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(10 replies, posted in Recording)

Piri, from that opening line “One day you fall into the trap the way that I did” your song took me on a journey that opens up lots of questions. I guess when he talks about you, he is talking about the you being him? That is what I like in a song that tells a story which keeps you guessing. The other person won't take her back like the person telling story did in the song. I guess he is talking in the past tense. A self-centered lady all for herself taking a person for a ride and yet there is a besotted man who wanted to have another go. A man caught in a trap clever song. Sounds like she is an alluring woman who is really poison in my head who has trapped many a man possibly?   Excellent lyrics through the whole song. The chorus works really good.

It's the trap laid before.

When you walk through any door.

And you fall into the mire up to your neck.     

452

(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Thank you, Roger, that is real good having a birthdate for chordie.  Also thank you to Per.  Twenty on October 25th a good age to reach as at that time of chordie  registration  I should imagine the world wide web would still have been young a new frontier for many at that time in history.     At that time 2002 a computer was something I only used at work I never thought at that time of using one at home.

EB nice blues country guitar and vocal on that one. A double bass player and a drummer using brushes and you would make it the full package on that song.     

454

(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Richard that is genius how you found that site thank you. I think it will be safe to infer that December 8th, 2002, is the date chordie kicked into action or had people responding to it online and use that as its birthdate.

455

(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

An excellent bit of research there Richard. I wonder if there is any more info on the start date of chordie or is it a trade secret???

456

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you, Jan and Phill, for giving my rough recording a listen and comment. Here I am recording a song with a young talented guitar player who has no aspirations to be a professional musician doing an anti phone song recorded on a phone. Never thought I would use the word moderation when it comes to phones it reminds me of my mother saying to me drink alcohol in moderation  when I was young. Since my friends daughter has ended up in hospital due to her smartphone use I have become very aware of smartphone addiction in all age groups.     

457

(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Good one Doug, I guess the founder of chordie would have had to do plenty of researched to make sure everything was legit before launching. On my short time here I have loved the names people have given themselves. Love to hear from some of the old time chordie characters if their still out there. One of the many characters that have encouraged me a lot in my short time here is Bill Craig. It has been a while since Bill has posted if your still out there Bill pop in and say hi.

Jandle, good choice of song. You do it good.
Grah, hope you get over Covid soon.  Good cover only thing lacking was a harmonica solo. Your guitar and voice and guitar worked good in the true Blues tradition.

neophytte wrote:

Also added this one from Crowded House - https://youtu.be/Dv9RVOJ-YQY  unfortunately was trying out a new mic, which gave a phaser style sound to the clip, which doesn't sound too good.

Has the word road in it.

Cheers

Richard

A good Kay One W One  (Kiwi) and Ozzy song Richard I like your version.     

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(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Thank you, guys, for your info so far.  So our man from Bonnie Scotland upyerkilt (Ken) 'Unofficial king of Scotland' at the moment is on record as been the first known  to post on chordie. So if your out there I salute you upyerkilt and if you do read this please pop back and say hi. I see jets 60 joined in March of 2006 a little bit after  upyerkilt. If you have some memories of the first people to inhabit habit chordie that would be interesting. Looks like Phill and Roger came to chordie in its early days so both can claim to be here for a good part of its history. I’m thinking that it could probably be that chordie could date back maybe to somewhere in the first years of this century. BTW I came to chordie as a result of easybeat who joined chordie  in 2010 encouraging me  to check it out in 2015. At that time there was a bigger number of people posting from diverse backgrounds. Maybe the founder or founders can give us the start date??

461

(19 replies, posted in About Chordie)

A simple question could someone tell me how old is chordie please???? 

462

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

A nice cold Heineken Lager Beer please. I'm going to buy some crisps next time I'm in the Supermarket as Phills sandwich combo sounds good to me.     Welcome back Joeyjoeyjoey.

463

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you Piri my brawd glad the lyrics make sense.  I look forward to hearing if my rough recording which lacks a bit of polish on the vocal side, but a good guitarist works or misses the mark?

464

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you, Jim. When Ryan offered to do the guitar for me on this song, I knew he would be good despite my vocal short comings, and he delivered with his good playing. The song came about after a sweet young girl I know has ended up in hospital due to problems around her smartphone addiction causing her to have an eating disorder.  It is also an observation of mine when out and about noticing young people in groups many are focused on their devices not communicating or talking to or with each other and not seeing what's going on around them. I will put the lyrics down below of my song.
 
                                   Put Down The Phone

I don’t need to be glued to a phone screen all day.

Maybe it‘s because I’m old and I‘ve  been brought up in a different way.

Hey kid can’t you see your glued to that screen all day.

It seems to me as though its taking your communication away.

I wish you could just put down the phone leave it alone for a minute or two.

Just take some time.

Just maybe have a talk or two.

Put down the phone and lets look around and roam.

Put down the phone.

There are other possibilities.

Put down the phone.

There’s lots more going on.

I know your anxious because your waiting for a call.

Your  life’s tied up on that screen.

But believe me there is more to life than stuck on that screen.

I wish you could learn to dream about other things.

And see the possibilities.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Leave it alone.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Leave it alone.

You got a lot more that you can do with your life.

There’s things out there  that you got to see.

I don’t need a phone maybe  cause its a fact of age.

But then look at me.

I’m happy.

Because I don’t need that technology.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

I know it seems easy because I’m older and I don’t need that machine.

But see that’s why I’m happy.

Happy baby because I don’t need that technology.

That’s why I’m happy.

I don’t need that technology.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

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(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good song Jim. Many a top song hasn't had a chorus.     

466

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Here is a song called Put Down The Phone  which I hope the song tells the story in a good way in this rough recording. Thank you, Ryan, for playing the guitar for me on this one as I know it must have been hard for you to work around my weird vocal delivery and my poor guitar playing instructions. So your playing was exceptional despite me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KigxGyQ5Eoo

neophytte wrote:

Dancing in the dark: https://youtu.be/9aox2lsj7F0 has the word 'help' in it ... (not home like I said in the video).

Cheers

Richard

Good one Richard your guitar has an upright piano sound coming through which I like on this one. It's one of those songs in a pub singalong setting if people had a lyric sheet, I could imagine them singing along with you and it would sound great with your lead vocals and guitar as done on this video.     

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim it is good to hear your rendition of your well written song. I would love to hear Marty Stuart And His Fabulous Superlatives do this song singing it with a country gospel style, that they use when performing some songs like they do with that song The Unseen Hand.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jim that is a top piece of song writing.  Here is a rough idea of how I hear it in my head. I will take it down after a few days as I know my recording of the first part of your song isn't very good.
https://soundcloud.com/eatleville/whispering-love     

470

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

Beautiful sentiments Jeff.     

Thank you, Richard, for checking my videos out. I hope it inspires people to have a go and make videos and music better than what I can do.     

472

(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

In the Maori language, The Queen is known as Kotuku, which means "the white heron", a cherished bird rarely seen in New Zealand. She was our head of state here in New Zealand a role she handled incredibly well. It is sad that our Queen has passed on it feels like losing a member of the family.  I wish Charles all the best as our King.     

Thank you, Jan and Jim for taking time to have a listen and give some feedback. Richard Morse if you are still out there in Chordie land I wish you all the best.     

Richard and Uncle Joesband great to see your videos on here. I have had to more of less stop playing guitar a health thing. So I will put up a song I wrote three years back, "Mountains To Sea."  I hope it makes sense as it's about the weird way songs come to me sometimes.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jua53gh04NY

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff you have transformed your poem into a real good folk song.