3,976

(12 replies, posted in Poems)

marcalan,

apologies as i've been away from my post for a while.

where the poem is excellent, and the pro's and meter are also excellent, i dont feel you need to insult or offend any other members or moderators to get yourself noticed! i like most other members who have been on chordie a while know your avatar and will read your words. but it seems it's the same few who take the time to comment, which is sad. i wish more members would take the time. unfortunately they may not for fear of getting abused.

i would ask you though, in the nicest way possible to keep your language in the polite as we are encouraging youngsters to follow these simple guidelines when posting their poems and songs.


this is a great piece of work

phill

3,977

(20 replies, posted in Poems)

Hi Lena,

It's nice to get a little catchphrase you can repeat, I never can so I'm always looking for a title!

But this is so good, we've had a few discussions about the good old days, when the written word evokes memories (for me anyway) of the fifties, hot summers cold winters, playing cricket on the beach, and just going out for a spin in the car cos we didnt have TV....and all the world seemed friendly.
Thanks for the memory

Phill

3,978

(36 replies, posted in Electric)

hi jerome,

i've been looking for a new guitar for about a year (i'm not easily swayed!) i looked at ibanez as i wanted a guitar with a tremelo. i've had a strat for 30 years and never been completely happy with it! i tried just about all the guitars in south wales, and in the shop in swansea in particular...(i play lefty by the by), i'd seen this tele and i thought...nah! but having reached the end of their stock i said ok pass it over. as soon as i picked it up i knew i'd met my new life-long partner. it felt right in my hands it nestles nicely into my belly and it plays like a dream. no trem but i get a crisp sound i've been looking for, for ages, along with a sweet mellow sound when required.

all i can suggest is...try one, if it fits; buy it. if not get a gibby.

phill

3,979

(8 replies, posted in Electric)

hi crevs,

as loop pedals go, you might like to check out russ hardings web page, where he uses a loop pedal to great effect, it's on video, and it's worth checking out. iechyd dda

phill

3,980

(26 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i'll go to that concert too! there have to be enough chordie members to fill a medium sized venue?

helena, oops! sorry about the chorus opening...senior moments all round, keeps us all on our toes?

so, we've done some ballads, we've done a rocker...any suggestions where we go next?

ps. doesnt russ sound angelic?....yeah right! cool

phill

3,981

(25 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i dont agree with this "best bassist/guitarist/drummer...whatever" but surely the top of the pile must be...chris squire of yes  he plays bass and lead at the same time?

but surely if your taste is heavy rock your choice will be different to someone who prefers country, or jazz. the question is moot.


phill

3,982

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

thanks helena,

grand praise indeed from the mistress of the story poem

phill

3,983

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

hi jeff,

i see you cant find a tune, well hows about this, played in a fulsom prison blues rhythm...



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ps. great story well told

phill

3,984

(23 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny,

been away my friend so now i'm seeing this. it did make my laugh, i chuckled till my chuckle muscle cramped.

very tongue-in-cheek. excellently written. it doesnt need a bridge in my opinion but to diversify it a bit you could maybe change key for a solo. it would be interesting if you went down a semi-tone? or just added an alternate chord sequence? just thoughts, not criticism.
is this the product of a miss-spent youth?

hope your well over there in canada.

phill

3,985

(7 replies, posted in Electric)

hi shaunm,

i also use a boss me-50 which i find ticks all the boxes for me. i've tried zoom and a few stomps and even a cry baby wah-wah many years ago.

i mainly use the reverb and chorus pedals as i play a lot of rhythm during my shows, and the distortion boost is there for solo's and general rock.

as russ said you need to explore it's no good just trying one thing and throwing it to the back of the toy box.

but ultimately, it's your choice, if it dont fit right, it wont sound right.

phill

3,986

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny, always a pleasure to hear from you. well thanks for that, i hope to be putting up some more new ones in the not too distant future. to be honest, i feel that i can only put up songs on here that have a strong story or is meaningful. some of my songs are not, so you wont see them, but you may hear them on my-space or sound click.

hi buvvy, ethereal....is that swearing?  thanks anyway

phill

3,987

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i had a little giggle while i read this. a lot of double meanings, i think...i could be wrong. like it. more please.

phill

3,988

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

thanks guys, it's a kind of true story, but i think that's what a writer does, he watches, observes then writes down what he (or she...sorry) sees. and if the writer is good, people enjoy what they read.

long live the bard

phill

3,989

(6 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)

hi & thanks geo, but i should have mentioned that i need the UK value.

phill

3,990

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi lena, it began life as a song about a 19th century sailing ship that gets becalmed in the "doldrums?" i think that's an area of the caribbean? but that didn't really work so i found the fishing line (no pun intended). i was thinking about the cornish fishermen, or any of the south wales fishing ports, but bristol fitted best. i dont even know if you can get becalmed in the bristol channel?

hi geo, yes the water does tend to get very cold in the bristol channel, though it's more likely you'd die of pollution poisoning than the cold or drowning!

hi ark, while i was in spain, i walked along the marina looking for a yacht called coralina....i didn't find one though. maybe next year?

thanks to all

phill

3,991

(6 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)

Can anyone give me a heads-up to the selling value of a Fender Strat left hand 1972? I've had it since new and I've just bought a Telecaster, so I've got too many guitars in the house (3 electric, 2 6 string acoustic, 1 12 string acoustic and a bass! my wife's going off her head. Any help will be nice

Phill

3,992

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

hi C34 and welcome to the chordie poetry section. thanks for this your 1st entry, hope to see more of you and your work. please feel free to comment and advise your fellow members.

nice write

phill

3,993

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

I was born and raised in a village out-side Llanelli called Llwnhendy. It was a farming and mining community, and as a child I remember the old men that had gone through the wars and then down the mines, their lungs were ruined by the gas and the coal dust. This is dedicated to them....

