826

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Brian : Love the Lyrics  - so true !  Phill - awesome once again !!

Peatle nice video work !!     

827

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Mojo- fantastic song  Lyrics are great and your voice is damn near  perfect for it.  Very well written !   It ought to be sent to Luke,,Blake, Brad or some famous dude to cover !
I loved it ! Thanks for sharing.  Keep them coming !

Jim     

Trevor
just WOW!

that is awesome.

Is that a song you wrote ?

fantastic in any case.

Jim     

829

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

LOL Jeff

My wife is on a first name basis with the UPS delivery guy - he drops stuff off nearly every day.

It's ridiculous.

Nicely described.

Jim     

830

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff,
I hope you you understood what I meant, it was your song that I was talking about that flows very well, I just was comparing it to the other.

Again, nicely done.

Jim     

831

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff

The music to this song is quite unique.... it took me to envisioning a soundtrack for an older movie- almost vaudevillian-style.
I could picture a singer like Al Jolson or Vaughn Monroe singing this. 
(This is a similar song it reminded me of   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G9WRwRdpl3k  )
it nicely flows from one thought to another.

Well done.

Jim     

832

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beamer

Sounds like this knight needs a new castle to find a damsel that truly needs him.
Interesting correlation in the lyrics.

Get on your steed and ride, young man ride !
It seems the known keeps haunting the old castle.  Search for new opportunity,

Just my humble interpretation. 

Thanks for sharing - I'd like to hear how it is played and sung.
I'm sure it is "metalized" ( and oh the irony there - metal ARMOR, METAL SONG! smile ) somehow
Jim

Thanks for all the comments - it is awesome to see chordie come alive !

Russell - this baby plays smother than baby skin !

I am so pleased with this guitar.   Even easy to play barre chords- which I struggle with usually.

JJJ  - so good to hear from you  !  You are at the top of the food chain on NGD  for sure !! Hail to the King!

Beamer - I sure wish I knew how you metalize !!   

ALL - Wouldn't it be a great day if some how we all were able to get together !!    it would be the definition of awesomeness!     

834

(3 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Trev

Emotional song - hope it was fabricated !
nice performance

Jim     

835

(3 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Trevor

I had the exact same impression as Peatle did.  nice easy song to dance to.

Well done !
Jim     

Hey fellow chordians !
I hope you are well.

It has been so long since the forum has been lit up with posts it seems as if
someone turned out the street lights.

I know everyone is busy and covid has taken over- so I get it.

I Just wanted to say hello to all of you


also I have a new epiphone guitar coming Wednesday
I couldn't remember how to post a picture so here is the link.
https://www.sweetwater.com/store/detail … oa-natural


again- Hope all is going well with you all!

cheers and best wishes
Jim 

Thank you guys for the positive comments.
Jeff- thanks for doing a cover of it - much appreciated !


Jim     

838

(5 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Graham 
Sounds great - still loving the supermarket blues song - it is a classic !

I would love to be able to do what you guys that are real musicians do - It looks like so much fun!

JIm     

Well it took forever - but here is my version of the song I wrote

Apologies for my playing and singing, but the message is important and I wanted to get it out there.

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … -of-blue-1


comments and suggestions for improvement are always welcome.

Jim 

840

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

beautiful lyric and the pics are matching.  Nicely done Peatle. Relaxing tune. We all need a place like that.

Jim     

841

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill
It could be any major city - they all have danger zones.
There are some gangs  and drug deals it makes it quite treacherous and savage sometimes.

Nice song -

Best Regards to Anne !!

Jim     

842

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill
That describes such a sad life.

Jim     

Phill
Would that work on a telecaster ?

Might be an amusing sound.

Jim     

Wait.  Where do you put the rag?
By the sound hole?     

845

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Quite clever lyrics !  I like it!!     

846

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beamer

In My Humble opinion......

it's your best song yet!
some classic lines in there!

Jim     

Hey fellas

I rewrote this song... made lyrical changes mainly. Changes are in this post - i edited it.
Mainly the second verse - I didn't like it the way it was.

If I get a chance I will try to record it tonight so I can torture your ears a bit  smile
Jim

Thank you Bill and Phill !     

Mojo

I too have lots of memories where cats that were sounding like lions.
When I was typing my thesis for my masters on a typewriter  this old tomcat was at my door howling away
I shooed him away a few times, and finally instructed him that if  came out again he was going for a ride.

sure enough - he came back and was howlng - i put him in the trunk of my car and brought him to my buddy's farm.

He stayed there for about the next 5-8 years - seemed to love all the other cats there.

Glad you liked the song. I'm gonna do a rough recording just so the guys that can actually play and sing can get
an idea of how it is in my head.

I also put the line about the ice cold beer flowing in their bc I thought being a Texan such as yourself, that would help en the bloc!  smile

Take care

Jim

Mojo  posted about having writers block for songwriting.  Phill, Brian (easybeat)  and I made a couple of quips
and I turned them into this.

Cryptic Trance by Jim Kenyon  (with Help )


[C]trying to think of something important to write


But I [G] only hear the fridge and two cats in a fight


oh I'm [Am]starin’ at blank paper as it nears midnight


and it [F]seems the notes just [G]don’t sound [C] right




.






[C] waiting for my pen and paper to dance


but they're[G] just victims of this circumstance


it's like [Am]my mind's held captive in a cryptic trance


and it [F]seems that a song [G]doesn't have a [C]chance


.




Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame


so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong



just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long


.




[C]been 3 days now, but feels more like a year


seems the [G]only thing that’s flowing is ice cold beer


oh I'm [Am] waiting now for the words to appear


but my [F] imagination has [G]somehow disap[C]peared


.






Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame


so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong


just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long