spanish pipedream  john prine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZkfqWEXdx-I&t=5s     

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This is a quick take of the song I wrote called Madrid.

Apologies for my singing and playing - but I really do like this song.


Thanks for listening and please let me know what you think please.

Jim

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997963271/madrid 

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Jan
Thanks for the kind words. 
My only regret is that I can't sing like you and the others on here. 
I think it is a good song, but I will probably butcher it in recording it.
(But I will give it a go anyway)

So good to hear from you  - maybe you could put up a song also - we all love to listen to that great voice !


Jim     

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jddlwlr

Thanks for giving the song a look.  Thanks for liking it.
I am so glad that you joined the forum.... I think you will enjoy the discussions and posts of cool songs. Many different personalities on here - makes it great !

Thanks again, hope you continue to post.

Jim     

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Peatle and Phill

Muchas gracias !!

I hope to get a recording up soon.
Phill - I never thought of doing that - reading bottom up -  very cool way to look at a song- thanks for letting me know about that.

Thanks again my friends!

Jim     

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Well since nobody is doing much on chordie these days... I thought I'd take a shot at writing a song.

Why did I write it about Madrid ?  IDk - but I plan on going there in the next 16 months ! (on my Bucket List!)

So here it is....

Madrid   by Jim Kenyon   


Verse 1


.


[Em]she said “come to me baby, as fast you can


I [D] need some lovin’, need to hold my man


So I [Em] flew to Madrid in the dead of the night


as[D] velvet darkness [C] turned to morning [Em]light


.




Verse 2


.


[Em]a journey to memories that were left behind


In [D] the city of passion and Rioja wine


I [Em] came through the clouds towards the Spanish sun


to [D]mend a heart back to [C] where we had [Em] begun


.


Chorus


[Am] walking the streets of Madrid, where lovers roam


We [Em]talked about the future, and going home


a[Am]long the way, we’ll find ourselves again


In the [B7]whispers of love, but you [Am] never can know [Em]when







Verse 3


.


[Em]when she loves, she loves, when she cries she cries


When [D]she left me in L.A., she never said good bye


she [Em] headed for Madrid, to find a new life it seemed


but [D] it only broke her heart and [C] shattered all her [Em] dreams


.




Chorus


[Am] walking the streets of Madrid, where lovers roam


We [Em]talked about the future, and going home


a[Am]long the way, we’ll find ourselves again


In the [B7]whispers of love, but you [Am] never can know [Em]when


.




outgo:  Slower )


a [Am]long the way, we’ll find ourselves again


In the [B7]whispers of love, but you [Am]never can know [Em] when








Thank you Jan     

OK

Her is my recording of the song I wrote.
Apologies for my lack of musical abilities. smile

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … the-covers

Hope you like it

Jim 

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Thanks Phill

I'll give it a shot......  but  my abilities to sing and play are limited ---

I will try to get it done tomorrow.
Thanks you for the kind words.

Happy Spring to you and Ann!!
Jim     

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Nice poem Peatle !

Reminds me of the song Mr. Bojangles by Jerry Jeff Walker
Cheers
Jim     

flower
hello
water
pieces     

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Great performance - love it!!   Superb lyrics.     Music was absolutely fab and I am glad to hear your voice is back !   Looking forward to many new recordings.  Way to go Graham et al absolute joy to listen to!! 

Cheers   Jim     

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Thanks Jan

Try to get up soon - so busy working around house right now

Jim     

Jan
Thank you....

Some of the pics were - but I made the video myself

Jim     

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i wasn't happy about the lyrics of this song - So I re-wrote it.
I took down the old post.
I will try to record it someday soon.



Beneath the Covers    By   Jim Kenyon


(Verse 1)


.


[C]In her self-made studio, she [F]weaves nighttime [C] magic


[C] slender fingers picking notes so [F]elegantly [C]perfect


A voice [F] smooth and sweet, a smile slightly ro[C]mantic


[G] a canvas of others [F] dreams, and hers, I sus[C]pect


.






(Verse 2)


[C] hiding her emotions, she [F] plays some borrowed [C]songs


[C]far from the spotlight it[F]seems that she wants [C]more


As she [F] sings, her eyes offer glimpses into her [C]soul


[G] her past, a mystery andher [F]future, still un[C]sure


.