The Gate.   By Phill Williams.

Who stands there by the garden gate?
In his old brown shoes and his awkward gait.
He leans upon the post to breathe.
He gasps and coughs and wipes his eyes.

“I've spent many years digging coal",  he says.
“And dragging it out of that dark dingy hole.
So my lungs are now filled with that old demon dust.
It's a matter of time till I'm dust my-self.
But I've had a good life, a good wife and two sons.�
And many friends came when they buried that man.
They sang hymns, prayed and wept, and it rained for a while.
Sure his old wrinkled face, up in heaven, did smile.
As they spoke of their memories of the man.
The good things he did, his kindness, his charm.

And the gate stands there lonely, recalling maybe.
When the old man was young, when his lungs let him breathe.
No stopping- no time to open that gate.
He'd just take a short run and jump over it.
First girlfriend, first kiss, holding hands on the lawn.
And the day they came past in her white wedding gown.
And the day with the new born sons in his arms.
Then the day they brought their loves to meet with their dad.

Now the gate stands there lonely, the old hinges creak.
The metalwork's rusted, it hangs by a thread.
Until it falls to the floor and it's swept to one side.
The world must go on, though everything dies.

May 7th 2010.

3,994

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

as per your request kenny, you will now find this song on myspace...click left

phill

3,995

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny, thanks for the thumbs up, i'm working on the recording as we speak...

phill

3,996

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

as it happens tony, i dont play flute either...chuckles

ian anderson has one of the all time greatest voices in my opinion, if i had but a little of his talent...

or for that matter, elton john's, i could go on...but i wont there are so many singers, songwriters and entertainers i admire, i'd be happy with some of their money...any offers?

3,997

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi mark,

i had a listen on my space and found my-self singing the bass line and playing slap drums on my legs. i like this very much.

phill

3,998

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

OK, this is a very simple song:  D-to D add a Db Bass - then D add a B bass - you get the idea?

I recorded this in Eb, as D was too low, I think Eb is also too low! it'll be on My-Space ASAP.

This began on May 1, as I was brushing my teeth ready for bed. The first line came to me, but I was too tired so I wrote the rest next morning. It wasn't meant as a sad song, or as a fisherman's shanty! Story is; early 20th century fishermen (from Bristol?) find themselves becalmed in the Irish sea, they decide to row for home. One lad has got his young lady in the family way, and they plan to marry next day. Sad ending, they meet a steamer coming from Bristol in the fog....

3,999

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Bristol Bound.Undefined


[D] The skipper called “we'll [D/C#] row the boat� .


[D/B] Ten days from Bristol and [*] fish on the floor.


Not a [D] breath of wind to [Em] fill the sail.


Oh! [Gm] Davy Jones; bring us [A] home this day.


(repeat same chord sequence for all verses)




Where our wives are waiting on the dock.


Babes in arms for a sign they watch.


And the bells of the church are calling shrill.


“Ah! Davy Jones; bring them home this day� .


[soc]


(CHORUS)




So, [G] row boys, [Gm] row boys.


For this [D] sea has claimed your [Em] friends and your kin.


[G] Sing boys, [Gm] sing boys.


And [D] pray for a home blowing [G] wind.


And [Gm] pray for a Bristol bound [D] wind.


[eoc]




We've worked on these seas since time has began.


Generations of seamen, cant work on the land.


A place on the boat from father to son.


And when the sea takes my body, my son will step up.




But today I must row for there is no fair wind.


And tomorrow I wed so my child has a name.



And Lord may I hear my son's hungry wail.


Oh! Davy Jones, bring me home this day.




[soc]


(REPEAT CHORUS)


[eoc]


As night starts to fall and the light fails us too.


A breeze from the west, are we saved all this crew.


As we row up the Severn, pass the worm to the north.


See the lights of the taverns, taste the ale in the jar.




The skipper says “row lads our homes are in sight� .


“We'll unload this fish and drink beer tonight� .


  We're rowing in darkness, no light from the moon.


And the deep comes to claim us, there's a ship in the gloom.




[soc]


(CHORUS)






We [G] rowed boys, [Gm] rowed boys.


For this [D] sea has claimed all our [Em] friends and our kin.


[G] Swim boys, it's [Gm] grim boys.


[D] Oh for the home blowing [G] wind.


[Gm] Oh for a Bristol bound [D] wind.


[eoc]



Words & Music by Phill Williams.  1st May 2010.

4,000

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

for my part, i'd like to thank everybody. coralina was an easy song to put words to. it's funny how we were both on the same track content-wise with-out actually discussing what path we were taking.

i wrote the words, by the way, as an office dwellers day dream about his sailing yacht somewhere in the caribean...it's not about a woman or sex, though i guess a 30 foot yacht might be a bit of a babe-magnet?

phill