





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(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Phill

That description probably fits 30 % or more of men over 60.  smile

Great description.

When I was a youngster, we had a guy named Orvis Lunn in our town that wore exactly that everyday.

We used to call him the Gray Man at our town's little theater, where he worked on Friday and Saturday nights - keeping us young'uns under control. 

And that's what we would say when we saw him coming to yell at us _ " Gray man's coming" !!!  Thanks for rekindling that memory !

Jim     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I just re-wrote  ( as I usually do  smile  )
Changed a few lyrics and re-arranged the chords.
I am going to try to record it later today or tomorrow.

Give ' er   a try and let me know what you think

Happy VD !!   smile

Jim     

840

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Peatle !

Hope you and Maree share a special day together today !!
It's summer there right ?  WE are getting 8-12" of snow tomorrow!

Cheers

Jim     

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(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff
I too think the song has some real nice lines in the lyrics

I agree with your philosophy as well about writing as much as possible for the reasons you stated, but also bc it is a very convenient way for me to relax as the song usually leads to quite a bit of time devoted to trying to play guitar . Songwriting for me is usually inspired by something I see or hear, and once in a while by events that bother me or are inspiring.

Thanks for sharing your song - I will look forward to the others at the time you deem it appropriate

Cheers

Jim     

842

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I was watching all the people scurrying about the past couple of days over the celebration of Valentine's Day.

I too am a victim of love - and easily fall into that category so it is not a criticism.   I just wanted to point out there is a lot of other love that is need in this world and hope that these words can make people reflect a bit on that as we celebrate the love in our lives.

It probably needs a lot of editing but in my head it seems ok.  Let me know what you think
and oh yeah....... HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

Jim

It Just Might Be Me By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


[G]Look around this ‘ol world and open up [C] your eyes and your [G]heart


If you can stop just one soul from aching, well [D]that’s a real good start


take the [G] time to care, and help someone[C] with a heavy [G]load


Ya' know a prayer, or a song might help a friend send their [D]troubles down the [G]road


.




Verse 2


[G]Show a little kindness, and bring some sunshine to [C]someone else’s[G] yard


A helping hand, or a smile or two, you see it’s [D]really not that hard


and if you [G] look around for those in need, there’s[C] no telling what you’ll[G] find


It’s funny that while you’re helping them, you’ll find your [D] own peace of [G]mind




.




Chorus


Yea it, [C] Seems the more that you care


and the [G]more love that you share


oh it[D] makes this world a better place to [G] be


So let your [C] love come shining through,


for [G] all the wretched world to see


because that [D]person’s aching heart you heal,


well it [C] just might be [G]me



yeah it [D] just [C]might be [G]me




Verse 3


[G]It’s the little things, that can warm a heart, like [C]easing a friend in [G] need


It doesn’t take much to give a lot, who knows [D] where that road may lead


We all [G] have different dreams to follow, but we [C]sometimes lose our [G]way


And we all could use a little love sometimes, to help us [D]make it through tough [G]days




.




Chorus


Yea it, [C] Seems the more that you care


and the [G]more love that you share


oh it[D] makes this world a better place to [G] be


So let your [C] love come shining through,


for [G] all the wretched world to see


because that [D]person’s aching heart you heal,


well it [C] just might be [G]me


yeah it [D] just [C]might be [G]me


yeah it [D] just [C]might be [G]me


yeah it [D] just [C]might be [G]me



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(24 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Peatle and Phill

Great message - sound is fantastic and the video is spot on!!

Well done gents !!

Jim     

Phill  changed it up a bit - I think it sounds great

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … ll-version

I sure wish I had the ability to play and sing like this.

Let us know what you think

Jim 

845

(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle- love it - so dead balls accurate !

Were those Tui birds ?

Jim     

846

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I finally had time to try this song -  hope it's not too painful for your ears smile

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … from-texas 

847

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Beamer

in the words of Dylan Thomas, " Do not go gentle into the good night - rage, rage against the dying of the light !

some dark and deep messages in your lyrics.

Going to be interesting to hear it when/if it becomes a song.

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

848

(3 replies, posted in My local band and me)

OMG - I love it !   So funny and sad.
Great song - Love the bass line- kind of a mix of Marty Robbins, Bob Willis and Johhny Cash.
"Piss til dawn" as a result of his drinking all night !! - "The partly opened fly" ! smile smile
This song is so clever and witty. Well played sir,literally and figuratively!!LOL !!!     

849

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I just wasn't happy the way the original lyric sort of just didn't finish, so I added a verse and kind of melded them together to finish it off.

I also changed the arrangement to a rocking little country blues song in the key of  E

I think it plays easier( alot more fun for me to play it)  and makes more sense to me  this way.

I am hoping this afternoon or tomorrow to be able to record a copy and torture your ears! smile

It's pretty much as Phill noted on the original - one of those songs to be sung in a Texas bar.  smile

Thanks for taking a look.

Girls from Texas By Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.


[E]Met me a woman down in San Antone


[E] skin soft as satin but a heart of stone


with [A] fire in her eyes, whiskey on her lips


I could [E]feel the heat a comin’ off her finger tips


[B7] She wore a cowboy hat and tight blue jeans


[A] caught my attention if you [E]know what I mean




,


Verse 2


.


Well [E] we danced all night to every song


[E]I went to get a beer, she said “don’t be long”


[A]Then she took my horse, my boots, and gun


And said [E]hey cowboy “let’s have some fun”


[B7]she rode my stallion all through the night


[A]out where the stars are [E]big and bright


.




Chorus


.


[A]Mama said watch out for those naughty girls


the [E]ones with big smiles and hair full of curls


the [A]ones that are wild, and a little bit reckless


yeah,[B7]Mama said stay a[A]way from those girls from [E] Texas




yeah [B7]Mama said stay a[A]way from those girls from [E] Texas




.




Verse 3



.






[E]woke up next morning at the break of dawn


[E]lipstick on my collar, but she was gone


[A]a note on the table said we'll meet again


but I [E]don't where and she didn't say when


[B7] it was one of them nights that I can't explain


but that [A] girl from Texas just [E]drives me insane


.


and I[B7] just can't wait til we [A]meet [E] again




.


Chorus


.




[A]Mama said watch out for those naughty girls


the [E]ones with big smiles and hair full of curls


the [A]ones that are wild, and a little bit reckless


yeah,[B7]Mama said stay a[A]way from those girls from [E] Texas


.




yeah [B7]Mama said stay a[A]way from those girls from [E] Texas


yea [B7]Mama said stay a[A]way from those girls from [E] Texas


.






slow


but the [B7]Lord knows, I [A] need that girl from [E]Texas


yeah, the [B7]Lord knows, I [A] need that girl from [E]Texas



Ken
Nice song.
Sorrowful topic

I teach my kids about it and it is no easy task

The woman that Emmet till supposedly whistled at - just about 4 or 5 years ago admitted he never did any such thing.
The mom insisted on the casket being an open casket so the whole world could see what they did to her son   - the whole world is still watching, but there is so much more that needs to be done to heal us.

Good stuff my friend

Jim