Chorus


[F]a voice that cradles timeless words of Folds and [C] Prine


As she [F] sings songs of fate and love not meant to [C] be


soft [F] melodies help her through what she can’t [C] explain


be[G]neath the covers, she [F]sets her loving heart [C] free


be[G]neath the covers, she [F] sets her loving heart [C] free


.


( Verse 3)


.



[C ]Hidden in her heart are [F]promises lost to [C] time


[C]seems there’s stories yet un[F] told in her [C] songs


Her words [F] weave a tapestry of life in the [C] night


[G] secrets kept while [F]searching for where she be[C]longs.


.






Chorus


[F]a voice that cradles timeless words of Folds and [C] Prine


As she [F] sings songs of fate and love not meant to [C] be


soft [F] melodies help her through what she can’t [C] explain


be[G]neath the covers, she [F] sets her loving heart [C] free


be[G]neath the covers, she [F] sets her loving heart [C] free


.






outgo


soft [F] melodies helping her through what she can’t [C] explain


be[G]neath the covers, she [F] sets her loving heart [C] free


Slower


she’s [G]beneath the covers, [F] chasing her desti[C]ny


very slow 


be[G]neath the covers, she [F] sets her loving heart [C] free




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ditto Peatle !

New Zealand at it's finest right there boys !
Now it's Jan's turn smile     

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that's really, really good EB   I Love it.  You are such a terrific writer - your wit and wisdom are synonymous !

Jim     

Let us know what you think !

Thanks for giving it a listen.

https://youtu.be/fheKLUJfjBA 

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Peatle
That was soooo good!!!   
I really enjoyed it - lovely place to live - and the uniqueness of the video is really cool. 
Way to go - thanks for sharing !

Cheer!!
Jim     

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Thanks EB

it was thought provoking

Cheers
Jim     

Apologies for the singing and playing   It was a quick take on computer mic.

All comments appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … f-you-dare

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My niece just came home from 6 months of treatment ( 13 days in the hospital, 13 weeks in residential, and 7 weeks in partial hospitalization.)

She was a real trooper - and has now re-entered ninth grade to get her life gong again.
First three days have gone great - hoping that it continues down a favorable path.

I was thinking today of what it was like for her and all the other like her with such problems.

So I wrote this song today, thinking about her.



Help Me, If  You Dare                by Jim Kenyon


Verse 1


.




[C] In the silence of the deep dark [F] night


[C]Demons creeping just out of [F] sight,


[C]In the shadows of my weary[F]mind


[D]Fear has me nearly [G]paralyzed




Verse 2


.


[C]Beware of eyes where[F] truth's concealed


[C] promised visions that are [F]never real


[C] Whispers dancing to the [F] Devil’s song


[D] a symphony of lies and [G] life gone wrong


.


Chorus


.


[F]Who’s out there that [C] hears me


[F]Who’s out there that [C] sees me


[F] Is there anyone left that [C]really cares


[F] help me, help me [G]please, if you [C]dare


.


Verse 3


.





[C]Every day's a struggle, need to [F] break this fall


[C]Seems every road I travel, has a [F] 12 foot wall


[C]Hope slips through my fingers like [F]hourglass sand


[D] I once had dreams but now I don’t know [G]who I am


.


Chorus


.


[F]Who’s out there that [C] hears me


[F]Who’s out there that [C] sees me


[F] Is there anyone left that [C]really cares


[F] help me, help me [G]please, if you [C]dare




outgo




Slow


[F] if there's anyone left that [C]really cares


[F] help me, help me [G]please, if you [C]dare


[F] is there's anyone left that [C]really cares


[F] help me, help me [G]please, if you [C]dare




really slow


[F] help me, help me [G]please, if you [C]dare



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Brian

Brilliant piece of writing.... methinks in the end it was death in the fast lane all along.
Might wonder if any of those men she slept with ended up in a similar way.

Cheers

Jim     

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Phill

Clever - I love it!

that can't be about you !

JIm     

Phil

LOL


Actually, I was doing both.  I would cast out into the surf - set the pole  in the holder and sit in my chair and read or play my small martin that I bring to the shore. Also an occasional beverage !

I was actually fishing when she came along. Most of the story is made up, but she was definitely a different women.  She did have two oysters that somehow melded together - and she did ask about a pearl inside.   She started talking about visions and energy - saying she was looking for a sign from her mother.  She was really an interesting woman.  When she left, I was sitting there thinking about her and what she said - and then it occurred to me that I never even asked her what her name was. During the whole week I kept watch - but never saw her again.

Hence - the song.  smile
Thanks for giving it a read.

Jim