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Piri  that line in your poem
Not like me, I just grate
I think that line could about me mate
LOL

After the poetry flood
I’m clearing out my dam
When it comes to poetry
I’m just a ham
Thank you Piri
Your the man
Piri who could be better than
John Paul George and Ringo
It could be you
When you write your next song
Bingo legs 11
Wearing shorts in summer and denim jeans in winter
Your next song or a poetic number
It will be a winner
We could keep this post going up until next winter
If I keep replying like this
I'm sure it will feel like to others that a I'm bad splinter
As long as your next song is not John Lennons "Revolution Number 9"
A song that would be a waste of time
You will do better than that of course
Thats all that I could get to rhyme time and nine
Now come on everybody write us another line

Great poem Piri your poem is pure comedic magic not voodoo.

A bit of light to brighten up the dark you hit the mark

Hit the ball right on the mark

A clever lark you made it look like a entertaining walk in the park

You drink from the cup of clever words

Welcome to land of the absurd

Its better to be in the absurd than in the main herd

You become your own beast

And  you get to procure some good words

That ferment like yeast

On a crusty bit of excitement or a bit of laughter

Use your words like you do

Word sharks are my scene

As long as its not too unkind and obscene

Use your words loud and proud

Who knows it might help someone remove a cloud

Having said that there are some arrogant poets

Who think they’re  up there on a celestial cloud

In that case I take humble instead of proud

The pen and the tongue can produce some fun

Tap dancing on keyboards sending words to the main herd

Welcome to the land of the absurd

Fermentation of the yeast makes the dough rise

The yeast is words that gets me excited and ready to rise in the morning

And  those many Archimedes lightbulb  moment under the shower

The power that drives words and ideas into my head

That’s about all I can offer at this moment to this thread

Its most probably after midnight and you wont read this until you get out of bed

My midday is your midnight.

If you find some words in the middle of the night

Turn on the light and write

I hope I got that right

I don’t wont you to make Ann angry and give her a fright

In the mean time too those at  the top of the world have a goodnight

May you all wake up early healthy and bright

How bout a song  Paddy me boy about coming home to a good family home like dis one.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfwJgcwE5PY     

Cheers Piri and Jim for thank you your kind comments. That recording was made back around about 2009. Piri the guitarist he was real good player and so was his brother who played  the bass on there. I can't play the piano and keyboards like that now as I don't have dexterity in my fingers anymore. In hindsight I wish I had given the sax player a bit more to play but the trumpet player and drummer picked it up real good. The sound engineer was bang on and made it sound better than what it was. The painting of a beach was done by Nancy Doughty who was a teacher and artist who also was my Aunty. PJ  Shutlar is a local who I know very well it is the name I use do my art under.

Grah your band playing with just those two guitars and a Cajon with vocals sounded good. I guess doing it like that would be less gear to cart around to the gig easier setup and so on???     

Piri when I was a kid I use to do a bit of the Mamas and Papas California Dreaming in my head. By the time I had grown up and I had actually got to California those American girls were the last thing on my mind. Though I did go out with a Texas Gal for a little while many years back she was a bit of fun and also not what she appeared..  That was in Sydney in another time and part of another chapter in my life. When I met her and started going out for a little bit with her she omitted to tell me an important fact that she was married to a man in the USA. Without going into detail another Supertramp Song Lyric from Take The Long Way Home . Thank you for putting me onto  the Roger Hodgson videos 
  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmWC5dGVvH4

There are times that you feel you're part of the scenery
All the greenery is comin' down, boy
And then your wife seems to think you're part of the furniture
Oh, it's peculiar, she used to be so nice

Jim, with all plastic inside fish now that and mercury we got think what’s in the fish we eat  from the sea or rivers. Where my 102 year old mum was brought up a little Island called Ovalau part of Fiji, fishing in our family village was very much a community affair.

Kiwi’s use to eat a lot takeaway British style fish and chip years ago but now they tend to eat other things. After the Fastfood invasion from overseas many of our local kids diets and health went downhill fast. Mac Donalds, Pizza Hutt , Kentucky Fried all over NZ now. The other things is Chinese and Indian plus Turkish Kebab style takeout food all over NZ, Many restaurants  here also do a big trade not in inhouse eating but Uber Eats.

For breakfast I usually have a cup of tea some fruit. I also have toasted Vogel toast bread a mixed grain bread sometimes with egg  or occasionally tomato for breakfast. Though if in a rush I will have the Vogel toast with  bit of vegetable margarine and marmite or maybe a nice spread of Marmalade on my vogels.

Richard  your folk club on video comes across  as having  a good loyal supportive crowd . Long live Folk music made  by real people like yourself.

Grah that sounded good looks like you have a good live active music scene happening in your part of the world. Was it easy to find your bass player and drummer or did it take sometime????  They are a good find and work in perfectly with you.     

Some good tucker running around there mate. I wonder if our mate Robert is getting into training for the next Chicken Roundup Comp.    Here is a quick training tip for you attached.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_geYLtrUGLU